You are done.

Mythsofmind: my opener is probably the best line i've ever wrote

his opener-
running through LW, you got nothing to bring thats impressive
far as accomplishments, losses are the only thing thats successive

saying that shit? ^ .. still i'm sure you expect that it's fine
but goddamn, what's that say about the rest of your lines?

Feeble vs. me in the HW match-
jace lost to me, shadows & spit no showed, u brag its achieving
but really your rosters just a list of all the faggots I've beaten

Feeble's diss in an OM earlier tonight-
lets take a look at Last Word, Rb im defeating your idols..
truth is, your rosters a list of kids i've beaten for titles

i'm gettin flashbacks... Deja Vu, i'm for real n' it's true
cuz that's the only line from your OM where i was feelin' ya crew
still gonna lose.. but those punches? we know they're way off
fuckin liar.. didn't Jacent kick your wack ass outta the play-offs?

you wack faggots.

Mythsofmind: and if my life doesnt get less hectic im leaving rb

confusin' the hype, ya losin' it W.rite, first two of 'em tight?
but then your verse fell off... hey, kinda like you on the site
why you choosin' to fight? $pit showed you what chokin's about
after he gave you the shaft in LLL.. then you opened your mouth
smokin' your clout, guy's kinda gay, watcha do with ya time away?
8 bars in 2 weeks, do the math... he wrote about a line a day
it's fine to sway, but the facts dun? i bet Feeble's getting mad son
too much homework, a hectic life, wait dawg..... you have one?
your act's done, BTK sucks, there really ain't no taking it back
guess he is Born To Kill.. your whole diss by making it wack
i ain't faking this crap, my punches don't miss, i'm a savage
while it took y'all weeks to produce a diss that was average?
i'm pissed n' i'm rabid, but Center? i'm hotter than this dude
so wack that i killed Deja but didn't even bother to diss you
slaughter ya bitch crew, just quit.. get produced? believe it's a no
so next time Feeble thinks copyw.rite he should leave with the ho

short and sweet.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=178713&page=1

saying that shit? ^ .. still i'm sure you expect that it's fine
but goddamn, what's that say about the rest of your lines?
confusin' the hype, ya losin' it W.rite, first two of 'em tight?
but then your verse fell off... hey, kinda like you on the site
smokin' your clout, guy's kinda gay, watcha do with ya time away?
8 bars in 2 weeks, do the math... he wrote about a line a day
it's fine to sway, but the facts dun? i bet Feeble's getting mad son
too much homework, a hectic life, wait dawg..... you have one?
your act's done, just quit.. and get produced? believe it's a no
so next time Feeble thinks copyw.rite he should leave with the ho

I was feeling this verse for sure. Nice shit man, good punches, wordplay was dope, multi's made it flow well, i quoted the bars i liked the best up there^. Overall this was a hard consistent verse. Keep dropping shit like this. Good work.

i ain't faking this crap, my punches don't miss, i'm a savage
while it took y'all weeks to produce a diss that was average?


Man, that punch would of been nice if the setup had at LEAST been relative to the punch ..

nice multi's, a few good personals and quoted examples from the people you're dissing i thought this was a well put together diss piece structuraly. vocab could've been boosted but that is hardly essential.

good work, keep posting.

nah man this was wack and you know it.. what were u thinkin

rofl @ you calling this wack.. look at your verse in your crew's OM.. i wonder how long that took you guys.. because i wrote this immediately after i saw your diss.. took me about an hour.

its was pretty nice...ya flow was on point...consistant multis...

confusin' the hype, ya losin' it W.rite, first two of 'em tight?
but then your verse fell off... hey, kinda like you on the site
^^ LMAO

i ain't faking this crap, my punches don't miss, i'm a savage
while it took y'all weeks to produce a diss that was average?

^^ nice

Over all every thin was nice...
props
~1~

thanks dawg..

nohh yea ya wordplay was sick 2...js 4 got tht...but jus wanna say...if u added a bit of decoration might have made some points stand out..but neva the less HOT DROP

props to Lay...it was nice the beginning was tight
was kinda blah... towards the end...

i ain't faking this crap, my punches don't miss, i'm a savage
while it took y'all weeks to produce a diss that was average?

i liked this... the wording was nice, i do agree it could have been better if the setup
complimented the punch...
the disses against me were kind of expected but still nice i admit
not gone hate because we arent in the same crew...
overall good response to ours

but i must warn u...


u know i gotta get u back :thumbup:
dont take it personal just business

word, lol.. it's all good..

maybe i'll spend more time and get $pit or someone on the next diss. :)

Woah...Kids I understand beef but you got to give props where its needed and you deserve it nice shit fam tite and i might pm you for a collab...

good multis dude
overall, this thing was dope... there was some good punches in there..... awsome..
one of the better things currently in OPEN MIC
good stuff
keep it up

this killed their shit. word for word, 100 percent truth

your act's done, BTK sucks, there really ain't no taking it back
guess he is Born To Kill.. your whole diss by making it wack

That's not too bad...s'on the mild side.

Whatever Spit throws'll prolly pay me back a bit more.

Peace

Born, you had the best line in your OM

the driven by/splashed had me rollin lmao

I liked it too, dude...thanks!

Uh oh...HHH's music is hitting...gotta blaze!

Be peaceful, dude...you know how it goes...

Much respect, Spit.

Peace

same.......

Some pretty nice stuff, Pretty good I guess

Don't know the beef between you two but overal this was a nice peace, Can't wait to see feeble come pick with a responce.

I liked the majority of the disses u showed me while you keyed
flow was pretty on point lay, the line camarac didnt like...i wasnt
really feelin the setup either, but the diss was dope as a whole
if they hatin, fuckem

word, it's better than anything Deja and W.rite has put together yet.. and my shit was done in a quickness.

thanks Deon.

yo man thats tight forsure good job

one word to describe this shit

TIGHT


all I gotta say bout it