Yours Truly, Has A Gift With The Women To Rival George Clooney ..

.. haha, just havin fun with this. Game in rhyming form. Unfinished, just working on my flow ..

First up,
When you meet a chick ..
.. remember to greet her with,
A smile. Introduce yourself, and ask if she needs a drink.
You see the tricks to play with her mind,
While she's speakin,
bout life at the weekend,

Just gaze in her eyes.

This never fails to arise,
their hormones & wet the lower lips ..
A compliment or three wouldnt go a miss.
But dont insist, on knowin if she's spoken for - it means shit ..
.. cause pretty soon you're gonna be the guy she WANTS to be with.
Keep secret,
Your current plans and history ..
.. let her do all the talking, see - they love a man of mystery.

Ive replied to no end of fucking things ..

Amend - Past and Present
Issue - Withered Rose
Jekylls thing about spiders
Edicius about him being an alcoholic

That's some good advice in there, it really works. Lol.

I can confirm that he replied to my thing about spiders.

replace " keep secret" w/ "garner as secrets" :rolleyes:

ha^...word i liked this nice message deliverd...fell abit short but nice


peep my latest ;)

Gaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy Repliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiessssssssssssssssss ..

Im just fucking round with flow, trying different schemes out. Leave links, i'll hit them up when i get a minute.

Man, how comes you dont post complete pieces?

Anyway, I liked this piece, I liked the way it read. Im not really into this structure, but it came across weel in a piece like this, it flowed very well and I think when this is completed it'll be pretty good. You had some good lines which I really went for, such as the whole first part, but I wasn't feeling some of the last part, but I guess that might be just me. As I already said the flow was the best part of this piece, and the structure didn't really affect it, as it all went together very nicely.

I would like to read this completed though, let me know when you drop that if you ever do.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185882
:D, I appreciate it man if you left feed on my piece :thumbup:

it was a short drop but had quality, obviously my opinion wont effect you but whether it does or not the piece was nice.

Peace

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Originally Posted by Issue

Man, how comes you dont post complete pieces?

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ROFL, Because I havent completed one. These are just stuff to practice different schemes and flows with, I need the off-the-wall type pieces to balance out with all the serious storytelling shit i do. If i was stuck in that mode all of the time, i just couldnt do it. I need my release, and i get that in braggadacio joints like this one.

YOOOO FUCK bitches... ahhh they dont deserve recognition.. if im not giving em compliments shit then she would get em from ten other niggas cuz she knows our weakness.. our boners.. now now.. im not saying ur rymes are wack.. but the topic IS!!! I rather hear u bitch smacking em and leaving em on the corner to make pimp daddy some money.. HAHAHAHHAA
WORD KEEP DROPPING....

HERE.. in return u can criticize my verse all u want... hahahahaha
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=186975

y0

why u be droppin them ng\finished pieces dawgf!

ROFLZ AT THIS MAHFUCKIN EHUD PRICK ..


Spin off son.

hey come on now I was doing an honest feed.. jes cuz I dont get my dick wet as much as ya do doesn't mean I dont have any of my opinions.. ohhh ur from england.. I thought u were from america.. no wonder u love ya chicks cuz they aint white trash like the whores I deal with daily.. now knowing that..

Yo that verse was aight.. shit i would be saying the same thing to European girls cuz there so yummy.. U know.. hahahah now it makes sense on why u dont hate women.. good work keep droping

Haha, i was just fucking with you. Go use the search feature and find something by me that ive tried on. Shadows Of The Apocalypse = a prime example.

bro.. I know ur ill.. but this particular piece.. yeah.. and u know it too... so u shoudn't be surprise my friend.. but if u post the link jes like I did for u to read my verse.. then more then likely I will leave a feed.. hey jes look at how many people I gave feed too.. so u know im gonna be active as fuck.. hahahahahaha

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ows+apocalypse

there you go. :^)

Got to have atleast 16 Lines.