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Word.
10 lines
Due ASAP
No crew votes
house Rules
Good luck to the both of you. Make your crew proud.
chek chek u spit first
*lmao*
Okay this is my check............il spit in a while
Ay man drop as soon as you get on aight....
im bout to go now...............
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Your whole crew sucks, dont look back man just face the facts
Trey duce will start callin me 'Q-tip' cuz ill get rida these 'wacks'
Ya nothin but soft attacks, so i often smack trey duce, all in packs
Eval gave me Dockers pants and scizors so id 'cut him some slack'
They all collapse, when it comes to raps im bout to wreck this dude
Fury's dumbass probly thought alter-‘ego’ was a breakfast food
You should know disrespect is rude, youll get so pissed and irate,
Cuz I told you 'Trey Duce' got less ring to it then a phone on vibrate
And I might wait, to merk this light weight, and let you lye in dirt
Yeah EvaL Fury brings the pain in battles, only cuz DickRiden hurts
...Eh...blah
Drop as soon as you get on man...
uppin so you see............dont be a bitch and no show........
crucial nice spit bro...........he no showed so far, but nice hey anyways can u vote on my battle with brabbit in my sig honestly the nI will rtf in this when he spits!!!!!!! honesty!!!!
closed
feel free to re use your verse
aight ima spit by tongiht peace
i HARBOR the "MARK of the BEAST", plus my "PIECE DISTURBS the PEACE"
the only way i know how to "DELETE the BEEF" is to "DECEASE your PEEPS
THaN raped THE hatred "OF MY BRUTAL style" more than "MOLESCTATIONS BY CATHOLIC PREIST"
crucail u talk a good game,BUT LIKE "THE TEAM FROM MIAMI"...U BRING "NO real HEAT"
gotta alott of "MY nutt hairs" between ya "JAWZ-N-TEETH"
BUT "SUCKING IN SKILLS" MAKEs U similliar to "GANE-GREEN" VICTIMS.. "FACING DE-FEET"
You ain't gon'DEFEAT OR beat me ~Ever-Man~, ya punches are like Michael-Jacksons house, they NEVER-LAND
cause all u ever spit is "weak multi's-n-metas" thats soft as sand
Youre not a decadent artist~battling ME-FOR-FAME~simple and plain
i must be the national anthem cuz im "AHEAD OF ya GAME"
My Scriptz-Insane He Must Be Delirious Ima Leave 'Him-Wid-Serious-Pain'
Tha Only Time You Lay Someone In Red Is If They 'Slip-In-Ya-Period-Stain'
My hands deliver 'Disslexia', bitch i'll SMACK YA BACKWARDS
I'll step on your actions , so that means i'll SMASH YA VERBS
Hit you wit the truth fag, DON'T REAL FACTS HURT
fuk u nigga dont fuk wit me
uppin numba 1
LivingLegends Lyrical Breakdown
Crucial:
Your whole crew sucks, dont look back man just face the facts
Trey duce will start callin me 'Q-tip' cuz ill get rida these 'wacks'
(Nice Opener)
Ya nothin but soft attacks, so i often smack trey duce, all in packs
Eval gave me Dockers pants and scizors so id 'cut him some slack'
(Decent Ass Punch)
They all collapse, when it comes to raps im bout to wreck this dude
Fury's dumbass probly thought alter-‘ego’ was a breakfast food
(Funny lmao nice)
You should know disrespect is rude, youll get so pissed and irate,
Cuz I told you 'Trey Duce' got less ring to it then a phone on vibrate
(Iight Punch)
And I might wait, to merk this light weight, and let you lye in dirt
Yeah EvaL Fury brings the pain in battles, only cuz DickRiden hurts
(Great Closer)
Eval Fury:
i HARBOR the "MARK of the BEAST", plus my "PIECE DISTURBS the PEACE"
the only way i know how to "DELETE the BEEF" is to "DECEASE your PEEPS
THaN raped THE hatred "OF MY BRUTAL style" more than "MOLESCTATIONS BY CATHOLIC PREIST"
crucail u talk a good game,BUT LIKE "THE TEAM FROM MIAMI"...U BRING "NO real HEAT"
gotta alott of "MY nutt hairs" between ya "JAWZ-N-TEETH"
BUT "SUCKING IN SKILLS" MAKEs U similliar to "GANE-GREEN" VICTIMS.. "FACING DE-FEET"
You ain't gon'DEFEAT OR beat me ~Ever-Man~, ya punches are like Michael-Jacksons house, they NEVER-LAND
cause all u ever spit is "weak multi's-n-metas" thats soft as sand
Youre not a decadent artist~battling ME-FOR-FAME~simple and plain
i must be the national anthem cuz im "AHEAD OF ya GAME"
My Scriptz-Insane He Must Be Delirious Ima Leave 'Him-Wid-Serious-Pain'
Tha Only Time You Lay Someone In Red Is If They 'Slip-In-Ya-Period-Stain'
My hands deliver 'Disslexia', bitch i'll SMACK YA BACKWARDS
I'll step on your actions , so that means i'll SMASH YA VERBS
Hit you wit the truth fag, DON'T REAL FACTS HURT
(Im not gonna go through your verse for the simple fact that it took you 4 to 5 days to post your shit when it said ASAP not when you fuckin feel like it plus it said 10 lines
and you did 8 bars(16 lines which makes me blieve that you wrote this up) well thats my reason)
v/goes to Crucial for effort and followin the rules stated in the first post
Eval Fury try to be more punctual cuz there is no excuse for being that late you caused much disrepect to ya crew................................
Return the favor and vote on battles in Sig so i can battle more people Thanx
BUT "SUCKING IN SKILLS" MAKEs U similliar to "GANE-GREEN" VICTIMS..
Better be talkin bout da disease..
uppin numba 2 u no what living legend my cousin died i got more other shit to do then be on the comp 24 7 other peopl have lives my cousin died aight shit
uppin numba 3
uupin numba 44444444444444444444444444444444444444
blah last uppin cmonn yall dont sleep on this please
Im back.
*Biter* you know what im talkin about Eval Fury!
oh well keep votin people!
Uppin...
-Crucial-
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Your whole crew sucks, dont look back man just face the facts
Trey duce will start callin me 'Q-tip' cuz ill get rida these 'wacks'
-Meh nice punch, with a good wordplay
Ya nothin but soft attacks, so i often smack trey duce, all in packs
Eval gave me Dockers pants and scizors so id 'cut him some slack'
-Hmmmm nice wordplay with a good punch
They all collapse, when it comes to raps im bout to wreck this dude
Fury's dumbass probly thought alter-‘ego’ was a breakfast food
-HAHAHAHAHAH good personal with a punch.
You should know disrespect is rude, youll get so pissed and irate,
Cuz I told you 'Trey Duce' got less ring to it then a phone on vibrate
-Good punch "metaphores" with it also.
And I might wait, to merk this light weight, and let you lye in dirt
Yeah EvaL Fury brings the pain in battles, only cuz DickRiden hurts
-Good decent closer w/ a personal punch
Alright nice flow, I liked your punches had metaphores, with wordplays and some decent creativity. Personals were dope, with them punches, i think that's the only thing that stood out in your verse "personal and punches".
Eval Fury
Um I read your verse but i didn't feel like breaking it down because your "verse" had no "structure" please elevate on that. Punches were kinda good with them multi'z, but i didn't sense any personals, so i'm curious, did you bite that? No hate. Anyway, Punches were "ok" But if you had "personals" with them then they'll be dope, but they're not.
Alright my vote goes to Crucial, cause he had better punches with personals, wordplay and metaphores. Eval Fury had good punches, with multi'z structure is fucked though, good wordplays but he didn't have any personals so i'm thinking did he bite that? But anyway, his punches werent hard hitting than crucial with them personals.........so my vote goes to crucial..............pz
-Crucial-
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Your whole crew sucks, dont look back man just face the facts
Trey duce will start callin me 'Q-tip' cuz ill get rida these 'wacks'
-Meh nice punch, with a good wordplay
Ya nothin but soft attacks, so i often smack trey duce, all in packs
Eval gave me Dockers pants and scizors so id 'cut him some slack'
-Hmmmm nice wordplay with a good punch
They all collapse, when it comes to raps im bout to wreck this dude
Fury's dumbass probly thought alter-‘ego’ was a breakfast food
-HAHAHAHAHAH good personal with a punch.
You should know disrespect is rude, youll get so pissed and irate,
Cuz I told you 'Trey Duce' got less ring to it then a phone on vibrate
-Good punch "metaphores" with it also.
And I might wait, to merk this light weight, and let you lye in dirt
Yeah EvaL Fury brings the pain in battles, only cuz DickRiden hurts
-Good decent closer w/ a personal punch
Alright nice flow, I liked your punches had metaphores, with wordplays and some decent creativity. Personals were dope, with them punches, i think that's the only thing that stood out in your verse "personal and punches".
Eval Fury
Um I read your verse but i didn't feel like breaking it down because your "verse" had no "structure" please elevate on that. Punches were kinda good with them multi'z, but i didn't sense any personals, so i'm curious, did you bite that? No hate. Anyway, Punches were "ok" But if you had "personals" with them then they'll be dope, but they're not.
V/ Crucial...For not Sucking
^^ The fuck?.............................................
Lol....Ill make a new one lol.....Sry
*sigh*
Up this battle.............vote and leave links i will hit them up..
i think this is my 4th or 5th up.
Please vote and leave links.
aight heres the breakdown
crucial your verse was nice, ya good good structure and impressed me with lines like
"Your whole crew sucks, dont look back man just face the facts
Trey duce will start callin me 'Q-tip' cuz ill get rida these 'wacks'"
that was a nice opener, with the wordplay on q-tip and wax, I was feelin these lines as well cuz they rhyme mad nice and a hard punch
"They all collapse, when it comes to raps im bout to wreck this dude
Fury's dumbass probly thought alter-‘ego’ was a breakfast food
You should know disrespect is rude, youll get so pissed and irate,
Cuz I told you 'Trey Duce' got less ring to it then a phone on vibrate"
Overall I give ya verse a 8/10
Eval Fury you shit was alright i hate how you put every punchline is bold and in capital letters you had some nice punchlines though the one i was feeling the most was
"Youre not a decadent artist~battling ME-FOR-FAME~simple and plain
i must be the national anthem cuz im "AHEAD OF ya GAME"
this was a closer battle eval fury just needs a bit more work
vote = crucial
please check out my battles in da sig against mooby and that, thanks playas
Crucial:
Your whole crew sucks, dont look back man just face the facts
Trey duce will start callin me 'Q-tip' cuz ill get rida these 'wacks'
Nice Opener
Ya nothin but soft attacks, so i often smack trey duce, all in packs
Eval gave me Dockers pants and scizors so id 'cut him some slack'
Decent
They all collapse, when it comes to raps im bout to wreck this dude
Fury's dumbass probly thought alter-‘ego’ was a breakfast food
LMAO!, good
You should know disrespect is rude, youll get so pissed and irate,
Cuz I told you 'Trey Duce' got less ring to it then a phone on vibrate
good
And I might wait, to merk this light weight, and let you lye in dirt
Yeah EvaL Fury brings the pain in battles, only cuz DickRiden hurts
Good closer
Overall your verse was dope! structure and flow on point.punches KO'd his ass. overall, A-
Eval Fury:
i HARBOR the "MARK of the BEAST", plus my "PIECE DISTURBS the PEACE"
the only way i know how to "DELETE the BEEF" is to "DECEASE your PEEPS
THaN raped THE hatred "OF MY BRUTAL style" more than "MOLESCTATIONS BY CATHOLIC PREIST"
crucail u talk a good game,BUT LIKE "THE TEAM FROM MIAMI"...U BRING "NO real HEAT"
gotta alott of "MY nutt hairs" between ya "JAWZ-N-TEETH"
BUT "SUCKING IN SKILLS" MAKEs U similliar to "GANE-GREEN" VICTIMS.. "FACING DE-FEET"
You ain't gon'DEFEAT OR beat me ~Ever-Man~, ya punches are like Michael-Jacksons house, they NEVER-LAND
cause all u ever spit is "weak multi's-n-metas" thats soft as sand
Youre not a decadent artist~battling ME-FOR-FAME~simple and plain
i must be the national anthem cuz im "AHEAD OF ya GAME"
My Scriptz-Insane He Must Be Delirious Ima Leave 'Him-Wid-Serious-Pain'
Tha Only Time You Lay Someone In Red Is If They 'Slip-In-Ya-Period-Stain'
My hands deliver 'Disslexia', bitch i'll SMACK YA BACKWARDS
I'll step on your actions , so that means i'll SMASH YA VERBS
Hit you wit the truth fag, DON'T REAL FACTS HURT
You took all that time and typed this?LOL. well i aint gon break this down kuz it was past 10 lines!
Overall your verse was wack. structure was off and flow was too.punches were weak. overall.
v//Crucial for Koing tha fuck outta Eval!
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