Reality vs AL CAPONE

12 lines max due in about 20-30 minutes.. it doesnt matter who drops first either

I'll put a gun to ur mouth and have u screamin mercy/
Kill bitch ass niggas like u who think they can merk me/
Yo im a breath of fresh air and u stink like mornin breath/
Cap-one shot to reality have him thinkin about his death/
I see ur head its round ill turn it into a hemisphere/
I fuck hos u fuck guys so u can call urself a "queer"/
The totality of real things in the world depends of people's knowledge and perception/
Just count tha totality of what hes gon say to be real and ull see he's a deception/
So Reality theres no existence in u cuz u aint an actual being/
Ur imagined and false nature so another loss is what ur seeing/

so far alcpone came hard with that rap if reality dont come hard al comin home with the gold

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lookin no further faggot your finding a loss
you have absolutely no flow cuz like watches with no batteries your timing is off
plus your soft as fuck ..your face? ill leave every part of it bruised
u aint tough u a pussy matter of fact ive seen cotton balls thats harder than you
you get no respect bitch your about as fake as they get
the only thing worse than a dead gangster is a nerd playing one on the net
you fuckin SUCK GEEK YOUR GAY, everything you BUST WEAK THEIR PLAYED
battle me audio or text it doesnt matter...
cause like a transvestite your getting FUCKED EITHER WAY
ill make your scribes recline far..
you aint prepared to face combat in lines g why sparr?
you aint ready cause like capone your gonna die behind "bars"

the only thing that was gay on realitys rap is

you fuckin SUCK GEEK YOUR GAY, everything you BUST WEAK THEIR PLAYED

but that shit was hard
i think its a tie

^^stfu no ones asking you to commentate on my battles faggot

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can someone vote plz

ay u will vote when i get about 7 more post i will be back im out

reality one real talk thas who i would vote for if i could aye but al capone you feelin to take me on

i cant vote but reality u won that shit u had more range with ur words
capone u put ur words together well but it was quite basic 2 sentance rhyming

Yo why u sayin u vote for him and then want to battle me? whats wrong wit u?

ill battle either one of yall jus need some battles on my record ya feel

AC- your opener was too simple. your "...queer" bar was pretty played, try to lay off the gay jokes unless they are really good. the breath death rhyme was way to simple. the perception bar was a long bar in a verse of short bars, which was kinda random. then your closer was all philisophical and shit and i just wasnt buying it. all this being said, the lines you said were pretty solid. this was like a C+ because your lack of vocab kills your nice lines.

RE- this is a really nice verse. your first bar had a nice punch, your second bar was a really hard punch, "just played one on the net" was a nice end to that bar, "fucked either way" was nice too. that finisher was just awesome. last nail in the coffin. your punches hit really hard. the flow is off at times, and one gay joke is too many gay jokes, but i liked this overall. This is a B+. Polish the flow and add some multis, and take out the gay joke, and maybe one extra play on words, and this is an A without a doubt.

nice battle for FL, but due to the reasons above...

v/RE

p.s. im outta uppins in my battles in my sig, please hit me back, thanks in advance

^^aiight i got you im reality by the way

you faggot liljay.. how the hell are you going to poll a vote with no explanation dumbass

i think he won becuase at the beginning he killed you thats my explanation



I'll put a gun to ur mouth and have u screamin mercy/
Kill bitch ass niggas like u who think they can merk me/
Yo im a breath of fresh air and u stink like mornin breath/
Cap-one shot to reality have him thinkin about his death/

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they both spit some good shit id give it to reality

Any votes here plz vote thnx

plz vote on this battle thnx alot

PLZ Vote on this battle thnx

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all im askin for is some votes plz thnx

it was pretty even dey were both kind of weak im leanin towards capone though cuz da otha mans rymes were weak

plz vote on this battles thnx

plz vote on this battle thnx

^^this boards sad.. they wont vote on your shit unless you have enough post to return the favor.. aka dickridding votes

plz vote thnx

Al - Not a fan of your verse, a lot of it didn't really make much sense or wasn't really effective. You had a lot of statements and filler. Like you'll have him thinking of death... okay, that's not an insult though. Gay lines are played, don't use shit like that. Overally you need to think of better concepts and word them better if you want to win.

Reality - Your flow was really off at a lot of points, but as a whole, not a bad verse at all, better than I expected from ya. A lot of the concepts you had I've seen before like about having harder balls, but you setup punches and your punchlines were all at least hitting to some degree so good job with that. You came with punches and he didn't so you take this.

Vote - Reality

I'd appreciate it if you hit the link up in my sig, thx

AC- your opener was too simple. your "...queer" bar was pretty played, try to lay off the gay jokes unless they are really good. the breath death rhyme was way to simple. the perception bar was a long bar in a verse of short bars, which was kinda random. then your closer was all philisophical and shit and i just wasnt buying it. all this being said, the lines you said were pretty solid. this was like a C+ because your lack of vocab kills your nice lines.

RE- this is a really nice verse. your first bar had a nice punch, your second bar was a really hard punch, "just played one on the net" was a nice end to that bar, "fucked either way" was nice too. that finisher was just awesome. last nail in the coffin. your punches hit really hard. the flow is off at times, and one gay joke is too many gay jokes, but i liked this overall. This is a B+. Polish the flow and add some multis, and take out the gay joke, and maybe one extra play on words, and this is an A without a doubt.

nice battle for FL, but due to the reasons above...

v/RE
Same as steve
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I'll put a gun to ur mouth and have u screamin mercy/
Kill bitch ass niggas like u who think they can merk me/---COOD B BETTR

Yo im a breath of fresh air and u stink like mornin breath/
Cap-one shot to reality have him thinkin about his death/---OK

I see ur head its round ill turn it into a hemisphere/
I fuck hos u fuck guys so u can call urself a "queer"/---EHH! SIMPLE

The totality of real things in the world depends of people's knowledge and perception/
Just count tha totality of what hes gon say to be real and ull see he's a deception/---NICE, BUT SOME MAY SAY SIMPLE

So Reality theres no existence in u cuz u aint an actual being/
Ur imagined and false nature so another loss is what ur seeing/---DECENT END'N

NICE DROP HOMIE...
I DIDNT THINK IT WAS BAD VERSE...YOU HAD NICE LINES,
1 OR 2 LINES STRETCHED, NICE WORDPLAY, ON YA OPPONENT......
OVERALL GOOD DROP......


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lookin no further faggot your finding a loss
you have absolutely no flow cuz like watches with no batteries your timing is off---NICE OPENER

plus your soft as fuck ..your face? ill leave every part of it bruised
u aint tough u a pussy matter of fact ive seen cotton balls thats harder than you---YEA-YEA

you get no respect bitch your about as fake as they get
the only thing worse than a dead gangster is a nerd playing one on the net---NICE

you fuckin SUCK GEEK YOUR GAY, everything you BUST WEAK THEIR PLAYED
battle me audio or text it doesnt matter...
cause like a transvestite your getting FUCKED EITHER WAY---CONSISTENCY

ill make your scribes recline far..
you aint prepared to face combat in lines g why sparr?
you aint ready cause like capone your gonna die behind "bars"---REALLY NICE ENDN


HONESTLY THIS WAS A REALLY GOOD BATTLE BOTH WAYS OVERALL,
THE ONLY FUCKED UP PART ABOUT, IS THAT BOTH MCS ARE ON A DIFFERENT LEVEL LYRICALLY,
BUT SEEING ITS JUDGED ON, WHO WAS STRONGET W/ PUNCHLINES, CONSISTENT........
MY VOTE HAS TO GO FOR ---------->>>REALITY
SEEING AS THAT HIS VERSE WAS STRONGER IN PUNCHLINES

AC, YOU DID YA THING, YOU GOT SKILLS HOMIE,
ALL YOU GOTTA DO JUST WORK ON YA WORDPLAY &
JUST KEEP IN MIND...
THERES ALWAYS ROOM FOR IMPROVEMENT............

REALITY: I REALLY HAD NO COMPLAINTS,................JUST USE A LIL MORE WORDPLAY, NEXT TIME, YA RHYME SCHEME SORTA SEEMED PREDICTABLE.

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plz vote thnx

yoyo ill vote Al Capone 4 thiz 1....he's basically the betta rapper
------The totality of real things in the world depends of people's knowledge and perception/
Just count tha totality of what hes gon say to be real and ull see he's a deception/

i didnt like much of either so i aint gunna vite on it

vote plz thnx

plz vote thnx

I'll put a gun to ur mouth and have u screamin mercy/
Kill bitch ass niggas like u who think they can merk me/
so so
Yo im a breath of fresh air and u stink like mornin breath/
Cap-one shot to reality have him thinkin about his death/
ok
I see ur head its round ill turn it into a hemisphere/
I fuck hos u fuck guys so u can call urself a "queer"/
ok
The totality of real things in the world depends of people's knowledge and perception/
Just count tha totality of what hes gon say to be real and ull see he's a deception/
uhh ok?
So Reality theres no existence in u cuz u aint an actual being/
Ur imagined and false nature so another loss is what ur seeing/
haha nice

over ur verse wasnt all too good. a lot of shit was played, like talkin bout guns and queers. every on fricken battles by sayin gun lines and how much their gay, enough with that shit. be more original and try usin more than punches, but multis, metas,personals wutever just to make ur verse sound better. 5/10

lookin no further faggot your finding a loss
you have absolutely no flow cuz like watches with no batteries your timing is off
ha good
plus your soft as fuck ..your face? ill leave every part of it bruised
u aint tough u a pussy matter of fact ive seen cotton balls thats harder than you
lol nice
you get no respect bitch your about as fake as they get
the only thing worse than a dead gangster is a nerd playing one on the net
lol
you fuckin SUCK GEEK YOUR GAY, everything you BUST WEAK THEIR PLAYED
battle me audio or text it doesnt matter...
cause like a transvestite your getting FUCKED EITHER WAY
ok good
ill make your scribes recline far..
you aint prepared to face combat in lines g why sparr?
you aint ready cause like capone your gonna die behind "bars"
haha nice endin

overall, ur verse deffinately crushed him, ur punches really hit him hard and u came back with an orignal verse ya kno. u started out smooth and ended smooth with ya verse. i could tell there were some type of metas in there and u tryyed ryhming more than 2 lines. nice way to work a battle good job and nice punches. 7.5/10

v/reality

reason for vote- he came harder, with better punches that made an impact on his oppenent and coming with more original shit than al.

please hit me back with a vote in my sig

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