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look kid im only doin this so you will get the fuk off me. since you have been posting in all my threads
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...&page=71&pp=15
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=187155
^^thats just to show how much of a newb you are callin me out
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RULEZ
20 linez or less
due in 1 hour afta check in
you can spit first since you wanted to so badly
(drop tommorow since it late)
hahaha u showed everyone the thread of me beatin u alredy u are diggin ure own grave loooser!!!!!
just spit fukin bitch hurry up you wastin my time
G what ya doing fool dodging my bullets
ye little bitch i'll spark you out when we battle
fool play with this boy and bring it too the man next
we are battling LAMO was that your verse?....if not then spit RIGHT NOW
omg i thought you were udk my bad tlak to me in p.m paulQuote:
Originally Posted by ~G~
yo g is a pussy, he is a rookie, i got him shook g
he likes the penis, this kid aint half his name so he aint a G"neaous" (get it? geneaius, but he isnt half his naem? lololol)
I will kill u twice for not talkin nice, bow down to me i am the best in the century
my uncle is 50 cent and he will kill u 2, so when i say im the best, im not talking about u
u suck poo poo, the only time u arent gay is when u run out of rubbers with ur lover
u suck ur momma's titties, u piceee of shitty peens u aint a genis//
forget rapping, i am the killer, the ship and teh captain
Leader of G-Unit-666 (formalry known as Apethesis)
checkin in.... ill type my verse in 5 min. and still fuk you up it won't even be that good
:shoot: :shoot: :shoot: u cant beat me cuz u r a pussy, u r a rookie, u suck like a bad cookie, u hate nookie, i will slap u with my phone home downtown and go flown thru the matranome into ur domr some cown like Cade Mcnown, he plays for the bears he is a quarterback, now bitvh give me my quartere back!!!
:shoot:
White Massacre dont fuck wit me,
im on a higher level, why you just a wannabe?
Beaten bitches like you is so damn simple,
I'll pop ya fuckin ass like i pop a pimple.
You said my dick just grew past 2 inches, that sounds gay,
ask ya mom my dick hit her from fuckin LA.
You say im fuckin 36, well divide it by 2,
Im an OG in my hood bitch what about you?
Niggas like me and yates dont play no games,
cause all we do is cock, reload, and splatter ya brains.
Ask silent j for a change, he felt them rhymes,
but bitches like you gon' have to feel that iron.
But i know bitch, you just a fuckin slow learner,
keep actin up and get smacked in the head wit the burner.
Yo rhymes are fuckin weak, why cant you see,
there is no future for a pussy who be hatin on me.
that was fukin good for a 5 min. type
UPPIN FOR VOTEZ
hahaha that was it? I wont his easiluy!!! i am the leader, so im going to ban u from the team for that week rap!!
stop free posting you will be banned dick^^
uppin 2
vote for me....my naem sounds cooler!!!!!!! I talked it over and this guy said he will suck ur dick if u vote for me :thumbup:
the rap by the boul ~g~ was hot as shit the otha boul udkm88 is definetly garbage
whoa thanx man ^^^ to bad you cant vote
uppin
that was u logged on and trying to vote for yourself...i know how u are!!! u are banned from G-Unit_666 (formarly known as Apethesis)
:shoot:
^^stop making shit up dude
uppin votez
i would vote for g because he could beat me,and i could kill the other dude....w/e his name is
udkm your battle waz just plain wack, wrong, terrible your punchez werent hard
G actaully kept his on point and his punchez waz tight
i liked linez 5-6 it waz funny
v/G
got 1 vote now need a whole 4 more....
i c u tryn to get tha big KO on this man :)
hey i would vote if i could but i cant,G took his ass home,i need 5 votes to
if you can vote plz do
or all you noweights quickly get up to a flyweight damn this battle needs to be over i merked that kid
uppin last time
yo g is a pussy, he is a rookie, i got him shook g
he likes the penis, this kid aint half his name so he aint a G"neaous" (get it? geneaius, but he isnt half his naem? lololol)
^I get it, tis crap, strecthed lines..blah
I will kill u twice for not talkin nice, bow down to me i am the best in the century
my uncle is 50 cent and he will kill u 2, so when i say im the best, im not talking about u
^Simple, badly structured, no punch
u suck poo poo, the only time u arent gay is when u run out of rubbers with ur lover
u suck ur momma's titties, u piceee of shitty peens u aint a genis//
forget rapping, i am the killer, the ship and teh captain
poo poo! nah, poor closer. why odd lines?
Your verse was weak, try reading others in lll to learn better punchs and such
White Massacre dont fuck wit me,
im on a higher level, why you just a wannabe?
^No punch, why are you asking him a question...
Beaten bitches like you is so damn simple,
I'll pop ya fuckin ass like i pop a pimple.
Played, simple, poor....
You said my dick just grew past 2 inches, that sounds gay,
ask ya mom my dick hit her from fuckin LA.
BlAH, Shit
You say im fuckin 36, well divide it by 2,
Im an OG in my hood bitch what about you?
^another question...crap line
Niggas like me and yates dont play no games,
cause all we do is cock, reload, and splatter ya brains.
^Poor,
Ask silent j for a change, he felt them rhymes,
but bitches like you gon' have to feel that iron.
^Weak
But i know bitch, you just a fuckin slow learner,
keep actin up and get smacked in the head wit the burner.
......:banghead:
Yo rhymes are fuckin weak, why cant you see,
there is no future for a pussy who be hatin on me.
Bad closer
Teribble punches on both sides
But G wins w/ a better flow and structure
Both need to work on punches
V/ G
Vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185903
And then i'll poll my vote.
Pz.
fuck u G will kill your ass in a battle uppin..............................
sorry i only read the top of the page, my bad my bad
yo g is a pussy, he is a rookie, i got him shook g
he likes the penis, this kid aint half his name so he aint a G"neaous" (get it? geneaius, but he isnt half his naem? lololol)
^I get it, tis crap, strecthed lines..blah
I will kill u twice for not talkin nice, bow down to me i am the best in the century
my uncle is 50 cent and he will kill u 2, so when i say im the best, im not talking about u
^Simple, badly structured, no punch
u suck poo poo, the only time u arent gay is when u run out of rubbers with ur lover
u suck ur momma's titties, u piceee of shitty peens u aint a genis//
forget rapping, i am the killer, the ship and teh captain
poo poo! nah, poor closer. why odd lines?
Your verse was weak, try reading others in lll to learn better punchs and such
White Massacre dont fuck wit me,
im on a higher level, why you just a wannabe?
^No punch, why are you asking him a question...
Beaten bitches like you is so damn simple,
I'll pop ya fuckin ass like i pop a pimple.
Played, simple, poor....
You said my dick just grew past 2 inches, that sounds gay,
ask ya mom my dick hit her from fuckin LA.
BlAH, Shit
You say im fuckin 36, well divide it by 2,
Im an OG in my hood bitch what about you?
^another question...crap line
Niggas like me and yates dont play no games,
cause all we do is cock, reload, and splatter ya brains.
^Poor,
Ask silent j for a change, he felt them rhymes,
but bitches like you gon' have to feel that iron.
^Weak
But i know bitch, you just a fuckin slow learner,
keep actin up and get smacked in the head wit the burner.
......
Yo rhymes are fuckin weak, why cant you see,
there is no future for a pussy who be hatin on me.
Bad closer
Teribble punches on both sides
But G wins w/ a better flow and structure
Both need to work on punches
V/ G
~g~,
But For Just Being A Quick Type For This Fag.............
Did Good.tho.
Just Work Kon Your Delivery, Alil More.....
Stronger Punches, Structure
Udk Or W/e Ur Effn Name Is............ You Are Garbage
You Are Waiting To Battle Me.......................nice Try Homie....
The Day I Battle You, Is When You Tell Me You Will Leave Rb 4ever. & Ur Sidekick Rhyme13, Ur Boths Fags.........................
Elevate Bitch......................................
udkm88-you have no rhymes and no punches at all...weak dude, no hate just elevate
overall- 1/10
G-you actually had some nice punches and flow.
overall-7/10
i didnt even need to break it down, it was obvious who won.
v/G for much better overall verse
lol he just a kid wanting to become good and hes fukin annoying
got 2 votez need 3 more-
udkm i wanna battle u 2morrow
need only 2 more votez to close this off.....
yo unmk or wateva his name is sucked...he should quit.....nuttin to say except that ~G~ was betta
v/~G~
udkm88- not that bad but wasnt comin hard enough, the punches wernt as strong and the flow wasnt as good as G's.
G-I thougt you had a better flow and better punches came much stronger, your was also a little more creative.
V/G