House Rules....
Nuth'n Less Than 10....
Verse Due 15 Minutes After 1st Verse.........
Come Hard Or Dont Come @ All..........
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House Rules....
Nuth'n Less Than 10....
Verse Due 15 Minutes After 1st Verse.........
Come Hard Or Dont Come @ All..........
you came up on me with gun no clip
did not no i i had red beam no you walk wit a limp
you never run up on me that right there juust makes me sick
Lmfao !
i got something to give your whole family
tell them tonight you going to be on tv
cring for me to stop
when i have the nine or just maybe the glock
put it to your skull
even from far away it will still you fall
make you start praying to heaven
when the report i put seven in your head
then i step on your body
hit u one more time wit the shotty
run for cover
nevermind just go make love to your mother
because daddy is not around
matterfact i forgot i put i put him 6 feet under the ground
i go for hours
im not bin laden but i could shoot down the twin towers
i put a tool in your mouth and say is it sweet or sour
please dont talk your breathe can speak louder
i see you or smell you im going to spank ya
to the point you sceaming somebody to help ya
this is lockup so look for me no dont do that you might just get shot up
EASY NIGGA
WOAH.........................DO I REALLY!!!!!!!!!!
He SPIT's HIS RHYME'S W/ X-LAX, CUZ HIS VERSE's 'FULLA SHIT'
I WOULDNT feel ya SIXTEEN, IF ya filled me W/ A CLIP.
YOU goin nowhere, YA STYLE is SHOWING to be a 'HOAX'
YOU COULDN'T'EVA 'PACK A PUNCH', W/ CUM 'N' SHIT IN YA-THROAT,
STEP TA 'KALI'-, ILL BE GLADLY, TA show you my RAP SPREE,
AFTA the CATASTROPHY, NICCA GRAB YA 'BAGS AN FLEE',
IM KNOWN TO KILLA FAG, YOU AINT NEVA MURDA A TRACK,-(dog)
ONLY 'HOTT SHIT'- YOU SPIT, IS wut you 'GURGLE N GAG ON',
ALREADY UPPN THIS BATTLE, CUZ I KILLED U, 'B4' U HAD A CHANCE,
THIS DA 4TH AND A HALF BAR, n I ALREDY SEVERED UR HANDS,
So get ya 'PRE-WRITES' UP 2 PAR, N see me when UR READY,
BUT THE WAY IM SPITTN NOW, 'IMA 4EVER BE DEADLY',
"1-800-FAG-ALERT", 'YO.!' THERES A NU 'HOMO IN TOWN',
NICCAZ BEEN GRABB'D YA SKIRT, THATS WHY U BLOWN NOW,
GOT me AWOKE N NOW Im'a PROVOKE, N FLOW 'FOR A WHILE',
SLIPPN NOTES TO DISS FOE, YOU BETTA BACK DOWN NOW,
ABUSN The STATURES, US'N MA MUSES, AMUSIN THESE RAPPAZ
DONT GET USED TO IT, IM KNOWN TO SPIT IT FLUENT, even 'BACKWARDS'
WHILE YOU COULDNT CARRY A FLOW POURING OUT FLUID, IM SPAZZN,
CUZ THIS NICCA WANNA ATTACK KALI, & NOT THROW A PROPER PUNCH,
VOTE FOR MY BATTLE NOW.!!! YOU FAGGIT.!!!! IM OUT TO LUNCH.!!!!!!!!!!!!!
um in order to vote which is lucks fuckin verse??? all he shit that rhymes well what he tried to rhyme?? lemme no n ill vote
damn one sided....Lockup u deffinetley need to go to jail rite now...i mean cmon...if i were a Mod ide fuckin ban you for making a verse as wack as that one ;)....Damn, why do people come on this site if they cant rap ?...Overall... -37/10
vs.
Kalikoze you coulda rote hi and still won lol....BUt you had a dope verse and i liked it, it as dopetastic<<
V/ Lockup...no Kalikoze
Plesae rtrn the favor, por favor :)
ight fuck it
lock....that was um class a diabollical.....u had no punches all u did was go on bout how ur guna cap him...i mean sheez this is a fuckin rap battle site not a fuckin shoot out...you needa diss your opponent...use personals n shit.....over all 0.5/10
kal...good verse...decent punches.....you really didnt have to come that hard though....mic's right u only had to say hi...over all 8.5/10
v/kal for obvious reasons
hit up the battle between me n da professor....pz
this is not over by along shot shoot wit a glock slow ya life up until that last bullet hit you them every thing is put on stop you is a dick rider all around sayin vote for me you see im a monster im on dvd while you sit there just beating you meat you think that im done ask mommy she knows thats why your my son you learn from me you talk again you will be without teeth now its time to get agressive throw you to the dogs they will fetch ya test ya toughest nigga will laugh you cried when police saw you with a bag when it was time to shine you was on top no you on your kness licking boys lolipops you call me a fag look i shoot you up with tha mag no when i saw the result i was surprised when i told you i was your father you said there all lies but look a your family ties all shot so i made you dead insideso this is lock up dont go outside because ill shoot your whole block up
EASY NIGGA
ayo nicca why u dropin still?? if u wana battle ill battle u right now
lol word
ayo eat that tired ass nicca up..........................HE TRASH..............
BUT EVERYONE GOOD LOOKING ON ALL THE FEED BACK................
I DIDNT MEAN TO CRUSH YOU LOCKUP, WIT A 2 MINUTE SPIT, THAT JUST POPPED UP.
UPPN FO' VOTES PLZ..................LETS CLOSE THIS THREAD, I NEED TO BATTLE COMPETITION..........................1
Uppn To Close This.............................................. ..............vote Plz
Drop Links Will Return The Fav................
http://tinypic.com/28laaw
lockup - Your wack dude, in fact, you're beyond wack. First off, post only 1 verse, lol, don't keep posting into like 8 threads. 2nd, this isn't a freestyle man, this is battling. Think about the shit you write before you put it down on the site. Work on throwing disses at your opponent instead of just rhyming every word you can randomly think of. Most of your verse had nothing to do with kalikoze or battling.
kalikoze - You win on default pretty much cause his verse(s) were so awful. Your verse was flowing very nicely so good job with that, but you didn't have much in the punch department either. Most of your stuff was statements to fill the lines. Like you say to grab his bags and flee... okay, that's nice, but not a punch... a punch would be to say nobody likes him so he had to flee, ya get it? Keep elevating, but you easily take this shit.
Vote - Kalikoze
AYO Can i get some FEEDBACK AND VOTES PLZ.....................................
I NEED TO CLOSE THIS SO I CAN MOVE ON & BATTLE SOMEONE ELSE..............
DROP LINKS WILL RETURN THE FEEDBACK.1
I REALLY NEED TO CLOSE THIS BATTLE NAN YOU POST SOME FEEDBACK, MORE THAN ONE SO IT DONT GET DQ'D, AND DONT FOR GET TO POL YA VOTE.....GOOD LOOKN 1
KALIKOZE911 vs. exacutioner
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=179391
AYO Can i get some FEEDBACK AND VOTES PLZ.....................................
I NEED TO CLOSE THIS SO I CAN MOVE ON & BATTLE SOMEONE ELSE..............
DROP LINKS WILL RETURN THE FEEDBACK.1
I REALLY NEED TO CLOSE THIS BATTLE NAN YOU POST SOME FEEDBACK, MORE THAN ONE SO IT DONT GET DQ'D, AND DONT FOR GET TO POL YA VOTE.....GOOD LOOKN 1
AYO Can i get some FEEDBACK AND VOTES PLZ.....................................
I NEED TO CLOSE THIS SO I CAN MOVE ON & BATTLE SOMEONE ELSE..............
DROP LINKS WILL RETURN THE FEEDBACK.1
AYO Can i get some FEEDBACK AND VOTES PLZ
ONLY NEED ONE MORE VOTE TO CLOSE THIS BATTLE THREAD.....................................
I NEED TO CLOSE THIS SO I CAN MOVE ON & BATTLE SOMEONE ELSE..............
DROP LINKS WILL RETURN THE FEEDBACK.1
nothing
vs.
He SPIT's HIS RHYME'S W/ X-LAX, CUZ HIS VERSE's 'FULLA SHIT'
I WOULDNT feel ya SIXTEEN, IF ya filled me W/ A CLIP.
v/Kalikoze. Lockup's verse didn't resemble a battle drop. There didn't seem to be a concentrated effort to put your ideas together for one drop. The double space was not needed, and you dropped a paragraph format verse after kalikoze. Kalikoze had wordplay, probably took it easy, put in filler, but that's the beauty of dropping second. Work on your punches, and wording them in the best way.
Return the favor below, please.
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Originally Posted by Kairos
APPRECIATE THE FEEDBACK............................GOOD LOOKIN.
DROP LINKS WILL RETURN THE FAV..........
VOTE TO CLOSE THIS BATTLE......
eh.
lock up- elevate. your rhymes were very elementary.
you pretty much need to work on everything. strcuture, punches, creativity
etc. etc...your verse was pretty much crap.
kali- yours wasnt that good either. you threw mostly filler and statements
and "im gonna kill you" threats. blah. and sex jokes are played to hell.
unless you know how make em dope. like twixn's punch in the 1-2 league.
work on creativity and wit. and try to harder punches. the name lockup?
seriously you could have made some wordplay on that. anyway elevate.
v/kali