Fuck Off You Daft Cunt ..

Why delay it further - you're the wackest guy i know ..
.. but yO, im bout to start wreck - like that sci fi show!
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Faggot, riddle me this - im my fam is so wack ..
.. why'd it take you the best part of a year, to answer us back -
after our first diss dropped? as for those gats ya spray?
Please,

You're the text equivalent of Richie from Happy Days.

And i have to say, that if you wanna take it there, man ..
.. i'll leave you sleepin w. the fishes - like Spongebob Squarepants.
Yeah, Cams shaken the rust off. You shoulda forfeit ..
.. 'stead of teamin w. the worst thing to come out the south,

since that Nelly and Tim McGraw shit.

The very thought of that dude has me dying to laugh ..
.. cos i cant help but picture Cletus The Slack Jawed Yokel tryin to rap!
No ones buying ya crap, and your gonna hate it ..
.. but ya verses make Brooklyn Bob feel like HE'S underrated.
You're nothings. No names. I aint got time for you ..
So dont expect another response,

til you write something worth me replying to.


Faggots.

Go toy with someone elses balls. Im through with you wack fucks man. Aint noone here even think you have a chance of fucking with us. Haha .. its over. Pz!

This was pretty good sorta, But cuz of your strucuture, That threw the flow off at some parts.

Nice net record in your sig ..

yo nice drop B although the flow was of due to the sturcture...but the content was good so..so overall good verse...pz

rofl .. at flow was of..

funny people :thumbup:

I know .. I dont get that? Why do you kids think theres a pause in the line? I do it so you know to stop, then read on. As if there was a break in the beat. It isnt hard to follow how that flows ..

after readin it again maybe ur right...i guess it was the way i read it...

Lol, its cool. You're fairly new so you probably havent read anything by me before .. those who have been here a while will pick it up easily ..

No ones buying ya crap, and your gonna hate it ..
.. but ya verses make Brooklyn Bob feel like HE'S underrated.


Only line I liked. Flow was good though, the rest of your disses were either to basic for my liking, or just wack. e.g. that squarepants line. Still not a bad write though.

Fresh like uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ..

Impala,Unhhhhhhhhhhh

No ones buying ya crap, and your gonna hate it ..
.. but ya verses make Brooklyn Bob feel like HE'S underrated.

Flow was good though, the rest of your disses were either to basic for my liking, or just wack. e.g. that squarepants line. Still not a bad write though.

keep droppn homie.........................

vote on my open battles drop links ill return tha fav:------->>1

it was nice u had some really nice lines and then some others were kinda meh, but all in all a little better then good but not really good u no was i mean, but the structure in it was off in some parts but keep at it, that was some hot shit u had there keep up the good work, lookin forward to seein more OM's from u

had a couple of aiite lines.. but u need 2 learn how to flow properly and hit hard

BARON i thought i remembered you lol.....look i know i got your ass beat as far as dissing goes but in all respect i will give an honest critique.
i think your punches had great ideas just a lil off in wording i understood them all and thats why i say great ideas.you still have problems formatting punches.
structure doesnt matter to me and i dont think yours was that bad i rather liked the read.
you elivate that is visible but dont jump into a diss against someone you have no real beef with. i am better ....not to be cocky cause im not i have much improving to do but at the same time this was me chrit camarac it really didnt involve you.
no diss man serious but dont get into it dissing me to prove yourself to your crew cause you will lose.elivate cause i see alot of strong potential in you.

"this was me chrit camarac it really didnt involve you."


Haha, just who do you think Camarac is?

cant be you the other name gave you better talent then this half ass display

ROFL

Kid seriously, shut the fuck up. You're a moron. Giving me props on one name and telling me im wack on another, hahaha, shows you're full of shit man. Lean back.