rile1 vs come get it

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due in 30mins
you spit first

ComeGetIt? hmm u wish u could spit/
I didnt even read urs yet and I already need to take a shit/
to me ur very banal, while im auspicious//
go ahead say it, " why'd Rile1 have to come at me so vicious?"/
sorry dont be jealous that I took all ur bitches/
just to let u know they werent giving my mouth kisses/
treat u like a slave and have u wash my dishes/
remember u only get 3 wishes/
no matter which one u make, my words still leave u in stitches/
I already won this battle so hand over my ritches/

I need to practice my metaphors

i caugth you outside justice
begging for stratchs siting there
like a faget wit ya leg in ya lap
get a shot gun cage in ya back
get ya whole craneum cracked
got on this fourm for the first time
killing this cat i had ta do it in the
day time cause in nigth itll be hard to
find him cause he so black i have nothing
else to say dawg its a wrap

ok..... how many rounds or should ppl start voting??

we need votes

alright then ppl please vote and btw how do u up in a battle?

upping..... damn man where tha ppl at? I wish I could vote so that way I can tell them I have a battle that needs to be voted on sheesh

hey man how long u been writing? cuz really u didnt have any rhymes and barely any good metaphors just wanted to know if ur a newb or sumthing

yo i thought rile 1 won this battle because it seemed like come get it didnt even try but he had some punches nt many though

finally someone votes!! we still need more ppl please vote!!

my vote goes to u guyz suck balls

munky all u do is say that man lol

rile 1 won dont gotta say anythin else

i dont kno who won dis battle sucked

come get it
good stucture nice flow but you have a weak rhyme scheme and you have no complexity its like ya just started rapping or something. work on delivery and wordplay thats all i can really say cause that was weak.

rile1
you also need work but you had like that vicious line that got me you also need to work on punchlines and wordplay, personals n shit and work on ya dilevery and finisher lines cause it was pretty weak overall i think you got this by a little tab bit. peace

finally another vote!! hey ppl check out my battle with BamBam even though its only a day after its sorta better and plus he didnt get my metaphor in it at all see if u can ppl??

Alright this battle wasnt too special. Come-yours was just a little too basic, most of it was a little played and not very personal, try to diss your opponent a little more next time, and also try using some more punches and wordplay.

Rifel-I think you could elevate a bit but then again everybody needs too sometimes. I thought u had a good attemp, got some personals, a few punches. also your stucture wasnt to bad also.

V/Rifel....Overall better verse

cool Shamcobra but next time can ya spell my name right??

No offense but chea ya 'll kno da battle was weak den a mug but yo votes to RILE 1 cuz he had a better verse...not good but better work on ur wordplay, metafors, structure, and punches both of ya'll and stay up cuz u can only get betta...
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Both are Weak, but rile1 was aight...I guess!!! I'd eat you both up

Yo, how do you catch battles? I wanna get a battle popping wit someone.

V/Rile 1

Slick Lyrics nice word play.....

to get a battle started u just ask someone if they want to battle and then get it set up somehow its easy, its just tha writing thats hard

Those two battles were both trash you trashy niggas. You wanna get wreked holla at me its siar bitch print this page so you can remember it holla

wth?? dont call out in a battle!!dammit Im getting popular and ppl are saying I suck wtf?

Kinda weak here, neither of yall came extraordinary with the punches or creativity, structure was aight with both but come's lines were too short and didnt really go no-where, Rile structure was a lil sloppy some lines didnt match the others, judging from punches I say that Rile took this for being more consistant, yall got some space to get better so keep battling and reviewing.

Vote Rile1

Ill poll when you leave an honest vote on the battle in my sig.

peace.

Industry I need more votes to vote on ur battle so yeah just vote man please!?

i say rile 1 won da battle but he wasn't all that either. to be honest both of them where trash. but since i have to choose one rile 1 won.

this battle was wack both of ya need to elavate alout but rile had dis one he had betta disses v/ri rdf