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no d/r
no cheatin
u spit first
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8-15 lines
no d/r
no cheatin
u spit first
due 40 min afta check in
man i allready wnt in the otha one on accident dawg
Bitch if u blind ill slap u 2 clear vision
punk if u def ill beat u till u listen
u should b scared ima a real killer
ill scare u worse den a little kid scared of jackson's thriller
don't piss me off ima real burner
stupid ass ho ill bitch slap u like ike turner
nigga i roll through yo hood and dip
make yo girl strip with out leavin a tip
damn you about 2 get hurt
ill bury u deep in the earth
so u should just stop and leave
cuz im gonna win please bileave
i pasted this from the otha 1 dat i had it on......
iight my turn
faggot il punch u in the face till i break ur cartleg/
ur trash ur parent couldnt pay 4 the abortion so they threw u in the garbage/
i take that bac props to ur mom i no u adore her/
i waz gona fuck that bitch last night but couldnt offord her/(lol)
i shove u bitch u only push me/
u rap lik a bitch stuck ur hand in ur pants and found out u all pussy/
y u tryin 2 face me ur lik a man wit no legs runnin sackraces/
u step 2 me u lik micheal j u stick ur dick in the wrong places/
u suck s0 many men ur kneecaps cracked/
murder ur a$$ lik 2pac but u aint neva comin bac/
iight
wanna go 1 mo time
that waz a fast battle
let m juss vote on this and lata we set it up again it waz hott tho
Ha.. both of u have skill but
SJ king was the best i think..
u 2 gunna go again or want me to vote?
Nigga im top charted
2 against me u must b really bravehearted
i had ur mom dancin 2 me 2 da thong song
i would've fucked her but the line was 2 long (lol)
bitch ill beat u 2 the ground
in this battle hear is like ur sex life ur going down.
man u fuckin wit a philly g
but like t.i.p nigga u don't no me
we goin again
man starz took that shit they were decsent rymes and structure the other dudes rymes were just to simple
hah. thats ill nigga.. chek this out.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=180897
SINAMEN'S meRKing
ill vote when he gets back
o my bad 4 get my last ryme i didnt c ur post
if u want 2 go again gom
faggot i rip u poeticaly lik this sht is a sonnet/
the only way u could com hard on a mic if is u were jackin off on it
first sht u wrote juss made me laugh/
i could walk on ur ass wit 2 hennesys and a blunt in half/
fuck i aint writin
ANALYSIS
Bitch if u blind ill slap u 2 clear vision
punk if u def ill beat u till u listen
u should b scared ima a real killer
ill scare u worse den a little kid scared of jackson's thriller
don't piss me off ima real burner
stupid ass ho ill bitch slap u like ike turner
nigga i roll through yo hood and dip
make yo girl strip with out leavin a tip
damn you about 2 get hurt
ill bury u deep in the earth
so u should just stop and leave
cuz im gonna win please bileave
Looks like u were bitin becuz u neva said ur name or said his just talkin alot of bullshit but for a beginner ill give it to u u did alright verse-3.0 u wouldve got a 2.0 if it weren't for the micheal jackson line
improve by makin more sense, betta vocab, longer lines, and betta punches
ANALYSIS
faggot il punch u in the face till i break ur cartleg/
ur trash ur parent couldnt pay 4 the abortion so they threw u in the garbage/
i take that bac props to ur mom i no u adore her/
i waz gona fuck that bitch last night but couldnt offord her/(lol)
i shove u bitch u only push me/
u rap lik a bitch stuck ur hand in ur pants and found out u all pussy/
y u tryin 2 face me ur lik a man wit no legs runnin sackraces/
u step 2 me u lik micheal j u stick ur dick in the wrong places/
u suck s0 many men ur kneecaps cracked/
murder ur a$$ lik 2pac but u aint neva comin bac/
Hot opener, gay 3-4 bar, wack closer, talkin about gays too much
verse is 4.0 couldve done betta kid but nice opener damn sit dude ur good
WINNER starz
check my battles out and plz vote thnx
REality v.s. AL CAPONE
Forensyx v.s. AL CAPONE
thanx 4 da advice capone
Bitch if u blind ill slap u 2 clear vision
punk if u def ill beat u till u listen
hot
u should b scared ima a real killer
ill scare u worse den a little kid scared of jackson's thriller
n0
don't piss me off ima real burner
stupid ass ho ill bitch slap u like ike turner
no been used 2 much
nigga i roll through yo hood and dip
make yo girl strip with out leavin a tip
ok
damn you about 2 get hurt
ill bury u deep in the earth
no
so u should just stop and leave
cuz im gonna win please bileave
ok
3 outta 5
faggot il punch u in the face till i break ur cartleg/
ur trash ur parent couldnt pay 4 the abortion so they threw u in the garbage/ ok
i take that bac props to ur mom i no u adore her/
i waz gona fuck that bitch last night but couldnt offord her/(lol)
go0d
i shove u bitch u only push me/
u rap lik a bitch stuck ur hand in ur pants and found out u all pussy/ ok
y u tryin 2 face me ur lik a man wit no legs runnin sackraces/
u step 2 me u lik micheal j u stick ur dick in the wrong places/
ok
u suck s0 many men ur kneecaps cracked/
murder ur a$$ lik 2pac but u aint neva comin bac/
ok
5 0utta 5
starz structur waz weak but he s punches wer harder
king u had nice structur and good punches but not enough
v starz
clos battle tho
thanx 2many ill remember 2 put more
judge the 2nd round 2 people
ey i didnt realy no the second round counted cuz i thought we waz juss playin thats y i didnt rite much
u waz
wat the fuck is wrong wit me dude im high mi bad 4 juss postin gayt sht dude im fukc up lololololol shyea
well snap ou of it damn yall cheatin me out
y0 if u high dont juss type gay sht man cuz im co0l 2 u cuz u voted 4 me but dont freepost gay sht lik that
na i dont no wat the fuck that faggot waz doin man
dude i said mi bad i waz juss fucckin around becuz im smokin and jokin lik a ....flokin haha my bad 4 bein a nizzle 2 ur bdizzle ok man peace brother
yo starz our battle waz tight
ye it waz we go0d has sht 4 new cats u sht waz hot i think ur gonna win but dunno
This was a wack battle to me starz got it but barely both came wack
Bitch if u blind ill slap u 2 clear vision
punk if u def ill beat u till u listen
wtf?
u should b scared ima a real killer
ill scare u worse den a little kid scared of jackson's thriller
No
don't piss me off ima real burner
stupid ass ho ill bitch slap u like ike turner
....no
nigga i roll through yo hood and dip
make yo girl strip with out leavin a tip
wack
damn you about 2 get hurt
ill bury u deep in the earth
.....nope
so u should just stop and leave
cuz im gonna win please bileave
wtf? i dont care
faggot il punch u in the face till i break ur cartleg/
ur trash ur parent couldnt pay 4 the abortion so they threw u in the garbage/
okay?
i take that bac props to ur mom i no u adore her/
i waz gona fuck that bitch last night but couldnt offord her/(lol)
wack
i shove u bitch u only push me/
u rap lik a bitch stuck ur hand in ur pants and found out u all pussy/
no
y u tryin 2 face me ur lik a man wit no legs runnin sackraces/
u step 2 me u lik micheal j u stick ur dick in the wrong places/
no
u suck s0 many men ur kneecaps cracked/
murder ur a$$ lik 2pac but u aint neva comin bac/
neither did 2pac, wack
vote-starz
yea at least tell me wut i did wrong dnt b a bitch metaskriptz wuteva yo name is
vote peeps.........................................
SJ. King- that was tight....yo opener was iight could have been better and also yo vocab was wack dawg.that could have been way better and tha flow from 1 line to another line to iight iight...the words for each lines could have been longer....also yo ender was iight that could have been stronger..........................i give yo verse a 6/10
starz- that was better....yo opener was stronger...and yo vocab was babyish.....also yo lines were a whole lot longer than kings...... tha flow was better it wasnt sketchy like kings.....yo ender was tight.......tha transition was tighter but could have been better...i give this verse a 7/10
Overall= it was a close fight and i had to give it to STARZ
vote g s
vote il return favas
hit up this sht so it can b don
i just need like 5 more posts then i can vote but when i do vote my vote will be 4 starz that was some nice shit.