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You spit first
no dr, crew, and hate votes
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10-12 lines
You spit first
no dr, crew, and hate votes
ect
aight then. i will be on later to check in...yeah?
yall gonna finish this
checkin in
^^i thouught u was neva gonna show up
iight waiting till u drop
Dear skitzo,
why you trying to battle...you need to earn repect?/
ive read your garbage man...u a broke deck ...press eject/
this rappin thing aint you...be a MAN and just give up/
but i guess you cant...with your nuts tucked in your butt/
ive got u scared to spit...this battle man i own it/
so bend over for daddy son and smile just like a donut/
please dont trip of this...but im sorry your a faggot/
i heard the whole pandoras box all like to fuck like rabbits/
i thought they banned gay mairrage?...i guess you didnt get the letter/
oh P.S. tell you mom she owes me 5 and i like the red one better/
love,
B. Whitley
They did banned gay marriage it was all over the news
You were the first one to know since they banned you too
I have seen you a lot Mr. Whitley over and over again
Cuz you like to B.-Friendly wit homosexual men
You remind me of a “pig” ass bitch talking about “donuts”
Homo thug lost his “manhood” when he finished holding no “nuts”
Noweight low class, sho’ nuff no skills to show
Hold up you suck dawg and now you know
Love? love who? there’s proof right there, he’s gay that’s all
But he does like being a “man”, cuz he enjoys “grabbin his balls”
woahhh skitzo good feeding lol you got him man.... good punches structure an flow....
the other dued... Clever of you to write a letter but why would you tell him to bend over an call him a fag lmao i like the last ending of yours with ps haha good one
v/skitzo
v/skitzo basically he won because of flow structure and the punches.
B.-that "dear skitzo" and love shit was gay structure was wack take out the / and b. had no punches which would might make this battle close.
V/skitzo
basiccly this a no brainer b whitley dogg your alirgth but skitzo took this due to personals and creativity something you lacked B buthe hit harder then you did so there it is
v.skitzo
uppin #1 for some votes 3-0.......................
This was an okay it could have been alot better...but ima have to give this one tO skitzo
Ehhh. this was a pretty weak verse, could have been alot better...structure was off...there really werent any hard punchlines..nothing really to amazing , you had no personals ...your verse was just weak to me , read some tutorials, and learn how to make punchlines..Overall keep it up , and elevate ..Quote:
Originally Posted by B.Whitley
This was a decnt verse...could have been alot better...punchlines were really weak , some were okay, elevate... you had okay personals ...some could have been alittle better..Structure was decent ..Overall keep it up , felt you could have done alot better...Quote:
Originally Posted by Skitzo
Overall vote- Skitzo
Skitzo took this one, no question. Harder hits, more personals, and a lot better structure. B, elevate, man...
I liked this battle both were good but I think Skitzo came harder wit his flow but B.Whitley u did good
uppin # 2................................0-4
i agree skitzo murdered dis nigga....he straight smoked dis cat....betta punches,verse,everything....he was jus on point...good verse skitzoQuote:
Originally Posted by Grand Champ