Iite.. Rules Go..
20 - 30 Lines.
Free Topic.
Check in and spit in 45 min after.
Simple as that..
I Start.. then you spit when I get my shit in.. eZ
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Iite.. Rules Go..
20 - 30 Lines.
Free Topic.
Check in and spit in 45 min after.
Simple as that..
I Start.. then you spit when I get my shit in.. eZ
kk im checking in now.. I'll post my rhyme in 30 - 45... B eZ.. NO HATE VOTES... NO CREW VOTES... FREE TOPIC... GOOD LUCK :shoot:
Oooh, how scary: a teddy with blood on his paws/
Finish me off daddy, go 'head and leave me raw/
Maybe I'll give up, just go home - right/
Your teddy has me shakin in my boots - psych!
Cuz Randomz with his domestic partner on a tandom bike/
And he's never seen a dick that he did not like/
And he ain't clever like me when I smoke on this pipe/
And he likes the little boys, says they tasty and ripe.
He sees this on the screen, at home at his computer/
He lives in the burbs with his mom - his nickname is "Scooter"/
He's got a little sister named Pooky and he wantsta do her/
He's used to seein' his dick covered in a boy's manure.
It's okay Randomz, if these rhymes make you ache/
Find solace in your poster of Justin Timberlake/
When I hit 20 lines I'll give you a break/
But for now I'll fuckin tell ya fuckin suck on my snake/
Go reference your copy of Strunk and White/
Take some lessons, bitch, try and learn to write/
I came up with these rhymes even though I'm white/
Excuse me, time to go hump your mom all night.
why does that strike me as prewritten?? jus a question but i think it takes longer than 4 minuets to type that much
eh yo.
I go by randomz and im lyrically possessed//
i'll run into a gunfight without packing a vest.
I'll sneak up on yu in yur sleep and slit yur throat artistically//
then watch my lil bro while he plays witt his new toy slinky.
I hope yu see the madman that I am//
I'll split yur body into useless segements then eat yu like lamb.
Who the fuck cares who yu are? you mean nothing to me//
battling me has dug up holes in the desert for yu and yur family.
fucking with this cat has lost yu all yur possessions//
I stole yur identity and stuck yu in between dimensions.
yur no where to be found and nobody cares//
yu wont even be acknowledged in yur families prayers.
I wont stop and give yu a chance to take a breath//
DFR shoulda thought bout this before he planned his own death.
All hope dismantles when yu fuck witt me//
yu came to the wrong person if yu were searching for victory.
(this right here's a warning going out to all those who can read.)//
im lyrically possessed my rhymes burn like fire, they'll make yu bleed.
they'll leave a deep cut to remind yu of the mistake yu made in the past//
Im the alpha and the omega.. always first DMR's tha last..
there aint no ending to my existance i'll forever live on//
cuz I fucked yur bitch on yur front lawn.
so now she carries a lil bit of me everywhere that she goes//
Tuff trick thats wut happens when you date hoes.
Dont think of aborting the fetus that devellopes in her womb//
cuz it'll ressurect and vanish like Jesus did out of his tomb.
when yu least expect it he'll pop up when yur asleep//
he'll whisper "randomz" while he cuts yur throat deep!.
So check who yu fucking witt DFR..//
Before yur life drastically ends at the end of this bar.!
Done And Done.. Let The People Decide How This BAttle Ends.. B eZ Good Stuff..
nah yo.. he didnt pre write.. his lines were too simple..
Ouch! Nah, didn't prewrite...I just pasted it to our first forum first, BIATCH
Lets get the votes upping.. who won this battle.. help us out and we'll return the favour.. thx..
Oooh, how scary: a teddy with blood on his paws/
Finish me off daddy, go 'head and leave me raw/
---wack open line
Maybe I'll give up, just go home - right/
Your teddy has me shakin in my boots - psych!
---not feelin the teddy dawg
Cuz Randomz with his domestic partner on a tandom bike/
And he's never seen a dick that he did not like/
----nice punch
And he ain't clever like me when I smoke on this pipe/
And he likes the little boys, says they tasty and ripe.
---wack punch
He sees this on the screen, at home at his computer/
He lives in the burbs with his mom - his nickname is "Scooter"/
---ok dat wuz wack i fe
He's got a little sister named Pooky and he wantsta do her/
He's used to seein' his dick covered in a boy's manure.
---that line scars me
It's okay Randomz, if these rhymes make you ache/
Find solace in your poster of Justin Timberlake/
--nice punch
When I hit 20 lines I'll give you a break/
But for now I'll fuckin tell ya fuckin suck on my snake/
---gay....literally
Go reference your copy of Strunk and White/
Take some lessons, bitch, try and learn to write/
---aight but not a punch
I came up with these rhymes even though I'm white/
Excuse me, time to go hump your mom all night.
----weak ender
vs.
I go by randomz and im lyrically possessed//
i'll run into a gunfight without packing a vest.
---aight opener
I'll sneak up on yu in yur sleep and slit yur throat artistically//
then watch my lil bro while he plays witt his new toy slinky.
----wack
I hope yu see the madman that I am//
I'll split yur body into useless segements then eat yu like lamb.
----wack
Who the fuck cares who yu are? you mean nothing to me//
battling me has dug up holes in the desert for yu and yur family.
--ight
fucking with this cat has lost yu all yur possessions//
I stole yur identity and stuck yu in between dimensions.
---nice word play
yur no where to be found and nobody cares//
yu wont even be acknowledged in yur families prayers.
---NICE PUNCH
I wont stop and give yu a chance to take a breath//
DFR shoulda thought bout this before he planned his own death.
---meh dat wuz aight coulda been better
All hope dismantles when yu fuck witt me//
yu came to the wrong person if yu were searching for victory.
----statement not a punch
(this right here's a warning going out to all those who can read.)//
im lyrically possessed my rhymes burn like fire, they'll make yu bleed.
---iight
they'll leave a deep cut to remind yu of the mistake yu made in the past//
Im the alpha and the omega.. always first DMR's tha last..
----wack
there aint no ending to my existance i'll forever live on//
cuz I fucked yur bitch on yur front lawn.
----that wuz stupid
so now she carries a lil bit of me everywhere that she goes//
Tuff trick thats wut happens when you date hoes.
----lol dats funny
Dont think of aborting the fetus that devellopes in her womb//
cuz it'll ressurect and vanish like Jesus did out of his tomb.
----..........
when yu least expect it he'll pop up when yur asleep//
he'll whisper "randomz" while he cuts yur throat deep!.
----kinda dumb but ok
So check who yu fucking witt DFR..//
Before yur life drastically ends at the end of this bar.!
---nice ending
v/randomz for better strucure punches and overall verse
Thx.. Iite lets get more votes uppin.. Thx Everyone who votes.. I'll return the favour.. B eZ..
Rhyming 4 endings exponentially harder than rhyming 2
iite yo.. good battle.. respect.. lets get more ppl to vote on this shit in here.. God Bless Yo.. B eZ
v/ RaNdoMz because his rhymes were better and just fucked DFR in every aspect of htis battle....L8Z bitches
Agreed, well-played Randomz (I like the "eat you like a lamb" line)
thx yo.. I think yur shit coulda been better.. you shoulda let me go first so yu coulda seen wut chu had to work witt.. I even said I would go first.. but yu insisted.. so w/e lets let the audience decide who won this.. B eZ
Weak Battle. Da lines in both rap was typical. My vote goes to randomz though for comming a little stronger and having better punches
DFR wut was u spittin?? tha hell was u talkin bout in ur verse?? my vote goes to random for havin a much harder and better formatted verse. DFR was rappin like bizarre from D-12, and that ain't a compliment homie...
v/ random
Lets git more votes in on this battle.. ppl please vote.. thank yu..
yo randomz you suck dick for voting for suave man on our battle just cuz he voted for you.. big dick
DFr got this shit cuz he had mad more punches than that other random guy and his flow was more better and shit.. and random was like too immature and shit if ya know what i mean, like his flow was off point but DFR has shit like
"He sees this on the screen, at home at his computer/
He lives in the burbs with his mom - his nickname is "Scooter"/
He's got a little sister named Pooky and he wantsta do her/
He's used to seein' his dick covered in a boy's manure."
classic i gotta give it to him
vote = dfr
Wtf.. yur a faggot.. i voted for two of his battles yu faggot.. one of em he lost.. he killed yu in yur fucking battle.. I SAID NO HATE VOTES ASSHOLE.. theres no fucking way DFR won this one.. yur a lil pussy bitch seth for HATE VOTING... PEACE..
Need more votes on this battle.. can ppl help us out please.. thank you.. :)...
COME ON PPL.. VOTE ON THIS BATTLE.. HELP US CLOSE IT ALLREADY...
We'll return the favour.. B eZ
fa show the eat yu like a lamb line was tight man randomz tore this shit apart
fa sho the eat yu like a lamb line was tight man randomz tore this shit apart
thx.. uppin tha votes.. lets go ppl.. vote on my battle and I'll rtf honestly though.. thank yu..
Enough saidQuote:
Originally Posted by DVSMIND
v/randomz...had the better verse both punches were lacking but randomz came stronger.
do shorter battles! im not even gonna vote on this, cuz honestly...i didnt read all of either one...u guys are gonna find it harder to get a lotta votes when the rules are 20-30 lines...i mean...ur call, but yeah...my 2 cents...pz
Allright lets get the votes on this battle upping please... We'll RTF Always B eZ
VOTE
VOTE
VOTE God bless..
HELP US CLOSE THIS BATTLE.. VOTE ON THIS BATTLE AND WE'LL RTF.. B EZ
No More Hate Votes!!! Like Seth Faggot Gecko!.. Thx..
Shit, this was actually a pretty good battle
D- your verse was pretty nice, some ok punches and wordplay, structure wasnt too bad, but the flow was a little bit off in certain places.
Ran-Nice too, good punches and word play, and a stronger flow to your and better structure, good personals too.
In all i think both were really close in everything, but randoms flowed a little better and hit D harder. so it looks like you get it.
V/Randomz
Uppin For More Votes.. Help us End This Battle.. Will RTF.. B eZ
fuckk... still not evough posts to vote...
RTF my shit :P
uppin.. We Need Votes.. help us end this battle..
randomz was way better to me more punchs that was hot
dfr was garbage work on yo shit dog u need better punchs they suck and u tellin a story or what cuz i thought yo shit was weak '
randomz got this 1 no prob