no hate...just a friendly battle...
5-6 bars(10-12 lines)
site rules...crew can vote...we in the same crew...
waitin for ya check in...
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no hate...just a friendly battle...
5-6 bars(10-12 lines)
site rules...crew can vote...we in the same crew...
waitin for ya check in...
this is my check....and heres my verse...no feedin...
I’m murder you lyrically, Shove 5 bars in ya abdomen…
Guaranteed you’ll be in a coffin, while I’m celebrating my win…
I’ma slice ya throat, and contradict what ya wrote…
Putt a stop ta ya career early, like capsizing a boat…
This was just a quick key, and im still overthrowing king…
You were on top, until I took over the game, Like Yao Ming…
I’m not comin hard; I could beat you with ease, you not to me level…
You not the true evil king, that my name nickname aka I’m the devil…
I’m putting an end to this battle; end ya beneath the 6feet deep…
I’m make sure to comfort your mother at the funeral as she weeps…
Just a quick key…haha this was bad…i can do better but I don’t care…we are crew…
uppin....drop ya verse homie...and then uppin for votes...
dis my checkin
all out good battle
my bad i clicked the wrong battle my bad
listen nigga we might be in da same crew/
but i'll still take out da nine and frame you/
i rip out ya tounge so you can't speak/
niigga ya raps like newborn babys they weak/
no condom when i fucked ya mom's so you might be my son/
if rap was like da matrix den i might be da one/
yeh you in my team but da truth is i don't even feel you/
in this battle i'ma treat you like a big roach and i'ma kill you/
i don't play so when i come threw you betta wear a vest ight/
nigga last time i saw you,you was in a dress saying you dress to fight/
face it you can't do nothing you my son/
people shouldn't even vote cause it's a fact i won/
nice verse homie..yppin for some votes.... HA..g/l
EluShun
I’m murder you lyrically, Shove 5 bars in ya abdomen…
Guaranteed you’ll be in a coffin, while I’m celebrating my win…
no
I’ma slice ya throat, and contradict what ya wrote…
no
This was just a quick key, and im still overthrowing king…
You were on top, until I took over the game, Like Yao Ming…
ehh...
I’m not comin hard; I could beat you with ease, you not to me level…
You not the true evil king, that my name nickname aka I’m the devil…
definitly not
I’m putting an end to this battle; end ya beneath the 6feet deep…
I’m make sure to comfort your mother at the funeral as she weeps…
no
evil king
listen nigga we might be in da same crew/
but i'll still take out da nine and frame you/
no
i rip out ya tounge so you can't speak/
niigga ya raps like newborn babys they weak/
ehh...
no condom when i fucked ya mom's so you might be my son/
if rap was like da matrix den i might be da one/
no
yeh you in my team but da truth is i don't even feel you/
in this battle i'ma treat you like a big roach and i'ma kill you/
no
i don't play so when i come threw you betta wear a vest ight/
nigga last time i saw you,you was in a dress saying you dress to fight/
no
face it you can't do nothing you my son/
people shouldn't even vote cause it's a fact i won/
ehh...
Disappointing battle, may be next time both of you should actually try. But I’m going to have to with evil king because his actually flowed. Both of you basically had the same verse, the only thing that stuck out was evil king’s flow. No hate and just elevate.
Vote-evil king
Please return the favor with an honest vote on one of my battles. The one against All cost is most preferred.
votes please
evil king has may vote but u both really sucked
yeah u guys didnt really battle too good but if I could vote it'd be for Evil King better punches and glory, so hes my vote, can u guys vote on tha battles in my sig man ones been going on fer like 2 days now
vote please
EluShun
I’m murder you lyrically, Shove 5 bars in ya abdomen…
Guaranteed you’ll be in a coffin, while I’m celebrating my win…
no
I’ma slice ya throat, and contradict what ya wrote…
no
This was just a quick key, and im still overthrowing king…
You were on top, until I took over the game, Like Yao Ming…
ehh...
I’m not comin hard; I could beat you with ease, you not to me level…
You not the true evil king, that my name nickname aka I’m the devil…
definitly not
I’m putting an end to this battle; end ya beneath the 6feet deep…
I’m make sure to comfort your mother at the funeral as she weeps…
no
evil king
listen nigga we might be in da same crew/
but i'll still take out da nine and frame you/
no
i rip out ya tounge so you can't speak/
niigga ya raps like newborn babys they weak/
ehh...
no condom when i fucked ya mom's so you might be my son/
if rap was like da matrix den i might be da one/
no
yeh you in my team but da truth is i don't even feel you/
in this battle i'ma treat you like a big roach and i'ma kill you/
no
i don't play so when i come threw you betta wear a vest ight/
nigga last time i saw you,you was in a dress saying you dress to fight/
no
face it you can't do nothing you my son/
people shouldn't even vote cause it's a fact i won/
ehh...
Disappointing battle, may be next time both of you should actually try. But I’m going to have to with evil king because his actually flowed. Both of you basically had the same verse, the only thing that stuck out was evil king’s flow. No hate and just elevate.
Vote-evil king
Return the Favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=193876
haha i cant believe this...i was half assin this cuz our old crew just wanted to see us...so....whatever
vote please
I’m murder you lyrically, Shove 5 bars in ya abdomen…
Guaranteed you’ll be in a coffin, while I’m celebrating my win…
^^^THAT DIDNT REALLY RHYME TO SMOOTH-WACK
I’ma slice ya throat, and contradict what ya wrote…
Putt a stop ta ya career early, like capsizing a boat…
^^^DONT GET IT-WACK
This was just a quick key, and im still overthrowing king…
You were on top, until I took over the game, Like Yao Ming…
YAO MING HASN'T TAKEN OVER THE GAME... HOMIE WATCH THE NBA... PICK SOME ONE BETTER TO COMPARE YA SELF TO.... YAO IS KNOWN TO BE NON AGRESSIVE-WACK
I’m not comin hard; I could beat you with ease, you not to me level…
You not the true evil king, that my name nickname aka I’m the devil…
^^^^ COULDA WORDED IT A LIL BETTER- STILL WACK THO
I’m putting an end to this battle; end ya beneath the 6feet deep…
I’m make sure to comfort your mother at the funeral as she weeps…
ONCE AGAIN CAN WORD IT A LIL BETTA-WACK THO
listen nigga we might be in da same crew/
but i'll still take out da nine and frame you/
UHH WEAK BUT BETTA DEN ELUSHUN
i rip out ya tounge so you can't speak/
niigga ya raps like newborn babys they weak/
WEAK
no condom when i fucked ya mom's so you might be my son/
if rap was like da matrix den i might be da one/
OK MAKES SENSE-IM FEELIN THAT
yeh you in my team but da truth is i don't even feel you/
in this battle i'ma treat you like a big roach and i'ma kill you/
WEAK
i don't play so when i come threw you betta wear a vest ight/
nigga last time i saw you,you was in a dress saying you dress to fight/
DATS AN OK LINE
face it you can't do nothing you my son/
people shouldn't even vote cause it's a fact i won/
EHH... ITS AIGHT
DEFINETLEY YA'LL NEED TA ELEVATE BUT MY VOTE=EVIL KING
whatever this site is wack....i was just messin hha..can believe yall takin this shit serious....
I’d appreciate it if one or both of you returned the favor with an honest feedback as well. Don’t be shady.
Evil King - if you vote don't forget to poll it. It'd be most appreciate
elushion i didn't take it serious we in da same team remember
vote please be honest i'll return da favor
One or both of you still owe me a vote or at least feedback on one of my battles if you don't have 100+ votes.
vote please i'll return da favor
Vote Please I'll Return Da Favor
vote please i'll rdf
im going for evil king..... Can you return the favor for the rap_warrior vs siar battle id appreciate it man.. pz
vote please i'll rdf
Then return mine! LOL
I just polled my vote. Now return the favor!
dont have 100 posts yet but evil king got my vote
vote please i'll rdf
[QUOTE=FLYEST NIGGA EVA]I’m murder you lyrically, Shove 5 bars in ya abdomen…
Guaranteed you’ll be in a coffin, while I’m celebrating my win…
^^^THAT DIDNT REALLY RHYME TO SMOOTH-WACK
I’ma slice ya throat, and contradict what ya wrote…
Putt a stop ta ya career early, like capsizing a boat…
^^^DONT GET IT-WACK
This was just a quick key, and im still overthrowing king…
You were on top, until I took over the game, Like Yao Ming…
YAO MING HASN'T TAKEN OVER THE GAME... HOMIE WATCH THE NBA... PICK SOME ONE BETTER TO COMPARE YA SELF TO.... YAO IS KNOWN TO BE NON AGRESSIVE-WACK
I’m not comin hard; I could beat you with ease, you not to me level…
You not the true evil king, that my name nickname aka I’m the devil…
^^^^ COULDA WORDED IT A LIL BETTER- STILL WACK THO
I’m putting an end to this battle; end ya beneath the 6feet deep…
I’m make sure to comfort your mother at the funeral as she weeps…
ONCE AGAIN CAN WORD IT A LIL BETTA-WACK THO
listen nigga we might be in da same crew/
but i'll still take out da nine and frame you/
UHH WEAK BUT BETTA DEN ELUSHUN
i rip out ya tounge so you can't speak/
niigga ya raps like newborn babys they weak/
WEAK
no condom when i fucked ya mom's so you might be my son/
if rap was like da matrix den i might be da one/
OK MAKES SENSE-IM FEELIN THAT
yeh you in my team but da truth is i don't even feel you/
in this battle i'ma treat you like a big roach and i'ma kill you/
WEAK
i don't play so when i come threw you betta wear a vest ight/
nigga last time i saw you,you was in a dress saying you dress to fight/
DATS AN OK LINE
face it you can't do nothing you my son/
people shouldn't even vote cause it's a fact i won/
EHH... ITS AIGHT
v/evil king
(rtf sig)
please vote man i wanna close dis battle already i'll rdf
evil king gets this battle better strucure better verse betterr ryhmes
vote please bh i'll rdf
vote please i'll rdf and bh
vote please i'll rdf bh
voteplease i'll rdf
I’m murder you lyrically, Shove 5 bars in ya abdomen…
Guaranteed you’ll be in a coffin, while I’m celebrating my win…
Great opener nice punchline (way to come after your opponent right of hand)
I’ma slice ya throat, and contradict what ya wrote…
Putt a stop ta ya career early, like capsizing a boat…
okay word play but fake I'm not tryin to hear that
This was just a quick key, and im still overthrowing king…
You were on top, until I took over the game, Like Yao Ming…
Very nice THAT SHIT IS CLOWNIN wonderful word play
I’m not comin hard; I could beat you with ease, you not to me level…
You not the true evil king, that my name nickname aka I’m the devil…
not that great considering what u already put
I’m putting an end to this battle; end ya beneath the 6feet deep…
I’m make sure to comfort your mother at the funeral as she weeps…
good closer
"GREAT VERSE HOMIE"
Vs.
listen nigga we might be in da same crew/
but i'll still take out da nine and frame you/
uhh no offense but if u in the same crew why battle?? Thats not crackin
i rip out ya tounge so you can't speak/
niigga ya raps like newborn babys they weak/
good line but not a great punchline
no condom when i fucked ya mom's so you might be my son/
if rap was like da matrix den i might be da one/
Good word play way to turn it around and hit hard
yeh you in my team but da truth is i don't even feel you/
in this battle i'ma treat you like a big roach and i'ma kill you/
Again we aint tryin to hear about "he in your crew" besides we already know that, from the opening line but nice metaphore
i don't play so when i come threw you betta wear a vest ight/
nigga last time i saw you,you was in a dress saying you dress to fight/
good line like the double standard
face it you can't do nothing you my son/
people shouldn't even vote cause it's a fact i won/
Good closer way to stay confident
Overall...It was kind of a close battle but HONESTLY I'm gonna have to say that Elushun took this one he came off with the punchlines and had way better originality.
But it was a great battle. Looking forward to the rematch.
V/ Elushun