"He's Layed Doubt"

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March 12th, 2005, 06:49 PM
Iniquitous.

"He's Layed Doubt"

:thefinger
I would Lay him on the street, but shit theres no Doubt I could
acts gansta. hating feeble for months.....
............................now you cant pry him from his wood
mother fucker only running and gunning when hes playing X-Box live
his gansta was funny especially when he tripped on his own guy
type of bitch to get mad when shit don't go his way and cry
type of bitch to have feeble go edit his punch 3 times and lie
type of bitch to have Twizted and $pit write his shit for LLL
type of bitch that lives in the subs and say hes been through hell
type of bitch that gets ghosted for and grins when he wins
type of bitch to.....oh yeah hows your moms Glaucoma been
but enough with the type of bitch you are we all know its true
your a phony fuck, how did you ever make The Last Word crew?
thats right they need some one to laugh at so they drafted you
making all these OM's dissin vets so youd get noticed by DeJa-Vu
this kat thinks he's a champion but weight I welter
The Future wouldn't last if they burnt down The Shelter
kid switched krew's cause he knew W.O.W was played out
hoppin from krew to krew,now he's droppin like a domino..
..................affect he's Layed doubt
you dickride and you get dickrode,your still caught back ass ward's
tellin me to STFU,well I think not,nuff is enough and That's The Last Word

:thumbup:
March 12th, 2005, 06:52 PM
Iniquitous.

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March 12th, 2005, 06:55 PM
Judge Judy

no...Lay doubts diss was much betta yo....Not sayin urs is bad, its just his was alot better
March 12th, 2005, 06:58 PM
Lay Doubt.

I would Lay him on the street, but shit theres no Doubt I could
acts gansta. hating feeble for months.....
............................now you cant pry him from his wood

Horrible wording and I don't dickride Feeble. The set up had nothing to do with the punch.

mother fucker only running and gunning when hes playing X-Box live
his gansta was funny especially when he tripped on his own guy

What?

type of bitch to get mad when shit don't go his way and cry
type of bitch to have feeble go edit his punch 3 times and lie

First line lacks wit.. nothing special. Second line isn't true.. I edited my punch and I never lied.. weak wording once again.

type of bitch to have Twizted and $pit write his shit for LLL
type of bitch that lives in the subs and say hes been through hell

Twizted write for me? Are you an idiot? No offense Twizted, but you and I both know I'd merk you in a battle.. $pit doesn't write lines for me either.. false personal. I don't live in the suburbs and I don't say I've been through hell.. weak punch.

type of bitch that gets ghosted for and grins when he wins
type of bitch to.....oh yeah hows your moms Glaucoma been

I don't get ghosted for, once again.. played fake personal also, with no wit.. my mom doesn't have Glaucoma.

but enough with the type of bitch you are we all know its true
your a phony fuck, how did you ever make The Last Word crew?

I made Last Word because $pit saw potential in me and he was right. Where's the insult?

thats right they need some one to laugh at so they drafted you
making all these OM's dissin vets so youd get noticed by DeJa-Vu

Nope, not why $pit let me in.. and nope, that's not why I dissed Feeble in Open Mic.

this kat thinks he's a champion but weight I welter
The Future wouldn't last if they burnt down The Shelter

First line, I never said that and no you don't.. uh, second line.. what?

kid switched krew's cause he knew W.O.W was played out
hoppin from krew to krew,now he's droppin like a domino..
..................affect he's Layed doubt

Nope, I changed the crew name because the activity was low.. not because it was played out. Second line is garbage.. horribly worded nameplay.

you dickride and you get dickrode,your still caught back ass ward's
tellin me to STFU,well I think not,nuff is enough and That's The Last Word

Who doesn't dickride and get dickrode? This is RB.. last line wasn't a punch.

Well, I think it's safe to say this sucked and not one punch hit me.. sorry, but stringing together fake personals and a couple of real ones that people already know and have been said 2472452 times.. while not adding wit, wordplay, or anything impressive or hard hitting is all you did here. Your rhyme scheme is childish with rhyming only the last word.. overall, good job at embarassing yourself.
March 12th, 2005, 07:02 PM
Iniquitous.

^ lmao I got proof thats all true and ovcourse your going to say it sucked get the fuck outa here herb
March 12th, 2005, 07:07 PM
Judge Judy

Why would u make an open mic disssin him, if ya know his was gunna be betta ?
March 12th, 2005, 07:07 PM
Ike Ill.

Wack wack Wakc
March 12th, 2005, 07:08 PM
Lay Doubt.

Go get proof that Twizted or $pit has ghostwrote for me. Go get proof I live in the suburbs. Go get proof I dickride Feeble. Go get proof Feeble edited my punch and that I lied. Go get proof W.O.W. was played out. Go get proof $pit let me join so they could laugh at me. Go get proof I wrote those Open Mics to get attention from Deja Vu.

Then come back and show me.
March 12th, 2005, 07:13 PM
Iniquitous.

^ get the fuck outa here quit bitching all the time your like a female on their period go cry somewhere else HOE
March 12th, 2005, 07:14 PM
Ike Ill.

Fuck You Gizzyzzyy
March 12th, 2005, 07:14 PM
ThE kId BiG

you lost dog
March 12th, 2005, 07:17 PM
Lay Doubt.

'bgizzy', go set up a battle in FL.
March 12th, 2005, 07:18 PM
Ike Ill.

*falls over laughing*

this is so dope
March 12th, 2005, 07:22 PM
Iniquitous.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.

'bgizzy', go set up a battle in FL.

^ nope you got to many D/R's...thats how you beat me the first time
March 12th, 2005, 07:30 PM
Lay Doubt.

lmao, blacklist whoever you want... just stop making excuses.
March 14th, 2005, 12:00 AM
Jay Walker

This would have been just as effective if you hadnt said anything...probably more effect. Weak response, hope you can mustard something better than this, next time.
March 14th, 2005, 12:05 AM
Sir Tinlee Will

shut yo wack ass up lay doubt
you not good
we know spit be writin yo shit
wait til me and daz drop on yo ass
so shut the fuck foo!
March 14th, 2005, 12:09 AM
Iniquitous.

^ I dont care this shit was good get the fuck out of here bitches go suck his dick somewhere else
March 14th, 2005, 12:20 AM
Lay Doubt.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zhowne Owlt

shut yo wack ass up lay doubt
you not good
we know spit be writin yo shit
wait til me and daz drop on yo ass
so shut the fuck foo!

Spit writes nothing for me.
March 14th, 2005, 12:38 AM
Sir Tinlee Will

Quote:

Originally Posted by bgizzy

^ I dont care this shit was good get the fuck out of here bitches go suck his dick somewhere else

wtf are you dissin me for? I was defendin you cock top.
and Lay doubt.
Genocide..I swear before I life, you was just a newb.
and like Teflon said, soit renamed you and started writin yo shit.
March 14th, 2005, 12:41 AM
Lay Doubt.

he let me in to Last Word which gave me some motivation to elevate.. what reason did i have before then?.. being stuck in frontlines and shit. i really don't give a fuck what you think.. why would Spit start writing for me? we hadn't even talked to each other until i posted a couple of links in his tryout thread a month or so ago.. our styles aren't the same.. i have the same style i've always had.. same rhyme scheme.. my shit hasn't changed. i've just improved.

i'd beat you, that's for sure.
March 14th, 2005, 12:49 AM
Sir Tinlee Will

You'd beat me?
I doubt that.
We'll battle later. After I diss you a few times in OM.
;)
fuckin newb.
March 14th, 2005, 12:50 AM
Lay Doubt.

rofl, go sign into LLL then and I'll have Feeble set it up between us.
March 14th, 2005, 12:51 AM
Sir Tinlee Will

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.

he let me in to Last Word which gave me some motivation to elevate.. what reason did i have before then?.. being stuck in frontlines and shit. i really don't give a fuck what you think.. why would Spit start writing for me? we hadn't even talked to each other until i posted a couple of links in his tryout thread a month or so ago.. our styles aren't the same.. i have the same style i've always had.. same rhyme scheme.. my shit hasn't changed. i've just improved.

i'd beat you, that's for sure.

you might beat me
because you know, $pit beat me before.
;)
I can put 2 and 2 together
March 14th, 2005, 12:53 AM
Lay Doubt.

like i said, go sign into LLL if you want some.

and when you lose don't make up shit about Spit ghostwriting to make your own wack ass feel better.
March 14th, 2005, 04:35 AM
Stat.

Lol @ this beef............Bgizzy you coulda done better..........
I remember when Bgizzy first battled geno as -Text-....in my opinion Bgizzy won that battle... but, no offense bgiizy, i think Geno would beat you now if you were to battle him...then again thats just my opinion...........i know this coulda been better gizzy...and i know how you feel about him bitchin all the time cuz he does do that... remember when i voted against him in a battle?... he wouldnt leave the B/O thread alone......lol......but we battled and i lost to him fair and square.....this should be settled in the front lines..........b i say battle him and try and squash the beef..

Weak diss.....you coulda done better though man......
March 14th, 2005, 04:57 AM
Knoxxious

Eh..this was aight. Not feelin "the type of bitch..." shit, but flowed good and structure was aight, punches were meh, had some wordplay, but it wasn't the greatest. Overall and ok job. I was definately feeling Lay's diss more.
March 14th, 2005, 12:50 PM
Iniquitous.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zhowne Owlt

wtf are you dissin me for? I was defendin you cock top.
and Lay doubt.
Genocide..I swear before I life, you was just a newb.
and like Teflon said, soit renamed you and started writin yo shit.

^ wasnt directed to Jay walkers dick sucking ass...you just posted oyur right when I did
March 14th, 2005, 06:57 PM
Illus'

Gotta come harder fam especialy to
someone that considered good...
Seen your emotion in the flow but
no hard hitting punches...and don't
repeat yourself...it's meh...

but what do I know *smiles*