Aiight 10-12 Lines.
Due 30 Min Afta Check.
Blind Spit.
No Hatta/Dick Rides.
Aiight Good Luck Homie. :thumbup:
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Aiight 10-12 Lines.
Due 30 Min Afta Check.
Blind Spit.
No Hatta/Dick Rides.
Aiight Good Luck Homie. :thumbup:
check'n........................................... .....
Yo...bitch..Quit...you cant spit..lyricallty unfit/
talk smack cant back it..back with sum whack shit/
Admit..you cant transmit..a line to make a rhyme/
Ill "Rip" ya spine...Merk You every Time Combine/
Words you neva herd...your a nerd its fine..your mine/
ill own you...Ima Newbie? bitch you aint gotta clue/
who knew..this pussy wouldnt even drop whens it due/
im comin weak...at this geek...im battlin this freak/
to start a winning streak..hes shit its fucken true/
fucken jew..battlin you.."CantRipThisBitch" your thru/
Out.
ha ha yo man i didnt really try but we will see...
Extract fact with exact n contract impact that this man is not only wack he's weak, Brake down his physique at cheeks, his spokin style unique~retarded when he speaks, That's why his keys.. .seized.the heat panel so he could post in increased degrees, I But im a hold a grudge with furryn get rid a CantRipThisBitch like i was the judge and jury, I Smell pussy on' em quicker then apartment' s smell of currie, degauss quick kid ya monitor getting blurry!
not even trying..........
would have brought it harder, but YOU AINT REady....................
MAKE THIS QUICK PPL............
Uppin............................................. .......................
Whats Good With Some Quick Feed Back.........ppl
lmao...This wasnt even close.....
YCRTB....Nice Flow and good shit...i liked ur punches and ur structure was on point
I give ur verse a 8/10 ...Good job kid
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Kalikoze....Your shit was wack and straight sanitation...:thumbup:...Your strucutre needs work, read the tutorial for more info on how to fix ya structure or juss ask me
Overall is a 5/10
v/ You cant rip this Bitch....GL
Please hit up my battles
honestly i agree with mic checka...but sorry, i cant vote yet
kalikoze911 this was a sick line........
Extract fact with exact n contract impact that this man is not only wack he's weak, Brake down his physique at cheeks, his spokin style unique~retarded when he speaks, That's why his keys.. .seized.the heat panel so he could post in increased degrees,
eh yo, but i give this one to kaliko cuz he had better punches, and was on the top the whole time.
alright battle.
v/Kaliko911
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
^^^dick ride lol ha ha his structre was shit and all he did was rhyme no REAL PUNCHES JUSS DISSES
sunn'n.......................
stop hatin..........................
iight homie.................
after this battle, set up rd.2
you aint gone last past 1st bar...........
iight homie................
and, make the drop, a lil later............
you want beef.............
OKAY..............
DONT KNOW WUT YOU INFO...........
FLow...YCRT
Pers..YCRT
Metas....YCRT
Punch...YCRT
Struct...YCRT
Overall...YCRT
Win...Kalikkoze...jk...YCRT
Pretty good batle for both but u need to work on ya strcure caz...sry man but im just being honest
Uppn'............................................. ..ppl
Lets Close This.....................
So I Can Scrape Him In Rd.2
i got to give my vote to cantripthisbitch....he had a better flow.....KALIKOZE911 had no flow....but i think he could do better...i think both of you are tryna put 2many big ass words in ya rhyme and it jus doesnt go together....KALIKOZE911 did it the most ...
Uppin....................................
Vote 2 Close This Battle Already..............wuzz Hood................ppl
Can We Get Some Votes On This Plz................ppl
We Wanna Close This Battle To Proceed To Rd.2
Can...........the...........votes...........begin. .........2................close..................t his..............battle...................thnx.... ...................kali9/11
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CantRipThisBitch - flow wasnt good...you had some lines that were left without a follow-up and made it seem uneven, but at least you used multi's, vocab....basic, punches- i didnt see any punches in your verse....it was all filler....just a bunch of basic statements, focus more on punches than multi's and you'll learn in due time
Kalikoze - i couldnt really tell if your flow was good or not....dawg you DEFINETLY need to change your structure up....i'd just stick with the 1-2 Setup - Punch, vocab wasnt very good, punches - i think you at least tried to be creative and i give you props for that, "I Smell pussy on' em quicker then apartment' s smell of currie, degauss quick kid ya monitor getting blurry!" best lines of the battle
v/ Kalikoze for having better punches than his opponent
can i plz get the votes to close this thread so i can start a new battle............
come on...............theres madd ppl out here, and no one voting..................
thats bad..................
we need to close this thread to move on.........................holla
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