10-14 lines
due in 25 mins
no d/r, no hate votes
u spit first
if u dont spit, i will post my verse then have u dq'ed
so dont pussy out
Lets Go
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10-14 lines
due in 25 mins
no d/r, no hate votes
u spit first
if u dont spit, i will post my verse then have u dq'ed
so dont pussy out
Lets Go
U think ur a rhythm magician/ But that shit that u are spitten makes me sicker and sicker/ I've heard michael jackson make better rhymes/ Bitch maybe u should've set up a lil more time/ So that maybe u could make sum decent lines/ The way u rap makes me think ur the age 2/ Wat the fucken hell are they teaching u at school/ Ur probably a kid who is full of depression/ Who tries to get into these types of converstations and mess up their station and start up another fucked up creation/ When u spit its like u just got done taking a shit/ Specially when i saw ur fat ass rip/ U talk like u got big balls/ Money flowing like NIagra falls/ But when i stand up straight and tall/ U cower in the corner so tiny and small/ Here's sum advice/ pack up and go home/ Quit trying to be like Obie trice/ And pick up the phone/ and tell ur girlfriend that ur a player hater/ And say cya l8ta alligator/
show me ur shit man. lets see wat u got. lets see if u really do have big balls.
Ya'll think dis kids a crook? naw..cant keystyle gotta get ya book awww
Ya lines is "candy" ppl dont reply cuzz u suck and they "MiSS Da GOOD BaR"
your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese
looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease
I’m reforming u, ya shaking like Bill Cosby in jello commercials
U beating me? it's like saying bill was with being controversial
You just joined RB and yet your trying to beat me?
Ha , cuz ill gaurentee that the 'polls will disagree'...
your lines never connect, like the web and piced up phones
im pacin a flow in a bag, like patients at nursing homes
you wouldnt "shine" over me, if i gave you tickets to the "sun"
closest youll get to winning is a "split" decision, like a "bun"
Dis nigga think he eminem, but his rhymes be leavin niggaz sick like a sea
Cuz the last three numbers of ya name describe ya 973 out of infinity
tyte battle
ppl give feedback n vote on dis battle
yah. good job man. u got my respect. feedback plzz
eminem, u need ta wrk on ur structure b/c ya lines are all fucked up
if u split them up, i wud have been able ta read them betta
but good job
thanx. this is my second battle so i'm still workin on it. but thanx bro. urs was kick ass. keep it up as well man
can we plz get sum votes people. Uppin!. Uppin!. votes plz
set it up as a poll so we can get votes. i dunno how to do it.
there is a poll on it and ppl can vote on it
just give it time
neva mind i dunno wat da fuck i'm talking bout. votes plz
aight. like i said this is the first time i've done a poll. haha i'm a fucken retard
uppin fa votes..............1,1,1,1
come on ppl
give votes and good feedback on dis battle
Comeon people. needin sum votes and feedback. comeon no shyness.
come on ppl
vote and give honest feedback so we can determine the winner
i cant vote but da rhythmagician won that because he came with harder punches and he flowed and it sounded pretty good his vocab was okay had a couple big words overall rhythm 8/10 and m&m973wannabe 6/10 im out
thanx homie
try ta vote when u get 100 posts OK
this was an okay battle but when i get 100 post for the second time ill vote
Eminem937- UR SHIT WAS.... OK... BUT LIKE RHYTHM SAID U NEED TO WORK ON UR LINES A LIL BETTER CUZ ITS HARD TO READ...U IIGHT THOUGH FOR A NOWEIGHT... OK. U HAD A COUPLE OF GOOD PUNCHES... BUT UR FLOW WAS WACK... KEEP WORKIN ON UR SHIT AND U'LL GET IT DONE...DON'T SOEM DAY U'LL WIN A BATTLE...
OVERALL=6/20
Da Rhythmagician-NOW UR SHIT WAS TIGHT U HAD A LOT OF GOOD PUNCHES AND BETTER FLOW... U HAD BETTER STRUCTURE AND U DIDN'T SCREW UP ON UR LINES... U ON THE OTHER HAND DON'T HAVE TO WORK ON UR RAPS... BUT KEEP BATTLIN AND VERSE THE BEST SO U ACTUALLY KNOW IF UR DA BEST... NE WAYS U CAME HARDER... AND U WERE BETTER...
OVERALL=8/10
RTF in my sig for real....
thanx fa da vote homie
i'll keep that feedback in mind and keep battlin
thanx
need more feedback n votes ppl
tyte battle
yo rhythmagician y they ban u?.....................
em
a really weak verse as far as structure. work on your structure. you have to press the enter key after every single line son. a lot of people are gona look at your verse and vote against you strictly on structure, which is really dumb, but thats newbie voters for ya. but i actually read your verse, and i gotta say, it makes no sense. every line you make is simply horrible. everything. elevate in every catagory.
DR
your opener was wack. your closer was played (second time ive seen the infinity joke today) the cosby line was awkward as shit. the bun bar is real stupid. and i get it. its just real gay. the u just joined rb bar was filler. you have a lot of filler, played shit, and wack lines. this is just bad. you dont really punch em too hard, you just make weird references in your wordplay. elevate.
a really bad battle, but DR actually hit a lil bit and had weird but at least a showing of wordplay. therefore
vote- DR
thanx fa da feedback homie
i'll keep it in mind when i write anotha verse
uppin fa votes..............3,3,3,3
only 3 more votes til i beat dis kid
keep tha feedback n votes comin ppl
thanx for the feedback peeps. i'll work on my structure and shit.
DA~rythmagician , took this no doubt . I feel he had more cpomplex and structure .
Eminem973 you gettin better ! , just a little bit more elevation.
fav line="you would'nt shine over me if i gave you tickets to the sun " -rythmagician.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
need more feedback n votes ppl
i can't vote in the poll due to the fact that i don't have enough posts, but if i could i'd definitely vote for DR.
em's was very tired, really corny, especially the alligator closer.
DR, your flow wasn't the best, but i liked the good bar line. the jello one was good too but the flow on that one was the worst of all yours. your punches were great, like the other battle of yours i saw...
yeah, so mos def DR took it.
maybe you two can vote in mine if you have time... -
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=182671
thanx homie
when u get 100 posts vote and give feedback though
come on ppl
give votes and feedback so we can find out who da better battler iz
we need ta get dis battle closed
come on ppl
give votes and feedback
only 2 more votes til i win
come on ppl
give votes and feedback
only 3 more votes
so come on n give good feedback n vote
U think ur a rhythm magician/ But that shit that u are spitten makes me sicker and sicker/ I've heard michael jackson make better rhymes/ Bitch maybe u should've set up a lil more time/ So that maybe u could make sum decent lines/ The way u rap makes me think ur the age 2/ Wat the fucken hell are they teaching u at school/ Ur probably a kid who is full of depression/ Who tries to get into these types of converstations and mess up their station and start up another fucked up creation/ When u spit its like u just got done taking a shit/ Specially when i saw ur fat ass rip/ U talk like u got big balls/ Money flowing like NIagra falls/ But when i stand up straight and tall/ U cower in the corner so tiny and small/ Here's sum advice/ pack up and go home/ Quit trying to be like Obie trice/ And pick up the phone/ and tell ur girlfriend that ur a player hater/ And say cya l8ta alligator/
Aight you need to work on your structure, and you really didn't have any punches that connected. Your rhyme scheme and wordplay was also all fucked up.
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Ya'll think dis kids a crook? naw..cant keystyle gotta get ya book awww
Ya lines is "candy" ppl dont reply cuzz u suck and they "MiSS Da GOOD BaR"
Weak opener
your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese
looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease
Eh..
I’m reforming u, ya shaking like Bill Cosby in jello commercials
U beating me? it's like saying bill was with being controversial
No
You just joined RB and yet your trying to beat me?
Ha , cuz ill gaurentee that the 'polls will disagree'...
Ok
your lines never connect, like the web and piced up phones
im pacin a flow in a bag, like patients at nursing homes
Aight
you wouldnt "shine" over me, if i gave you tickets to the "sun"
closest youll get to winning is a "split" decision, like a "bun"
Not feeling it
Dis nigga think he eminem, but his rhymes be leavin niggaz sick like a sea
Cuz the last three numbers of ya name describe ya 973 out of infinity
Aight closer
Da~Rhythmagician takes this for having an overall better verse and coming harder with his punches. Check my battle with Glock when you get 100.
V/ Da~Rhythmagician
thanx fa da vote homie
yo rhythm u aint hit me back yet.....
Eminem
Ur lines were kinda childish and the paragraph u made was kinda annoyin to read. you dont have to bunch it up and shit, u can make it into bars. nothing in ur verse really caught my attention at all. U remind me of when I first came here. i had the paragraph bar style to until I got better. Keep elevatin
Da Rythm
U did a hell of a lot better than he did. U had some flowin punches and most of them had some good word play. I give this to u caz ur shit was easy to read and hit harder than his pre-school rymes.
V/ DA Rythm
hit me up on one of my battles