yep you faggot. Your just another shit talker bout to get merked.
10 lines
you drop first
house rules
blah blah blah
fuck you.
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yep you faggot. Your just another shit talker bout to get merked.
10 lines
you drop first
house rules
blah blah blah
fuck you.
ima gunna need more than 10 lines to merk you foo...
You agree or no?.... Make this shit 10 lines or above..
BTW this is my checkin in..
Sure, 50 lines.
haha ight then... ima spir this..
ill write my shit now
I mean 50 lines = highest limit.
im TASER and i vomit cos i HEARD UR CLIP
a Desert Eagle is the thing i commit my MURDER WITH
u gonna kill nothing but ur mic and ur FRIENDSHIPS
I gonna burn u although this is not my native LANGUAGE
Sinamen u are back but u arent GHETTOLICIOUS
Sinamen u are back and u make RAP FOR BITCHES
hit me Like a cyclone? are u ONE EYED OR WHAT?
i kill u and i only need ONE KNIFE FOR THAT
what the hell? i saw ur mom on ROTTEN DOT COM
my flow still ist the sickest/ on stage u have FORGOTTEN UR SONGS
my english isnt correct but its SUFFICENT TO WIN
look what i got: thousand PUSSYS STRESSIN MY PINT
i cant handle ur technique cos my LEVEL IS HIGH
ur are unique cos ur task is feeding CATTLE FOR LIFE
spit REAL SHIT but dont know how to DEAL WITH
dope mc s who explain u that u are a WEAK BITCH
ur Rebirth? What the fuck are u an ALIEN KID?
im a wannabe but u and ur father are SHARING A BITCH
blabla ur text,rap style EVERYTHING GAY
ill burn you doesnt matter WHATEVER YOU SAY
i dont know what u can do cos you NEVER DONE
intelligent things , piss off this page and BETTER RUN
listen to my clip and say this KID IS NICE
u make songs with tha content: i stay a BITCH FOR LIFE!
but its okay hes jus the sin who lost the AMEN
might have to sound-out-my-words coz the bitch only knows LAMEN
:CHANGE FLOW:
Im the lyrical Holy ghost
The G-Force from my flow
Makes continents explode
Ure mind blows/ brain implodes
Penetrate the sound barrier/ give u vertigo
Like bungee段ng off a tower
Without the rope/ leave u wit no hope
u cant handle / u cant cope
Wit this nuclear storm
Leave u scorched, ripped and torn
My words transform
Into blades attached to metaphors
This is the start of the 3rd World War
Cuz u knocked on Hells door
And released Tasers roar
Drown u so deep
You値l hit the ocean floor
Drop u on all fours
While Lucifer gives it to u
Raw and hardcore
You,ll never write ure next subliminal hit
I wont ever let u spit
Cuz I値l leave u mouth foamin
In a seizure havin a fit
Inject heroin in the nipple of ure right tit
Smoke u like mind-altering herbs
Straighten out the Earths curve
Death occurs when u hear my words
Im sentencing u Chatta
Uve just been served
A lot more than just muthafuckin
Weakass hors d弛euvres
MOTHA FUCKA U JUST GOT ROASTED BRING UR BITCH ASS
OH, i didnt see that last part.. thot it was the bare minimum.. and by the way.. i took 2 styles of rap on ur ass..
To calrify the 50 line thing i never saw it.. i jus turned a beat on and started to flow so..
If you put the last part together it can be 50 lines.. i just wrote it different
haha nigga aRE You bailin on me??
thats shit hurry up and spit ur shit
lol @ you.
Bitch you suck, he just jockin some slut time and time again....
The faggot lives in a hole so he could actually Gopher the win.
Kid experienced a sin, went to heaven and tried to be boss
But God wouldnt let em in, and said "BITCH ACCEPT THE LOSS."
Just expect to get tossed, The hoss just cant handle this G
But the cunt battled like a fag, and assumed he could beat me.
i guess he just cant see...That its rap, and he just cant be phat
And I would leave you blue with words but ya sig covered that.
This fake fuck has gone mad.... The clit thinks he'll get admitted
Cuz this thread would be total trash.... If I wasnt here to save it.
Pz.
1)no one gonna read all that
2)u say he is merked befo the battle is over
3) u sigged it?
aye taser yo shit was pretty clean blood now was see wat this oder cat spits
he is going to merked .. SINAMEN THATS TRASH..
THAT ALL U GOT AND IT TOOK U THAT LONG TO WRITE THAT??
Right....
Well uhh we'll see who lost :)
yeah go gather ya fucking O.M.G crew and throw ur shit at me wit ya dik ridaz i dont care..
i kno i merk'd you so i dont give a fucking shit.. and your not human if you cant tell my rap was dope and ur's was shit.. well here , It wasnt shit, it was ight.. But it just dont compare to mine
LMFAO.... If thats how you feel, you know nothing of rap..
You might be good at audio, cuz it sucks lyrically.
But uhh, you lost this completely.
Are you fucking kiddin me? And i know more than rap of you.. wanna fukin hear my tracks?
And audio sucks lyrically?? you fucking kidding me, and dick can slang like a rapper by writing shit out, but no doubt, a true rapper can put it on a beat, take it to a studio , and record how you got beat.. simple as that
And i did NOT lose completely , you truly are pathetic sinamen..
K watch the votes, if you dont think so.
yeah, like i said, go gather your pussy crew to come dik ride..
it doesnt really matter.
ARE YOU FUCKING RETARDED?
CREWS CAN NOT VOTE ON ANOTHER MEBER's BATTLES.
I DONT HAVE DICKRYDERS, I DONT ASK FOR VOTES.
AND YOU FUCKING LOST YOU DUMBASS NOOB.
dont make me get you banned.
Banned? Thats funny , Degrading yo self that low b/c you lost to me.. Excsuse me , Loosing to me..
Im new here anyway, i dont care.. didnt kno crews couldnt vote oh well..
And my ass you dont have dickryders we'll see..
uppin this shit people vote on this...........
Bitch you suck, he just jockin some slut time and time again....
The faggot lives in a hole so he could actually Gopher the win.
Just expect to get tossed, The hoss just cant handle this G
But the cunt battled like a fag, and assumed he could beat me.
vs.
nothing.
Sin took this one easily.. other cat obviously had a written because he didn't attack his opponent directly and seemed more of a keystyle about random shit.. he just didn't have any real punches that hit his opponent directly while Sin came much more consistent with harder hitting punches.. mainly the ones i quoted. but this battle was one sided and anyone who doesn't think so is an idiot.
v/ SinAmen
not all battles are direct punches.. Did you even read everything i said?
Its not fucking pre-written .. b/c i didnt do punches u come to that conclusion?
Just expect to get tossed, The hoss just cant handle this G
But the cunt battled like a fag, and assumed he could beat me
vs
nothing
sin had direct punches.. harder hittin punches and actually shit aimed at his opponent... n taser dropped like 50 bars thats some herb shit
it dont matter.... taser will get dqd regardless for havin more then 3 battles open
vote - sin
lol i dont care..
i kno my freestyles are clean
Bitch you suck, he just jockin some slut time and time again....
The faggot lives in a hole so he could actually Gopher the win.
word.. that won the battle. The other dude didn't even have anything close to a good punch. He's basically an all audio head I'm guessin because he doesn't know much about a text battle
Sin wins
hahahahahahahah this is funny as fuck
audio head power
Sin
You Had An Over All Good Verse You Came Constant With Your Shit, You Had Punches Here That Came And Hit Hard, Personals Was Alright Man, Haard Hitting Wordplay Was Decent, Came And Went, This Was An On Target Verse, On Of The Best Verse I Read So Far, On THis Site, Strcutre Was Cool Man Nice, You Had Some Good Vocabulary To Very Nice
Taser
You Had A Cool Verse Man Some Hard Hitting Punches, You Had Some Personals Which I Found Was Creative Which Is Always Good Man, You Had Vocabulary , Another Good Thing In This Verse, Like I Said Though Add Multi's And Meta's In Your Verse Man Weerd, Structure Need To Elevate On That, Over All Good Drop By Both Of You
Vote-Sin
Third Battle In My Sig Return The Favor And THen I Will Poll,
Aight imma break this down because i for one actually know what im talking about when it comes to battles...
taser -
im TASER and i vomit cos i HEARD UR CLIP
a Desert Eagle is the thing i commit my MURDER WITH
I doubt you murder anyone - Gun lines = wack - 0 points
u gonna kill nothing but ur mic and ur FRIENDSHIPS
I gonna burn u although this is not my native LANGUAGE
Yeah that would be a good punch, i can picture a china man pullin that one off - 3 points
Sinamen u are back but u arent GHETTOLICIOUS
Sinamen u are back and u make RAP FOR BITCHES
Had to be the gayest line ive ever heard - -2 points
hit me Like a cyclone? are u ONE EYED OR WHAT?
i kill u and i only need ONE KNIFE FOR THAT
Didnt even rhyme here... That does not rhyme with what - 2
what the hell? i saw ur mom on ROTTEN DOT COM
my flow still ist the sickest/ on stage u have FORGOTTEN UR SONGS
Umm this is aight, your grammer is ass, you sound like a russian.. - 2 points
my english isnt correct but its SUFFICENT TO WIN
look what i got: thousand PUSSYS STRESSIN MY PINT
Stressin ya what? a pint is a unit of measure... im assuming your talking about your wanker... - 1 point
i cant handle ur technique cos my LEVEL IS HIGH
ur are unique cos ur task is feeding CATTLE FOR LIFE
i see your throwing multis.. they are not good tho... some cat in our battle told me to throw more multis... i guess i should of capitolized all the rhymes in my verse... - 3 points
spit REAL SHIT but dont know how to DEAL WITH
dope mc s who explain u that u are a WEAK BITCH
filler ... - 2 points
ur Rebirth? What the fuck are u an ALIEN KID?
im a wannabe but u and ur father are SHARING A BITCH
So far your best line.... - 4 points
blabla ur text,rap style EVERYTHING GAY
ill burn you doesnt matter WHATEVER YOU SAY
see this is what im talking about.. somone on this site will be like " oh thats a nice punch".. thats not a punch.. thats bullshit... - -2 points for saying nothing
i dont know what u can do cos you NEVER DONE
intelligent things , piss off this page and BETTER RUN
GRAMMER!!!! Doubble negitives get minus points!!! - -2
listen to my clip and say this KID IS NICE
u make songs with tha content: i stay a BITCH FOR LIFE!
You just called yourself a bitch..... -20 points
but its okay hes jus the sin who lost the AMEN
might have to sound-out-my-words coz the bitch only knows LAMEN
ehhhh - 2 points... your ending should of been better
:CHANGE FLOW:
Im the lyrical Holy ghost
The G-Force from my flow
Makes continents explode
Ure mind blows/ brain implodes
Um just because you arrange your verse differntly doesnt mean shit... its the same thing... you spit how ever you want to spit when you read somthing... i garuntee you that everyone on this site who reads this is reading it different anyhow... 2 points
Penetrate the sound barrier/ give u vertigo
Like bungee段ng off a tower
Without the rope/ leave u wit no hope
u cant handle / u cant cope
ehhh vertigo is the only word ive seen you use that was good... after that it was basic.. -4 points
Wit this nuclear storm
Leave u scorched, ripped and torn
My words transform
Into blades attached to metaphors
Im starting to think you should of only posted this verse... 3 points
This is the start of the 3rd World War
Cuz u knocked on Hells door
And released Tasers roar
I am woman hear me roar - 1 point
Drown u so deep
You値l hit the ocean floor
Drop u on all fours
While Lucifer gives it to u
Raw and hardcore
Shit is too basic man... filler 2 points
You,ll never write ure next subliminal hit
I wont ever let u spit
Cuz I値l leave u mouth foamin
In a seizure havin a fit
filler 2
Inject heroin in the nipple of ure right tit
Smoke u like mind-altering herbs
Straighten out the Earths curve
Death occurs when u hear my words
ehhh ill give you 3 here
Im sentencing u Chatta
Uve just been served
A lot more than just muthafuckin
Weakass hors d弛euvres
its o'deuvers, im sure you ment it tho... 3 points
FOR A TOTAL OF 13 points... That gives you a really wack score yo... That calling yourself a bitch for life was some bad shit... even if you were trying to make it seem like he was calling himself a bitch for life.. you didnt... you called your self a bitch for life... thats what happens when you have bad grammer
next
sinamen
Bitch you suck, he just jockin some slut time and time again....
The faggot lives in a hole so he could actually Gopher the win.
See thats a text punch.. gopher the win... +7 points
Kid experienced a sin, went to heaven and tried to be boss
But God wouldnt let em in, and said "BITCH ACCEPT THE LOSS."
jokes +4
Just expect to get tossed, The hoss just cant handle this G
But the cunt battled like a fag, and assumed he could beat me.
filler +2
i guess he just cant see...That its rap, and he just cant be phat
And I would leave you blue with words but ya sig covered that.
ahhh sig/avatar lines are weak in most cases.... including this one +2
This fake fuck has gone mad.... The clit thinks he'll get admitted
Cuz this thread would be total trash.... If I wasnt here to save it.
Save it and admitted dont rhyme... but it made sense... +1
since you finished with 20 less bars ill give you an extra +10 points for a total of 26 points... 2x as much as taser with half as many lines...
too bad i dont have 100 post yet..
peep my battle vs. the german {taser}
didnt call myself a bitch for life idiot...
im saying thats what he said..
are you illeterate?..
never the less put more feedback.......
obviously not, im the one who knows how to write...
"I know more of hip hop then you" LMAO
yah thats quite amusing????
man im with u taser....fuck sinamen...im figuring he's prolly got about 10 accounts w/different emails so he can cheat and vote 4 himself, just under a different name...but, yeah, dawg, if i'd of seen this battle a few days ago, i would've voted 4 u... a little too late 4 that tho...u got some tight shit tho...i liked urs better...fuck sinamen, he's jus a 14 year old bitch who didn't come wit a dick...
Sinamen u did ur thing nice lines and flow but no good punches need to work on that but in overall ur verse is 5.5/10
Taser u did pack some punches no good rhymes though need to elevate on vocab and word structure and also u needed like 50 lines to kill him so i give u an overall of4.5/10
Sinamen came with more direct hits, Tased kept flowin and got off subject...frankly the shit got boring after a while. Tased I think you may have some talent but this wasnt your battle. I think you can do better, challenge the bitch to a rematch and go for the throat next time.
kids a huge erb.
battle was weak.
Bitch you suck, he just jockin some slut time and time again....
The faggot lives in a hole so he could actually Gopher the win.
common sin, that was the best bar of the battle and pretty poor.
v/sin.
Fuck outta here.
only peeps that know rap likes me.
And obviously this noob rush shows that you have no brain for it.
And dope emcee, even if you did vote... you'd be made fun of fag.
deosnt matter..
sinamen lemme hear your bitch ass on audio, yuor probably a 15 yr old white ass punk..
check open mic see how i merk'd Ex..
dont matter, i didnt do direct attacks but hes still garbage..
any little white boy can write out lines, but a real rappa can ball on audio
lmao what a battle this was onesided all the way Sin took this one no doubt
Taser-
Wtf was up with all those damn lines, were you written a god damn poem? or a journal entry...damn, you wrote like 50 god damn lines and you still lost!LMAO, you had played punchlines , hardly someone them were all wack ...personals were Uhh...cuz there really wasnt any...structure..was okay? even though i think you bit cuz you style changed a shyt load in your two different verses...overall you had a wack verse and you really need to elevate alot
sin
Okay verse..you took this one easily, punchlines were okay some where really wack , but enough to beat taser, personals were iight some really werent hitten very hard...overall nice verse but i ve seen you do alot better , but it was enough to beat taser...
overall vote- SinAmen
both keep it up , pretty onesided battle , dont really think i need to explain more