12 lines .. drop within 20 minutes after battle is set up
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12 lines .. drop within 20 minutes after battle is set up
yo you gonna drop bitch
your not a real mc.. so lightweighted when i "punch" at you I feel tha breeze
this bitch is out of gas yall even his name says that this killas "E" (empty)
drill an squeeze every ounce of life out of you.. shit this herbs too wack
seriously I thought dr.seuss stopped rhyming till I heard you rap
your rhymes are a piece of crap.. I mean they ~sound too bitch~
dude your fuckin verses are like constipation..
cause all your "forced drops" will never ~amount to shit~
you've got no concept of battling I mean this dude cant spawn strong types
he's so stupid his idea of throwing punchlines is flipping this juice stands on prom night
dont even recite cause dude your gonna get sparked
killa your lyrics are like retarded racers because their dumb from the start
Yo my bad ill spit in a minut i went to go eat but im back bitch
U sayin that u callin me empty/
Cmon man REality check ur mom is havin my baby/
Have u spinnin around like tha revolver 3 80/
Nigga talks alot of shit but i can take yo lady/
Son u should know im a pimp/
one shot in yo leg will make u walk wit a limp/
and u wont clap back cuz u a wimp/
ill make yo head blow up like if u were a blimp/
Like yo name says u need to do it again/
Cuz tha RE is tha ality so ill come and hit u wit tha mack 10/
then ull be wishin why did i face him/
Son im tha boss like if i were thug slim/
KILLA E THA REALEST KILLA :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:
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your not a real mc.. so lightweighted when i "punch" at you I feel tha breeze
this bitch is out of gas yall even his name says that this killas "E" (empty)
drill an squeeze every ounce of life out of you.. shit this herbs too wack
seriously I thought dr.seuss stopped rhyming till I heard you rap
your rhymes are a piece of crap.. I mean they ~sound too bitch~
dude your fuckin verses are like constipation..
cause all your "forced drops" will never ~amount to shit~
you've got no concept of battling I mean this dude cant spawn strong types
he's so stupid his idea of throwing punchlines is flipping this juice stands on prom night
dont even recite cause dude your gonna get sparked
killa your lyrics are like retarded racers because their dumb from the start
not bad, but not good, id work on structure and content, yur flow aint bad, but again nothing special.
overall:4.5/10
U sayin that u callin me empty/
Cmon man REality check ur mom is havin my baby/
Have u spinnin around like tha revolver 3 80/
Nigga talks alot of shit but i can take yo lady/
Son u should know im a pimp/
one shot in yo leg will make u walk wit a limp/
and u wont clap back cuz u a wimp/
ill make yo head blow up like if u were a blimp/
Like yo name says u need to do it again/
Cuz tha RE is tha ality so ill come and hit u wit tha mack 10/
then ull be wishin why did i face him/
Son im tha boss like if i were thug slim/
WHAT THA FUCK was dat dawg? Dat sucked,dnt ever twist rappers names, like THUG SLIM, its SLim Thug and i kno wat u were goin for, and it didnt work. Flow, structure, conetent, punches, all need work dawg.
overall:2/10
WEAK ASS BATTLE but my vote will go to REality
v/reality
AY YO HIT UP SUM BATTLES IN MY SIG DAWG!! THANX
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that vote wasnt explained well enough.. im not even going to wste my time returning votes
fine damn:
REality-Nice flow, but work on ur punches and word structure, if u do dat ull elevate. Juts wasnt feelin it too much tho, but ill give u vote b/c ur better than tha other guy,both need to elevate yall...
KIlla E- It sucked, u need to work on word strucute, flow, and everytihng else. Id try checkin out sum otha battles and learn form them. Sorry dawg but that verse was just wack....
Yo thanx husla ill try to work on that shit it was just a battle i thought quick u know but if u want me to ill take a day and show u i can kill u and turn u from a husla to a busta BIATCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yeah i kno u was thinkin quick, dawg, and sumtime we can battle,hahahaahaha even tho its a waste of my time, but not now cuzz i cant open anymore battles yet...BIATCH!!!!hahahaahahahaha
But i can motha fucka lets go u have three verse of 16 bars each to do and ill do tha same
all three verses will be due by this Friday rite b4 saturaday midnite
come and accept my challenge bitch nigga
OMG im gunna get banned for dis but o well, dis bitch shud b put in his place, GOD my fuckin ego.....
sorry for freepostin.....SET IT UP BITCH!
Reality you had some really streached lines in there... but you had some decent punchs.... nothing amazing... not bad all around verse... defiatly enought to take teh win... just structure needs some work......
Killa - Your punches where lacking nothing really hit. No wit or anything... and your structure could use soe work too.... no originlity just an all around bleh verse... nothing really at all....
basically... killa droped lame... while reality droped decent...
vote - Reality
Ma link:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=179068
Man fuck yall nigga u call ur self tha last mohican man mohican my dick u mexican slut dont CROSS THA BORDER GO BACK SLUT
P.S. STOP SELLIN CRACK
lmfao killas bout to get meeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrked
all links well get returned give me a moment
uve got some serious problems wit ur anger dawg...u ant rap and u get madd when ppl tell u how it is...u want to battle me, we can...i dnt give a fuck....just waitin for ur srry ass to set it up...dnt get racist either dawg
sry for freespotin he was gettin racist.
%^^^^^^talkin to killa e dawg not reallity, realit is actually not a bad rapper ^^^^^%
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this was a very simple battle thrown down by KILLA E it lacked in almost every area the word choice was also very predictable with a weak flow none of your punches really hit close to had to real come ight have a couple of nice quotable aswell in this piece and came a bit more witty with harder punches but he too needs to fix his structure overal it was an easy battle to vote on note close
vote.........reality
link here
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=178658
REality won big time in my eyes , killa ur rhymes were way to full of s/g :hump:
^^ can you please explain your vote more god
reality gets this battle easily...
killa e work on ur punches...ur strutcture... work on set ups n punches...come on fam... "ur moms havin my baby" those lines wont win u battles....keep droppin ull elevate
REality ur lines were stretched but u had alot of decent punches.... keep droppin fam.... decent verse... structure could be a lot better... i think u half assed this but u still get the win
vote - reality
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i think ive said this before.. VOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTE!
he's so stupid his idea of throwing punchlines is flipping this juice stands on prom night-reality
jin has a line the same as this one, just reworded different to sound better
^^word? i didnt know that.. but yeah up this
vote.. honestly i wont bite
ups lets get this closed
jeez why cant this battle get votes?
OHIO in the muhfuckin building.....
Reality.....first line was smoove.....the feel the breeze line was smoove......ganksta...the E line was nasty boy im tellin you.....thats about all that i REALLY enjoyed...eveything else was smoove....but those stood out
Killa E.....what the fuck happened to yo verse? structure was off like a bitch....and i mena like a bitch...you attempted to do multis....didnt succeed.....try harder next tyme...
vote....Reality
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god damn it.. how the hell was that vote inadequate.. well uppin again *sighs*
vote reality because he had way more punches that made sence his structure was pretty good and he came with a lot of disses to win overall reality 7/10 and the other dude 4/10 im out but yall need to check out my newset battle and vote im out
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Reality - You had some good concepts and some played concepts, but good job in the creativity department. You just need work on your wording to make your punches hit more directly. Like the gas line..okay, I get it, but could have been worded much better so you didn't have to explain it. The punchlines thing is obvious but surprisingly I've never seen it before so good job there. Overall aight verse.
Killa - From the moment I read your opener I knew you were doomed. Why is his mom having you as a baby? How is that an insult? Don't use gay jokes, mama jokes, or sex jokes, they're all played and ineffective. All you basically did the whole verse was use self-glorification and talking about how your a pimp... that doesn't insult him either. Throw insults to win battles, your shit doesn't fly.
Vote - Reality
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REality:Some clever lines(cause all your "forced drops" will never ~amount to shit~)
but your flow and structure is horrible..here's some advice, count syllables..nothing in your verse stood out and your attmept at a personal was weak, you could've done alot more with your verse but truly it was flat..
Killa:You need to actually stretch your lines, because your verse was wack..1 perosnal isn't good enough, too many played preschool lines and filler that just didn't hit hard..work on your wordplay and vocab and don't try wack lines like these especially when closing out a battle..
then ull be wishin why did i face him/
Son im tha boss like if i were thug slim/
vote: Reality..both of you need to expand your vocab and increase personals..this battle was filled with punches that just weren't needed and weak structure.
damn shame.. uppin for more votes
jeez close this fuckin battle for christ sake
Battle Not Too Good... None The Less Still Deserves A Vote...
Both Emcees Coulda Came Harder But I Feel That Reality Step Up In This Battle... Killa's Rhymes Where Too Simple
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