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10+ lines
no dr,crew or hate votes
i spit then u
peace be with u
ight
check
here i go
gonna let this shit flow
like the bullet out of my gun u might wanna run yo
u gonna hit the groud liek a bag of bricks
or liek yo boyfriend mushroom slapped u with his dick
dont vote KALIKO he anit got no flow
and his lines are only gonna be so-so
i be swinging "punches" like master j*
sept my lines make his look gay
i the exacutioner and u gonna die today
u best be steppen messing with me that way
gonna tie bricks to yo fet and throw u in da bay
i make yo girl say hey rubbing my dick in her face she be getting freaka
hear dis this b the last line in my spit i end it with sumthing that'll make u shit
KALIKO u gay u lost yo way like a immigrant i hope u ant here to stay-
best be n yo fucking way
* master ja is a rb rapper look him up if u want
peace brother let it be with u
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exacutioner there wasnt any good lines in there, it didnt sound like u were even trying to much. better hope kalikoze doesnt spit anything good cause then u would be done with
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You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN...
hahahahaha....................
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peace ya man nice flo wand punches
also vote we return liek he said
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if i could vote it would be for kalikoze just because his shit wasnt wack. exacutioner i dont see how ur a fly weight but oh well better luck next time
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here i go
gonna let this shit flow
SHIT
like the bullet out of my gun u might wanna run yo
u gonna hit the groud liek a bag of bricks
or liek yo boyfriend mushroom slapped u with his dick
DATS PROPER SHIT
dont vote KALIKO he anit got no flow
and his lines are only gonna be so-so
WTF???
i be swinging "punches" like master j*
sept my lines make his look gay
SO-SO
i the exacutioner and u gonna die today
u best be steppen messing with me that way
gonna tie bricks to yo fet and throw u in da bay
CRAP
i make yo girl say hey rubbing my dick in her face she be getting freaka
hear dis this b the last line in my spit i end it with sumthing that'll make u shit
KALIKO u gay u lost yo way like a immigrant i hope u ant here to stay-
best be n yo fucking way
OVERALL: 4/10 THIS WOZ REALI SHIT TO SIMPLE AND LEARN TO SPELL EH???
You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
GOOD
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
OK
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
LOL
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
SO-SO
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
NICE
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
SWEET
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
GOOD
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN
IGHT
OVERALL: 8/10 SOME GOOD PUNCHLINES AND A LOT BETA FLOW
OVERALL
THIS BATTLE WASNT EVEN CLOSE!!!!!! KALIKOZE911 TOOK IT EASY!!!!
V/KALIKOZE911
OMG, Don't really have to break this down, It was easily and one sides battle but oh well..
Ex
ight
check
here i go
gonna let this shit flow
like the bullet out of my gun u might wanna run yo
u gonna hit the groud liek a bag of bricks
or liek yo boyfriend mushroom slapped u with his dick
dont vote KALIKO he anit got no flow
and his lines are only gonna be so-so
i be swinging "punches" like master j*
sept my lines make his look gay
i the exacutioner and u gonna die today
u best be steppen messing with me that way
gonna tie bricks to yo fet and throw u in da bay
i make yo girl say hey rubbing my dick in her face she be getting freaka
hear dis this b the last line in my spit i end it with sumthing that'll make u shit
KALIKO u gay u lost yo way like a immigrant i hope u ant here to stay-
best be n yo fucking way
Wack as hell, You have alot to work, Flow punches mutlis structure the list goes on,
Keep battling tho thats the only way to get better...
KALI
You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN...
Pretty decent verse, Wasn't to bad, Had some nice lines in it.. Good shit son, Keep up the work..
V/ KALI
Thought this was a one sides battle, Big up to both of you tho, Keep battlin and elevate...
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ight
check
here i go
gonna let this shit flow
like the bullet out of my gun u might wanna run yo
u gonna hit the groud liek a bag of bricks
or liek yo boyfriend mushroom slapped u with his dick
dont vote KALIKO he anit got no flow
and his lines are only gonna be so-so
i be swinging "punches" like master j*
sept my lines make his look gay
i the exacutioner and u gonna die today
u best be steppen messing with me that way
gonna tie bricks to yo fet and throw u in da bay
i make yo girl say hey rubbing my dick in her face she be getting freaka
hear dis this b the last line in my spit i end it with sumthing that'll make u shit
KALIKO u gay u lost yo way like a immigrant i hope u ant here to stay-
best be n yo fucking way
pretty weak...verse on the whole...you needa work on your punches alot more...include personals n multis...metaphors....make sure u direct ur verse toward ur opponent at all times...keep battlin thou n u'll get better...
kal
You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN...
nice verse kal...some good lines....decnet punches...good flow...and an overall good verse...keep it up...
hit up my battle with lockup.....pz
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ight
check
here i go
gonna let this shit flow
like the bullet out of my gun u might wanna run yo
u gonna hit the groud liek a bag of bricks
or liek yo boyfriend mushroom slapped u with his dick
nope wack opener
dont vote KALIKO he anit got no flow
and his lines are only gonna be so-so
so-so..lol
i be swinging "punches" like master j*
sept my lines make his look gay
Master-J sucks dick....
i the exacutioner and u gonna die today
u best be steppen messing with me that way
wack
gonna tie bricks to yo fet and throw u in da bay
i make yo girl say hey rubbing my dick in her face she be getting freaka
nope
hear dis this b the last line in my spit i end it with sumthing that'll make u shit
KALIKO u gay u lost yo way like a immigrant i hope u ant here to stay-
best be n yo fucking way
wack
not good...terrible actually need flow and work on structure:1/10
You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
nice
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
lol
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
hahaahhahaa
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
ok
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
nice
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
ok
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
NICE
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN..
ok
not bad at all dawg....8/10
myv/Kalio
rtf in my sig dawg....
here i go
gonna let this shit flow
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
like the bullet out of my gun u might wanna run yo
u gonna hit the groud liek a bag of bricks
or liek yo boyfriend mushroom slapped u with his dick
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
dont vote KALIKO he anit got no flow
and his lines are only gonna be so-so
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
i be swinging "punches" like master j*
sept my lines make his look gay
do i have to say it?
i the exacutioner and u gonna die today
u best be steppen messing with me that way
gonna tie bricks to yo fet and throw u in da bay
Nah :nono:
i make yo girl say hey rubbing my dick in her face she be getting freaka
hear dis this b the last line in my spit i end it with sumthing that'll make u shit
KALIKO u gay u lost yo way like a immigrant i hope u ant here to stay-
best be n yo fucking way
OVERALL: 3/10 come on dude elevate half that shit was wack dont just throw in words cos they rhyme!
You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
ok
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
OK
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
cuda bin worded better
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
Ok thn :huh:
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
ok
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
nice
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
Nice
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN
ok
OVERALL: 7/10 some good punches and alot betta flow
overall:this battle was totally one sided kalik won this easy exacutioner try to elevate alot more and dont put words in cos they rhyme look at the tutorials dog
V-KALIKOZE911
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i will tell u that both that that was a hot battle and i know who im picking
v/k911
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You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
GOOD
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
OK
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
LOL
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
SO-SO
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
NICE
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
SWEET
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
GOOD
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN
IGHT
OVERALL: 8/10 SOME GOOD PUNCHLINES AND A LOT BETA FLOW
OVERALL
THIS BATTLE WASNT EVEN CLOSE!!!!!! KALIKOZE911 TOOK IT EASY!!!!
V/KALIKOZE911
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here i go
gonna let this shit flow
haha nice, NOT
like the bullet out of my gun u might wanna run yo
u gonna hit the groud liek a bag of bricks
or liek yo boyfriend mushroom slapped u with his dick
wtf???
dont vote KALIKO he anit got no flow
and his lines are only gonna be so-so
uhh so-so... shit
i be swinging "punches" like master j*
sept my lines make his look gay
baddd
i the exacutioner and u gonna die today
u best be steppen messing with me that way
gonna tie bricks to yo fet and throw u in da bay
i make yo girl say hey rubbing my dick in her face she be getting freaka
hear dis this b the last line in my spit i end it with sumthing that'll make u shit
KALIKO u gay u lost yo way like a immigrant i hope u ant here to stay-
best be n yo fucking way
ok i cant finish analyzing ur verse line from, its so messed up. next time when u battle try actually thinking of some good punches, ur verse was weeak and was boring. ur structure and flow was horrible too and u were creative about it. a lot of shit was played i give u a 3/10 , the three is for at least sayin something.
You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
haha nice opening
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
ha good
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
ok
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
ok
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
ok ok
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
good
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
ok good
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN...
ohhhh nice nice
ur last line killed his whole verse. ur punchs were strong not weak, and they did stand out. u had a lot better of a flow and structure as well. i can tell u thew some multis in there good job, the last line was my fav. nice job "battlin" and this was one sided. overall 8/10
v/kali
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ANALYSIS-
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ur verse was not good u didnt rhyme in some lines ur lines were short no flow no vocab i really wasnt feeling yo shit man elevate furst then battle yo not 2 be rude but work on yo rap game u need to have a good flow have some good rhymes have 4 decent punches in a battle and have word structure and vocab choices read a dictionary bu i liked that u tried and u had some sort of knowledge in rappin but need to work on ur game yo overall rate-1.0/10
kali-
ur verse was off da chain had flow and punches but needed word structure and
needed some delivery to those punches but did good really liked those punches especially You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first hot opener so keep ur game goin strong and ull elevate in tha rap game overall rate7.5/10
v/kali cuz he brought everything to this verse and that opener made me want to read more and more and tha otha nigga didnt bring his A game need to work on that and kali did good nice lines that packed punch that's why he got my vote
KALIKOZE911 killed this guy.....KALIKOZE911 had good punches , flow, and nice vocab..
"Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first "
"You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??) "
those were the 2 line i thought stood out the most....
exacutioner got to work on his game...got aint got no punches......you just said you did.........aint no self-explanatory like T.I. up in this bitch...you got to prove yoself..with youe skills
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nothing
vs
You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
kalikoze got this battle easily executioner.. u need to elevate badly fam... ur shit is to simple... i suggest u hit up Help Area, and get some tips on battling, not to down you or nething im just tryna be fair n help u out....
vote - kali