Dying In Your Arms - Ill-Mental Feat. ACE

BRAND NEW TRACK check this shizzle out... first song with my my new sound booth....]

hook : me
1st : me
2nd: Ace

Soundclick
[MUSIC]http://www.soundclick.us/fastkG/09/02/freemp3/paddedroomproductions+dyinginyourarmsftace.mp3[/MUSIC]

lol @ ill mental singin.. soun dlike you in sum deep pain.. or you jus can't sing.. haha...

honestly, i heard this verse b4 last week when u send to me.. i told u i thought it was fuckin dope, an' i stand by that.. so ye on to ace

ch'yea... you come jus as dope, i'm feelin the flow alot more on this than alot of other shit i heard u on.. word up on this track, too bad it ain't longer on the real

7/10 jus 'cause shit's fuckin too short.. but damn hommie u out dun yaself this round... haha... peace

Stop singing you faggit, dope tho other than that.

Word, if you need someone to sing next time ask me.

Holy shit, feeling this beat, yessssssssss. Ill flow on this, lmfao @ you singing I'm going to die, lmfao. Good lyrics in this, word @ your fast syllable flowing on this track, dope. I put one of your songs that you sent me on aim, on a c.d. btw. LoL

Ace, nice voice on this track, you both had dope precence on this track. Good flow, nice lyrics I found applicable to the song. WOrd with the love songs coming out now. Must be the spring in the air haha.

Sorry I'm in Canada, it's an inside joke.'

LMFAO @ the outro.

Excellent.

dope shit... thanks man imma up b4 i go to work

*listens again* :o

lmao I just can't get over the singing.

lol yeah thats what everyone is telling me... i meant it to be funny (the singing)

into is funny dog

verse 1
sick flow
like your dilevery and rhyme sceme
ya flow is ob point hot ish

verse 2
fuck dog yall given twista some compitition
nice ish


8/10 too short though


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185309

holla back at ya nig

yeah i kinda wanted it to be a short track... this is my first studio song and its def. goin on my cd in progress...

yeah, the singing is the best part.. :thumbup:

*clicks repeat*

this shit is sick as fuck...kinda like this singin a lil bit but dont do it again

i would suggest doing it again, i think it adds a touch.

yeh its funny as fuk i think its the batty beat. camp as fuk! sumthing played ina gay club. (NOT THAT I KNOW). u sound like fred durst man with flow!ace is batty . but its a batty song so i can accept it! the hook is fat!


* listen again 2*


THIS should be stikied just for the hook

^^^thanks man... although thats the 2nd time i been told i sound like fred durst? oh well thanks

yo u singin haha.. i give u props for singing man... overall it was hot flow was on dawg.. some parts were faster than busta rhymes damn man

**I like the way the intro was done...with the wack singin and the dude clownin him...nice shit...

extend this shit...lol...feelin the delivery and shit all quick like...extend it though...

yeah since everyone is telling me that... im thinking about adding another verse or somethin

^do it :mad:

Send me this song on aim, I want to put it on a c.d.

^you can just download it to Windows Media Player, and then save it to your music files fool.. s'what i did cuz i am gonna put it on a CD also.

and wordness to adding another verse!

You yanked this beat off of soundclick chuz i was takin this shit too.

*scratches off list*

lol post it up i wasnna hear it

uppppperzzzzz

beat is koo, i like it
lmao @ singin
1st- flow was nice, quite nice actually, love that fast flow, lyrics were koo too
damn, i cant stop laughin at that chorus
2nd- same thing, nice flow, sounded like the same person though, really similar style, but i agree this shit shoulda been longer...but what was there was nice

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Originally Posted by Ill-Mental

yeah since everyone is telling me that... im thinking about adding another verse or somethin

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doo it foo, lem'me get on it.. haha... nah, but seriously, u need another verse, an' yea given light, if you don't got media player, open the hi-fi in win amp, right click press song info, highlight the address copy an' paste to browser addy bar press enter an' it should let you download it

well shit if you wanna get diown on this i'll send you the beat.. get at me on aim doggie

I want in :(

haha...
dope...that beat was dope and the singin' with the other guy like...WTF dude...LMAO
flow's on both yours were tight, both styles fit in sickly with the type of instrumental...

nice emotion in the hook haha...LMAO...

*hits repeat*

Ill-Mental
did u do that freestyle yourself

it is iight

^LoL, its' not a freestyle it's a song, ft. ace.

*listens again*

damn yo.. this song is amazing as hell.... very nice..

Chorus" Funny as hell..

Your verses.. damn ya.. rapping fast as hell.. and the flow was off the hook man.. damn i really liked it.. hahah... and nice beat..

9/10

Very tight track, singing is not as hot.

lol the singing is supposed to sound like it does man

did u make dat beat homie?
anddi u sing dat shit if so u good dude
i like the quality
good emmotion too man
9.5/10

^^^damn man thanks alot... means alot to me... my cd coming out is gonna be all remixed songs... tears in heaven, beat it, dyin in your arms... etc... thanks for the love tho