Rulez
- 5 barz=10 linez
- No recycling, biting, etc
- Blind Drop 10 min
Good luck homie...check in, timeer starts now
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Rulez
- 5 barz=10 linez
- No recycling, biting, etc
- Blind Drop 10 min
Good luck homie...check in, timeer starts now
.......................................This is 'RB', Only the best is 'Allowed' here,
My 'bars' get the crowd 'AmP'd', while you get just a loud 'Cheer',
Accurate in 'Rapp'N', im 'bout ta 'SMASH' this kid, --w/ 'Adjectives'
Only time ya 'Raps' Is-sicc, is 'Puking' up 'Wrappers' an' 'Acid-Tablets'
'Ayduu' didn't know the 'Mathematics', approach'n A 'Savage'
take 'Note's' of this 'Faggit', "YOU", leav'n this 'Battle' aint 'Happn'n'
I'm 'Proceed'n' to leaav'n this 'Bitch' 'Bleed'n' N 'Speechless'
'You" fuck'n wit a 'Demon' YA bar's aint make'N it past 'SemeN'
So stay in YA place 'BOY', I'm sorry you dont even 'Deserve' that 'Title',
Because, I only 'BATTLE' dudes with 'SKILL' & you far from a 'RIVAL'
Dont try to 'DO' wut 'I' do, Cuz I'm 'Liable' to 'MISGUIDE-YOU'
Ya 'verse' aint NEVA gone be 'Felt'-'HOlMES',.. I wouldn't 'LIE TO YOU'
fuck'N wit me bitch? I'll separate ya ankles 2 ya 'Knees SpliT,
U'll bleed 'QuicK' I'm a 'Gorilla', 'DAWG' I dont need 'FIFTHS'
I know I'm 'Rude', wit my 'WrittenS', 'BattlS', an 'FreestyleS',
We all 'KnoW', you 'Couldnt' carry a 'PotenT' Flo' handl'n 'PEE-VIALS'
Like 'false' traps u trip'N liar how u trigger'N fire ya wreckage is distant ,
U AIM'N at me? nope thats only if my AOL message wuz instant,
So now I'ma keep the 'Cycle' goin, cuz you battln in RB has been put 2 a 'Stop'
.................................................. ...............................................I'm 'UseD' to this 'SpoT'
...................I been 'Spitt'N', Sickly 'Formalities', that leaves 'DudeS' here 2 'RoT'
stick 2 DICK-ryd'n-these-BOARDS,faggit, Cuz 'we' know you like 'GUYS' of course,
my punches got the right type of 'ForcE', feel like im fighting, a white type of 'BroaD',
actn like you get hype..!! but naaw..find a nu hobby, cuz in ryhm'n you aint nice,
you aint from the hood, you aint gangsta, I think you WHITE....
The 'Time is gett'n short......
Now to end "Ayduu's" 'PathetiC' ass 'CareeR', & give this verse a 'ConclusioN'
Cuz I'm 'Tired' of spittin fo' 'CATS', who takes my 'VerseS' & try 2 'LUBE-IT'.........
last line i have to explain if yall dont get it................
BASICALLY: 'CATS'= PUSSY= " Ayduu "
WHO TAKES MY VERSES & 'LUBE-IT'= LUBE. (Lubrication) for 'his'^^^ pussy
Because My Rhymes get'm 'WET' LMAO, ROFL,................................just jok'n....tho', I aint on no homo shit....JUST A BATTLE
get @ me ................................
UPP'N THIS SHIT VOTERS PLEASE...............
Let da murderin begin.....
Start Drooling!, Kid Spit Lies So Tell Me Whos Your Bars Fooling
Im A Smart Dude Kid, Cuz Ayduu's Known To Have Contenders Drop Out Like Fucking Hard Schooling
Fear My Wrist, Whip Out Kal's Verse And Put Whiteout On Ya Tounge, Cuz Im Known To Clear A Spit
Tears Of Wit!, Im -Sick With The Paper- Cuz Like Mammals Stalking Your Siblings, Im A Cold Blooded Leer-A-Sis (Lyricist)
Kal's Deprive!, I Fuck Kids On Site!, Cuz Like Sperm In Your Retinas Im Known To Penial-Eyes!(Penilize)
Fist Will Clean Your Rhymes!, And Stick Your Brain Under A Missle Toe So You Can Kiss Your Dreams Goodbye
Bomb cords Bend Lips!,Then Transplant My Skin Into Asshole, So I Can Pore/Pour And Send Shit
These Sports Will Defend Quick!, Ima Take A Career In Genetics Cuz I Had 3 Decent Bars But Imma Make The Four-End-Sick (Forensic)
Drill Smarts..... Kids So Gassed Up, If Id Punch him in the Stomach he'd Release Farts Now
I Aint A Rugrat, But Ill Fill/Phil Your Sparks Pal!, Cuz Ayduu's Known To Place Valentines Day Cards In A Cup, So You Can Spill Your Heart Out
..:sigh:..... 5 barz for ya....lol
UPP'N....................................PPL, CAN WE GET SOME VOTES............
AYO Ayduu GOOD SHIT.....................................WELL FIND OUT SOON...........
LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU READY 40 RD.2
*sighs*-2
Patiently Waiting, For These Ppl To Vote-on.......................................
im bout to vote in a minute so please hold on i'll let ya'll kno who i thought won in my eyes iight ~1~
Can We Get Some Ore Votes On This Ppl............................wuts Good...........
This Is Called A Battle Thread, Plz Post Ya Votes,
http://tinypic.com/28laaw
So We Can Move On..........
Upp'n Fo Some Votes Ppl.................
Poll Plz...if You View The Battle........
http://tinypic.com/28a3it
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KALIKOZE
.......................................This is 'RB', Only the best is 'Allowed' here,
My 'bars' get the crowd 'AmP'd', while you get just a loud 'Cheer'
NO!,
Accurate in 'Rapp'N', im 'bout ta 'SMASH' this kid, --w/ 'Adjectives'
Only time ya 'Raps' Is-sicc, is 'Puking' up 'Wrappers' an' 'Acid-Tablets'
'Ayduu' didn't know the 'Mathematics', approach'n A 'Savage'
take 'Note's' of this 'Faggit', "YOU", leav'n this 'Battle' aint 'Happn'n'
I'm 'Proceed'n' to leaav'n this 'Bitch' 'Bleed'n' N 'Speechless'
'You" fuck'n wit a 'Demon' YA bar's aint make'N it past 'SemeN'
So stay in YA place 'BOY', I'm sorry you dont even 'Deserve' that 'Title',
Because, I only 'BATTLE' dudes with 'SKILL' & you far from a 'RIVAL'
STRAIGHT
Dont try to 'DO' wut 'I' do, Cuz I'm 'Liable' to 'MISGUIDE-YOU'
Ya 'verse' aint NEVA gone be 'Felt'-'HOlMES',.. I wouldn't 'LIE TO YOU'
huh?...
fuck'N wit me bitch? I'll separate ya ankles 2 ya 'Knees SpliT,
U'll bleed 'QuicK' I'm a 'Gorilla', 'DAWG' I dont need 'FIFTHS'
I know I'm 'Rude', wit my 'WrittenS', 'BattlS', an 'FreestyleS',
We all 'KnoW', you 'Couldnt' carry a 'PotenT' Flo' handl'n 'PEE-VIALS'
Like 'false' traps u trip'N liar how u trigger'N fire ya wreckage is distant ,
U AIM'N at me? nope thats only if my AOL message wuz instant,
So now I'ma keep the 'Cycle' goin, cuz you battln in RB has been put 2 a 'Stop'
.................................................. ...............................................I'm 'UseD' to this 'SpoT'
...^^straight but werk on yo dam punches
...................I been 'Spitt'N', Sickly 'Formalities', that leaves 'DudeS' here 2 'RoT'
stick 2 DICK-ryd'n-these-BOARDS,faggit, Cuz 'we' know you like 'GUYS' of course,
my punches got the right type of 'ForcE', feel like im fighting, a white type of 'BroaD',
actn like you get hype..!! but naaw..find a nu hobby, cuz in ryhm'n you aint nice,
you aint from the hood, you aint gangsta, I think you WHITE....
The 'Time is gett'n short......
Now to end "Ayduu's" 'PathetiC' ass 'CareeR', & give this verse a 'ConclusioN'
Cuz I'm 'Tired' of spittin fo' 'CATS', who takes my 'VerseS' & try 2 'LUBE-IT'.........
...NO!...
...yo homie i see you got sum potential but your wordplay and punches arent that good!...
structure:2
flow:3
Punches:3
multies:1
wordplay:1
Personals:2
overall:...12
Ayduu
Start Drooling!, Kid Spit Lies So Tell Me Whos Your Bars Fooling
Im A Smart Dude Kid, Cuz Ayduu's Known To Have Contenders Drop Out Like Fucking Hard Schooling
LOL...
Fear My Wrist, Whip Out Kal's Verse And Put Whiteout On Ya Tounge, Cuz Im Known To Clear A Spit
Tears Of Wit!, Im -Sick With The Paper- Cuz Like Mammals Stalking Your Siblings, Im A Cold Blooded Leer-A-Sis (Lyricist)
lmao...good werdplay!
Kal's Deprive!, I Fuck Kids On Site!, Cuz Like Sperm In Your Retinas Im Known To Penial-Eyes!(Penilize)
Fist Will Clean Your Rhymes!, And Stick Your Brain Under A Missle Toe So You Can Kiss Your Dreams Goodbye
LOL^^
Bomb cords Bend Lips!,Then Transplant My Skin Into Asshole, So I Can Pore/Pour And Send Shit
These Sports Will Defend Quick!, Ima Take A Career In Genetics Cuz I Had 3 Decent Bars But Imma Make The Four-End-Sick (Forensic)
...WERDPLAY,WERDPLAY,WERDPLAY!
Drill Smarts..... Kids So Gassed Up, If Id Punch him in the Stomach he'd Release Farts Now
I Aint A Rugrat, But Ill Fill/Phil Your Sparks Pal!, Cuz Ayduu's Known To Place Valentines Day Cards In A Cup, So You Can Spill Your Heart Out
yo only problem with this drop was your flow homie!...other than that you got MERKED KALIKOZE!..lol
structure:4
flow:2
Punches:4
multies:5
wordplay:5
Personals:2
..overall..22
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obviously Ayduu won this battle...he had better mutlies,werdplay,punches,etc.etc.
Ayo Appreciate The Feed Back, But Can We Get Some More Voters, And Poll This Shit Out,
I Think It Was A Decent Battle, Lets Close This So We Can Get Rd.2.............................................. ..lets Go- Lets Go
Uppin 1 for me...cmon peoples and vote this shit up...
word, ppl chkn this shit out but not votn wuts good............................................
VOTE SO WE CAN MOVE ON.....................
Ayo Appreciate The Feed Back, But Can We Get Some More Voters, And Poll This Shit Out,
I Think It Was A Decent Battle, Lets Close This So We Can Get Rd.2.............................................. ..lets Go- Lets Go
Uppin............................................. ................
Come On,
Wtf Is Up W/ No One Voting..................
Thats Bs..............................
shit this was one of the best battle i've seen and it was pretty much way outta my league ya'll made it very obvious ya kno but somebody gotta get a vote and ima give it to someone
Lyrical Verse Breakdown
Kalikoze911:Read ya past shit and i wasnt close to dissappointed
.......................................This is 'RB', Only the best is 'Allowed' here,
My 'bars' get the crowd 'AmP'd', while you get just a loud 'Cheer',
(Decent Opener)
Accurate in 'Rapp'N', im 'bout ta 'SMASH' this kid, --w/ 'Adjectives'
Only time ya 'Raps' Is-sicc, is 'Puking' up 'Wrappers' an' 'Acid-Tablets'
(Nice Punch)
'Ayduu' didn't know the 'Mathematics', approach'n A 'Savage'
take 'Note's' of this 'Faggit', "YOU", leav'n this 'Battle' aint 'Happn'n'
(Decent)
I'm 'Proceed'n' to leaav'n this 'Bitch' 'Bleed'n' N 'Speechless'
'You" fuck'n wit a 'Demon' YA bar's aint make'N it past 'SemeN'
(Ehh.....naw)
So stay in YA place 'BOY', I'm sorry you dont even 'Deserve' that 'Title',
Because, I only 'BATTLE' dudes with 'SKILL' & you far from a 'RIVAL'
(Nice)
Dont try to 'DO' wut 'I' do, Cuz I'm 'Liable' to 'MISGUIDE-YOU'
Ya 'verse' aint NEVA gone be 'Felt'-'HOlMES',.. I wouldn't 'LIE TO YOU'
(Feelin the first line but the second was ehh..)
fuck'N wit me bitch? I'll separate ya ankles 2 ya 'Knees SpliT,
U'll bleed 'QuicK' I'm a 'Gorilla', 'DAWG' I dont need 'FIFTHS'
(Wow this line was fuckin hot "Ima gorilla, dawg i dont need fifths")
I know I'm 'Rude', wit my 'WrittenS', 'BattlS', an 'FreestyleS',
We all 'KnoW', you 'Couldnt' carry a 'PotenT' Flo' handl'n 'PEE-VIALS'
(Bangin ass Punch)
Like 'false' traps u trip'N liar how u trigger'N fire ya wreckage is distant ,
U AIM'N at me? nope thats only if my AOL message wuz instant,
(Again with the punch this shit was the truth)
So now I'ma keep the 'Cycle' goin, cuz you battln in RB has been put 2 a 'Stop'
.................................................. ...............................................I'm 'UseD' to this 'SpoT'
...................I been 'Spitt'N', Sickly 'Formalities', that leaves 'DudeS' here 2 'RoT'
(Nice way to change up flow good job)
stick 2 DICK-ryd'n-these-BOARDS,faggit, Cuz 'we' know you like 'GUYS' of course,
my punches got the right type of 'ForcE', feel like im fighting, a white type of 'BroaD',
(Beautiful Punch)
actn like you get hype..!! but naaw..find a nu hobby, cuz in ryhm'n you aint nice,
you aint from the hood, you aint gangsta, I think you WHITE....
(IIght IIght)
The 'Time is gett'n short......
Now to end "Ayduu's" 'PathetiC' ass 'CareeR', & give this verse a 'ConclusioN'
Cuz I'm 'Tired' of spittin fo' 'CATS', who takes my 'VerseS' & try 2 'LUBE-IT'.........
(Thanks for goin ova last line didnt quite undastand myself But a Sweet ass closer)
Ayduu: nice verse
Start Drooling!, Kid Spit Lies So Tell Me Whos Your Bars Fooling
Im A Smart Dude Kid, Cuz Ayduu's Known To Have Contenders Drop Out Like Fucking Hard Schooling
(Nice Opener but kinda stretched)
Fear My Wrist, Whip Out Kal's Verse And Put Whiteout On Ya Tounge, Cuz Im Known To Clear A Spit
Tears Of Wit!, Im -Sick With The Paper- Cuz Like Mammals Stalking Your Siblings, Im A Cold Blooded Leer-A-Sis (Lyricist)
(Ehh....Not all that)
Kal's Deprive!, I Fuck Kids On Site!, Cuz Like Sperm In Your Retinas Im Known To Penial-Eyes!(Penilize)
Fist Will Clean Your Rhymes!, And Stick Your Brain Under A Missle Toe So You Can Kiss Your Dreams Goodbye
(Kinda made you sound like a Rapist but second lines Punch was perfect)
Bomb cords Bend Lips!,Then Transplant My Skin Into Asshole, So I Can Pore/Pour And Send Shit
These Sports Will Defend Quick!, Ima Take A Career In Genetics Cuz I Had 3 Decent Bars But Imma Make The Four-End-Sick (Forensic)
(Hot ass Line)
Drill Smarts..... Kids So Gassed Up, If Id Punch him in the Stomach he'd Release Farts Now
I Aint A Rugrat, But Ill Fill/Phil Your Sparks Pal!, Cuz Ayduu's Known To Place Valentines Day Cards In A Cup, So You Can Spill Your Heart Out
(Good and bangin ass closer)
v/goes to Kalikoze911 cuz he came harder and had more lines and punches that would take a niggas head off but Ayduu you did have a sick verse but you had some restructure to do with ya flow well its jus a suggestion the battle was overally fire ya kno i voted honestly so can ya'll do the same on these two battles
Me vs. Abstract and Me vs. JollyRoger(i decided not to DQ'em cuz he talk'd shit)
Lookn Like We ------------------runn'n Parallel...................homie.......
We Need To Do It Again..............................
Can We Get Some Voters Plz To Close This Up..................
Drop Links Will Return The Fav:
Good vote...but if you would understand werdplay, then you would understand a verse of them in it...good feedback, but we need some adequate feedbackers...lets go peeps...uppin #2
mammals aren't cold blooded....and it was still lameQuote:
Originally Posted by Ayduu
Flow: Ayduu
Multis: Ayduu
Wordplay: Ayduu
Personals: Didnt see many...
Punches: Ayduu
Kalblahblahblah....I had to try to figure what the fuck your verse said for like 10 minutes...my eyes hurt after I finished...stop with the fucking apostrophes...those are used to show ownership to something or used to indirectly quote something...not for spaces...or to make your words look fancy...also...throw harder punches...yours were really dull...so were ayduu's...but your were not even surface scratching....Good battle between the 2 of you though...
Vote - Ayduu
Return the favor please...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=178121
Uppin......please people vote this up and get it closed
word wuts GOOD PPL..........................CAN WE GET SOME VOTES ON THIS BATTLE SO WE CAN GET INTO MORE BATTLES..................
DONT YOU KNOW WERE ONLY ALLOWED 2 HAV 3 OPEN BATTLES @ 1 TIME, AND SOME OF US WOULD LIKE TO MOVE ON INTO OTHER BATTLES......................
THANKS TO ALL WHO HAVE VOTED SO FAR THANKS KEEP POSTING,
DROP LINKS, WILL RETURN THE FEED BACK, W/ FULL HONESTY...1
Kalikoze
Accurate in 'Rapp'N', im 'bout ta 'SMASH' this kid, --w/ 'Adjectives'
Only time ya 'Raps' Is-sicc, is 'Puking' up 'Wrappers' an' 'Acid-Tablets'
I know I'm 'Rude', wit my 'WrittenS', 'BattlS', an 'FreestyleS',
We all 'KnoW', you 'Couldnt' carry a 'PotenT' Flo' handl'n 'PEE-VIALS'
Those were the best bars you had.. they were decent, but nothing too special though the peeing one was funny. You had too many things that didn't make sense like work on that. Your flow is raw, but your punches.. work on the concepts just landing and being more coherent. Also, you posted A LOT more than 10 lines.. i'd forgive a little over, but you went way over. Less is more man, no need to write so much, just post your best shit.
Ayduu - You also sorta went over, but not really... that was 5 bars, but a lot more than 10 lines so work on really using 10 lines like you said. You had some good concepts like the forensic thing. The sis thing i got but it was off. The hard schooling thing was aight, not the best, but not a bad verse either.
Overally, Ayduu's verse made more sense, had lines which were more of a punch than Kalikoze's and met the line limit.
Vote - Ayduu
Please hit the link in the sig, thx
KALIKOZE911
.......................................This is 'RB', Only the best is 'Allowed' here,
My 'bars' get the crowd 'AmP'd', while you get just a loud 'Cheer',
Ok ok I feelin that
Accurate in 'Rapp'N', im 'bout ta 'SMASH' this kid, --w/ 'Adjectives'
Only time ya 'Raps' Is-sicc, is 'Puking' up 'Wrappers' an' 'Acid-Tablets'
'Ayduu' didn't know the 'Mathematics', approach'n A 'Savage'
...nice multi's...
take 'Note's' of this 'Faggit', "YOU", leav'n this 'Battle' aint 'Happn'n'
I'm 'Proceed'n' to leaav'n this 'Bitch' 'Bleed'n' N 'Speechless'
'You" fuck'n wit a 'Demon' YA bar's aint make'N it past 'SemeN'
So stay in YA place 'BOY', I'm sorry you dont even 'Deserve' that 'Title',
Because, I only 'BATTLE' dudes with 'SKILL' & you far from a 'RIVAL'
Dont try to 'DO' wut 'I' do, Cuz I'm 'Liable' to 'MISGUIDE-YOU'
Ya 'verse' aint NEVA gone be 'Felt'-'HOlMES',.. I wouldn't 'LIE TO YOU'
fuck'N wit me bitch? I'll separate ya ankles 2 ya 'Knees SpliT,
U'll bleed 'QuicK' I'm a 'Gorilla', 'DAWG' I dont need 'FIFTHS'
I know I'm 'Rude', wit my 'WrittenS', 'BattlS', an 'FreestyleS',
We all 'KnoW', you 'Couldnt' carry a 'PotenT' Flo' handl'n 'PEE-VIALS'
Like 'false' traps u trip'N liar how u trigger'N fire ya wreckage is distant ,
U AIM'N at me? nope thats only if my AOL message wuz instant,
So now I'ma keep the 'Cycle' goin, cuz you battln in RB has been put 2 a 'Stop'
.................................................. ...............................................I'm 'UseD' to this 'SpoT'
...................I been 'Spitt'N', Sickly 'Formalities', that leaves 'DudeS' here 2 'RoT'
stick 2 DICK-ryd'n-these-BOARDS,faggit, Cuz 'we' know you like 'GUYS' of course,
my punches got the right type of 'ForcE', feel like im fighting, a white type of 'BroaD',
actn like you get hype..!! but naaw..find a nu hobby, cuz in ryhm'n you aint nice,
you aint from the hood, you aint gangsta, I think you WHITE....
The 'Time is gett'n short......
Now to end "Ayduu's" 'PathetiC' ass 'CareeR', & give this verse a 'ConclusioN'
Cuz I'm 'Tired' of spittin fo' 'CATS', who takes my 'VerseS' & try 2 'LUBE-IT'.........
...poor finisher...
ur settin out made it hard for me to brake it down so i'mma say what i think here
sum good punches, multis and rhymes, work on the flow
Ayduu
Start Drooling!, Kid Spit Lies So Tell Me Whos Your Bars Fooling
Im A Smart Dude Kid, Cuz Ayduu's Known To Have Contenders Drop Out Like Fucking Hard Schooling
...good opener...
Fear My Wrist, Whip Out Kal's Verse And Put Whiteout On Ya Tounge, Cuz Im Known To Clear A Spit
Tears Of Wit!, Im -Sick With The Paper- Cuz Like Mammals Stalking Your Siblings, Im A Cold Blooded Leer-A-Sis (Lyricist)
...nice...
Kal's Deprive!, I Fuck Kids On Site!, Cuz Like Sperm In Your Retinas Im Known To Penial-Eyes!(Penilize)
Fist Will Clean Your Rhymes!, And Stick Your Brain Under A Missle Toe So You Can Kiss Your Dreams Goodbye
...nice word play and punch...
Bomb cords Bend Lips!,Then Transplant My Skin Into Asshole, So I Can Pore/Pour And Send Shit
These Sports Will Defend Quick!, Ima Take A Career In Genetics Cuz I Had 3 Decent Bars But Imma Make The Four-End-Sick (Forensic)
...again good word play...
Drill Smarts..... Kids So Gassed Up, If Id Punch him in the Stomach he'd Release Farts Now
I Aint A Rugrat, But Ill Fill/Phil Your Sparks Pal!, Cuz Ayduu's Known To Place Valentines Day Cards In A Cup, So You Can Spill Your Heart Out
...ok not your best line but still a ok finisher...
kinda close but i gotta give this to Ayduu
VOTE: Ayduu
please vote in the battles in my sig so they can get closed and i get have more battles..
UPPIN#4 lets get these votes in people...lets go...lets go
Aii This is what it is
AyDuU
YOU aRE A TERRIFIC battler when it comes to Punchez you really now how to use good wordplay and Personalz ...I would never battle you im not on that kinda of level yet ....... But you Can really supply some good line and bars when it comes to comebackz .....and that is why you get my vote in this battle
K-----
You Had a really long verse and although you drop pretty decent you still didnt drop goo denough to get my vote i think that you shouldve had betta wordplay and personals that jus tryna cuss the dude out or jus fussin and rymin at the same time bcuz thats how it seems to me.......You Should work on those things other than that you ahde and aii drop
but still i gotta give my vote to ayduu