10-14 lines. 30 mins from 2nd person's checkin
Checkin same time.
House rules.
Blind spit, so don't matter who goes first.
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10-14 lines. 30 mins from 2nd person's checkin
Checkin same time.
House rules.
Blind spit, so don't matter who goes first.
Inferno Rage checkin in...let's do it
For some reason it's saying my explaning is to short I've never seen that before...meh whatever I'll post in 30 minutes
ok check, yeah it's to prevent people leaving crap feedback. Make the punches personal ;)
Blind as a bat while I write this in 5 at the max
Fine me a map fuck I'll put some fire to your flag faggot you
nothing you behind me literally still frontin please don't
spit that calico tre pound gun bustin same
raps that I see on the boards cus a dance with a
bitch is the only way you'll get me on the floor VA
SKEZ I don't know what that mean but shit I know what
Rage means it means that my heats just sick my cold
heart speaks and leaves you stiff except for your lower
parts you limp like Paraplegics dick it's like I'm
battling with Christopher Reeves I bet you can't text
no audio you best just stick to the beats
I'M DONE I don't spit 14's it's just not the way rap is it's either 4, 8, 12, 16, you get the drift....
ok changing your profile is not allowed, cos people will think you're a pussy
Today I'm prophetic, I predict Inferno will soon be apologetic
Beggin for the medic to pick him up after he can't walk like a paraplectic
I locked his inferno rage into a cage and burnt every page
of his pre-written shit then watched him choke on stage
It's only fittin this kid's occupation's talent search(1)
Tryina find talent in him is like finding acorns on a birch(2)
I'm bitch-slappin him and his shit-rappin back to Toronto pronto(3)
Cos I seen even kids-crappin all over his style like dogs on lawns yo
Then I'm swiftly crushing mummy's little Prince of Malvern(4)
Cos he's a pussy lightweight like students getting drunk quickly in a tavern(5)
Believin in a win for Inferno's rap technology(6) is like believin in astrology
His flow is weaker than his phsyiology and his verse is bullshit like mythology
(1)see his profile for the Talent search (occupation)
(2)acorns grow on oak trees, not birch trees
(3)his location is Toronto
(4)Biography says "prince of malvern"
(5)British slang, lightweight = gets drunk easily
(6)interests: profile
LOL we both used paraplectic - but since I posted like 1 min after you, you can tell I didn't copy yours (obviously - my usage rhymes). Let the votes roll in.... I'll return the favour! It doesn't matter how many lines you spit as long as it's in the limit
yo hot battle but all and all vaskez took dis one he came wit straghit personals and his punches were consistant so no need for any more talk
V-Vaskez
drop a vote on my battle wit gottagetdem thanx much thanx
bump..............................................
vaskez this was a decent verse...you have come harder before man keep tryin u got this man.....and hey inferno.....ur weak ur stuff doesn't rhyme and so.....for punches srhyme and strucutre.....
v/Vaskez....rtf vs. Gootagetdem on FL first few battles
i got to go wit vaskez he was more consistent and used a little vocab on the kid i like that, inferno rage did drop some preety tight shit though but it just wasn't good enough this time.
v/vaskez rtf holla at my 2 battles on the 1 page aight.100
Blind~as~a~bat while I write this in 5~at~the~maxQuote:
Originally Posted by Da Professor
Fine~me~a~map fuck I'll put some fire~to~your~flag faggot you
nothing you behind me literally still frontin please don't
spit that calico tre pound gun bustin same
raps that I see~on~the~boards cus a dance with a
bitch is the only way you'll get me~on~the~floor VA
SKEZ I don't know what that mean~but~shit I know what
Rage means it means that my heats~just~sick my cold
heart speaks and leaves~you~stiff except for your lower
parts you limp like Paraplegics~dick it's like I'm
battling with Christopher~Reeves I bet you can't text
no audio you best just stick~to~the~beats
I sware to god that was a hate vote cus if you can honestly read this and say I don't rhyme your obviously hatin. Or maybe it's just cus I didn't SHOW you where I was rhyming which was probably it so I apologize if I got your misread.
vaskez got this with a decent verse...i seen better from ya.....inferno you got no flow and ya punches are weak... so for punches rhyme and structure
v/Vaskez
RTF PLEASE !!
Does blind spit mean like nothing to go off just on the spot no ammo creative shit. Apply that to his verse and he's DQ'd, and even if he isn't DQ'd his verse would make no sense going by the rules seeing that he's never seen any of my textQuote:
Blind spit, so don't matter who goes first.
How does any of these lines apply if what you just said that quoted from you above applys. Along with my verse reposted showing you how I flow it cus your obviously rookies and can't figure it out for yourselfs there's NO WAY he won this battle.Quote:
of his pre-written shit...
Cos I seen even kids-crappin all over his style like dogs on lawns yo....
His flow is weaker than his phsyiology and his verse is bullshit like mythology....
:laugh2: Bump that..
Honestly read the whole thing before you vote cus people honestly got things twisted
Who this was a one sided fukin battle Vaskes has this just for the rhymes......but i think he had this battle because he had better flow.....better punches.......better flow.........and good vocab....
i will hit this shit up in a lil return the favor in one of mine and i will hit this up
Rtf !!
Stop bitching you idiot! You're being a dumbass! First of all the one you labelled as a hate vote: lol: a hate vote is when someone hates you and deliberately votes against you regardless of the quality of the verses. NO ONE KNOWS YOU so by definition there CAN BE NO hate votes against you.Quote:
Originally Posted by Inferno Rage
Secondly BLIND SPIT means you cannot see the other person's verse before you post yours so you can't feed off his verse. SO STOP BEING A DUMBASS. LOL me DQ'd? What you're doing is vote-swaying THAT'S what gets you not only DQ'd but banned from the site. So take it the loss like a man and stop bitching when you don't even have a basis for it.
Wu - I'll RTF when I get back to my own comp! I'm away this weekend and on a stupid dial-up connection right now. Will RTF on sunday evening. Peace!
bump #4............................................
bump # 5...........................................
strucutre-inferno rage
vocab-vaskez
context-vaskez
opener-vaskez
ender-inferno rage
punchline-vaskez
overall= my vote goes towards vaskez because i understood his rap and also his punches hit harder RTF man mt battle is in the sig
Inferno I wasnt really feeling your shit. Your style is akward, really throws the flow off cuz you dont have a set rhyme-scheme, you just throwin in the rhymes at random spots in the bars and sentences. Doin that makes it hard to follow the flow..actually there isnt a flow at all. That was the biggest problem, second was punches, those you did attempt werent personal, witty, or all that original.
Vaskez
Your punches were ok, the vocab seemed kind of forced to me though, especially the first 2 bars. The rest flowed pretty good, you had a better rhyme scheme that I could follow. Structure isnt really an issue here. For comin harder with the punches and the reasons stated above...
Overall better was: Vote/Vask
Rtf any open battles of mine plz.
RTF for me please vaskez i need that battle to close up thanks