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iight yo wats good im her now u could check in and spit yo shit
The Gauntlet Is Down Launching Bombs At This Clown
So Next Week Youll Be In E.R. Wearing Hospital Gowns
Prepare!! Ya Crew's In Trouble I Carry Shotguns And Shovels
Dummy, My Flow Compared To Yours Is Like A Pond To A Puddle
When T's Back On Top And Im Kissing The Sky
Vallie Will Be Invisible, He Wish He Was I
This daredevil writer's always PREPARED-IN-RECITAL
So V's Getting Knocked Out Like Lime's On American Idol
But As It Goes You Know You Never Should Push me
Cuz Ill Have You "Down On Your Luck" Like Eating Leprachaun Pussy
G'Luck Kid...*Yawn*
Go Man Check And Spit
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Originally Posted by Novel-T
iight dawg dat was some fire shit but chill for a lil min. and check dis out
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Lmao Ooops I Meant To Say Mimes On American Idol...Wtf@Limes
Who cares about the lime/mime lineQuote:
Originally Posted by Novel-T
its all about the pond/line
chea
i'm tryin to be kool so be easy before u get clapped/
3 shoots through ur white tee will make ur out fit mitch match/
ur body fall from da first batch,ur mommy tappes were it hurts at/
i could wear a hospital gown but dat mean i still made it/
while u stuffed under da hostipal gound,yo kid jus face da basics/
u got a crew erase ur faces,rocin air force 1's wit yo boold on da laces/
why would i wish i could be u,when da beam from my scoope is stalkin ur crew/
yall in-pasters is through,VALLIES her to stay on top of yall dudes/
i neva stay down on my luck,but V will have T on da ground like leprachauns lookin for bucks/
and believe it 2 i carry gernades dat'll blast u ass back to first grade/
EASY BOI!!!!!
Uppin
Uppin
The Gauntlet Is Down Launching Bombs At This Clown
So Next Week Youll Be In E.R. Wearing Hospital Gowns
STONG OPENER
Prepare!! Ya Crew's In Trouble I Carry Shotguns And Shovels
Dummy, My Flow Compared To Yours Is Like A Pond To A Puddle
NICE
When T's Back On Top And Im Kissing The Sky
Vallie Will Be Invisible, He Wish He Was I
EH
This daredevil writer's always PREPARED-IN-RECITAL
So V's Getting Knocked Out Like Lime's On American Idol
K
But As It Goes You Know You Never Should Push me
Cuz Ill Have You "Down On Your Luck" Like Eating Leprachaun Pussy
AHHAHA.... NICE ENDER
i'm tryin to be kool so be easy before u get clapped/
3 shoots through ur white tee will make ur out fit mitch match/
EH
ur body fall from da first batch,ur mommy tappes were it hurts at/
i could wear a hospital gown but dat mean i still made it/
FEEDIN, BUT OK
while u stuffed under da hostipal gound,yo kid jus face da basics/
u got a crew erase ur faces,rocin air force 1's wit yo boold on da laces/
OK MULTI
why would i wish i could be u,when da beam from my scoope is stalkin ur crew/
yall in-pasters is through,VALLIES her to stay on top of yall dudes/
NAH
i neva stay down on my luck,but V will have T on da ground like leprachauns lookin for bucks/
and believe it 2 i carry gernades dat'll blast u ass back to first grade/
FEED IN UR ENDER
In all this wasnt to bad of a battle, Novel, u had a nice opener and closer, Vallie ok verse with nice multi's, but you fed from his verse alot.
V/Novel.....stronger verse, better opner and closer
iff i could vote/ novel for a good oppener and iight closer and alright punches jus work on structer just a lil lil bit and its all u
Uppin #3
WUTTTTTAAAA BITERRRRRR .... AHAHAHAHAHA
NOVEL-T Got That Rap From Spitterz Lounge ...
http://p069.ezboard.com/ffreestyling...cID=1376.topic
Booo... dat sux... VALLIE SHOULD WIN HANDS DOWN
up.
he had the stronger verse in this one and better punches to the other kid elevate ya heard undastand thatQuote:
The Gauntlet Is Down Launching Bombs At This Clown
So Next Week Youll Be In E.R. Wearing Hospital Gowns
STONG OPENER
Prepare!! Ya Crew's In Trouble I Carry Shotguns And Shovels
Dummy, My Flow Compared To Yours Is Like A Pond To A Puddle
NICE
When T's Back On Top And Im Kissing The Sky
Vallie Will Be Invisible, He Wish He Was I
EH
This daredevil writer's always PREPARED-IN-RECITAL
So V's Getting Knocked Out Like Lime's On American Idol
K
But As It Goes You Know You Never Should Push me
Cuz Ill Have You "Down On Your Luck" Like Eating Leprachaun Pussy
AHHAHA.... NICE ENDER
i'm tryin to be kool so be easy before u get clapped/
3 shoots through ur white tee will make ur out fit mitch match/
EH
ur body fall from da first batch,ur mommy tappes were it hurts at/
i could wear a hospital gown but dat mean i still made it/
FEEDIN, BUT OK
while u stuffed under da hostipal gound,yo kid jus face da basics/
u got a crew erase ur faces,rocin air force 1's wit yo boold on da laces/
OK MULTI
why would i wish i could be u,when da beam from my scoope is stalkin ur crew/
yall in-pasters is through,VALLIES her to stay on top of yall dudes/
NAH
i neva stay down on my luck,but V will have T on da ground like leprachauns lookin for bucks/
and believe it 2 i carry gernades dat'll blast u ass back to first grade/
FEED IN UR ENDER
In all this wasnt to bad of a battle, Novel, u had a nice opener and closer, Vallie ok verse with nice multi's, but you fed from his verse alot.
V/Novel.....stronger verse, better opner and closer
ayo son dat nigga novel-t betta not win dawg cause u a fuckin cheater
whoeve votes for dis shit vote for real cause dat nigga cheated he got dem liricas from somewhere elso
It Was Close But Novel-t Cheated. Vallie Took This One With Punches
good battle
novel-t stole dat verse from spitterz lounge so vote far ppl......
vote fair and get dis battle out da way
v/vallie novel stole his lyrics enuff said
Dee-zamn, Novel-T did bite the American Idol and Down on your luck pieces...I gotta give vote to the other guy.
Vote other guy for not cheating. lol
novel-t cheated so fairly vote
rise
aight a lil weak on both sides.
Novel T- good flow and structure. but u had no punches at all. zip. just a bunch of self glory and threats and blowing guns and shit. fucken retarded. diss the guy. this is a battle. elevate on punches and personals and wordplay. keep elevating.
Vallie- structure still needs help. make lines the same length. try not to stretch them out. yes i know its hard. i used to have alot of trouble with it and still do a lil. just keep working on wordplay. ur had sum attempted punches in here. like bout his crew and all. keep working on ur disses and making sure they hit.
v// vallie cuz he didn't have as much self glory and he had attempted punches. was really close though. i just felt vallie's a lil more. elevate both of u. pz.
Damn son! That nigga really stole them lyrics. You fucking suck for that shit man. You automatically loose. Vote/ Val for originality. Elevate though man. ~1~