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16 lines minumum....
house rules.......
25 minutes 2 drop after 1st verse....
iight..... check'n....
im a drop, in a few seconds...........
"young Cell" quick wit his 'chicken dances', dunn posted so this 'cock-advances' & still no chances...
I break stances, this 'so-sad' cuz this FAGGIT had to 'breakdown' & battle death, I BATTLE wit glances...
His pants is 'wet' like 'school-nerds', who wanna do 'homework', on this FAGGIT? Cus 'Young Cell' is just 'CLASS_less'...
Ya verse is 'Bull', 'Young Cell' is so 'WACK' he bring down 'PROPERTY VALUE ON WEB-BOARDS'...
Your 'Artificial' when it comes to 'character', I'm surprised you even gone 'SPIT' using ya 'OWN' vocal chords...
I'm 'Original' wit words, a lyrical scientist paving the way 'BITCH',
manufacturing 'BATTLE STYLE' inuendo's...
Like 'Nintendo's' you 'PLAY'd-OUT' "PEON", you dont 'punch', they all scratches, like 'DEFENSELESS-hoes'...
had to 'run-quick', to get ya freepostings up for 'RESPECT', cuz real flow in you is really hard 2 'FIND'
I spit on 'time', 'Young Cell' be fishing in 'water's without FISH' cuz all over this board, you 'DRAGG'N-YA-DEAD-LINES'...
You'll 'feel the need' to spit hard on 'PROMINENT people' becuz You'll never be 'one', already fail'd so ima call you my 'G-son'...
Take a 'free-run' among the only one who will 'out-freestyle' your 'PRE-WRITES' & father your 'PITIFUL-ways'...
Another 'Group-E', rap 'pussy*' without 'creativity'. I spit 'bullets' that leave 'YOU' seeing more 'SHELLS' than 'OCEAN-WAVES'...
Nothing saves you against me, cuz CREWS, FRIENDS, ALIASES, can only do so much to help this 'LIL-CHILD'...
Try'na 'buy-time' with me to write ya 'PLAYED_OUT' verse, while U kow I got the 'competance' 4 a straight 'FREESTYLE'...
I could 'hold-up signs' & let you 'combine-MINDS' with cats here, you'd still have 'SHITTY' rhymes...
I'll put ya 'BRAIN' on 'verbal-lockdown', imprison' ya lost soul, & have ya 'WHOLE' unwitty STYLE 'doin-time'...
WHO'S NEXT-2-GET-RECYCLED........
gedd@me......
when the next drop's i'll vote all though it'll be hard to beat that verse Oh and Kalikoze i wanna battle i think it'll be a good one so what do you say well after your finish or wuteva let a nigga kno iight
AYO Young Cell Y YOU TAKN 4EVR TO POST UP........WUSSUMATTA,
CANT FIND A GOOD ENUFF BATTLE RHYME...........
TO CUT N PASTE TO YA NOTE PAD..........
U ready.....
Damn this guy rushed me, wow I dump them 3’s
this is a peace of cake, but with the KALI this lame stunt wit G
right… to much bull shit like you come for me
you pussy, it’s just that time of month to bleed//
i stunt for free, and you know I hold the weapon
i’m suggestin that you testing this, you learn’n the lessons
step into the lessons of perfectionist
this kid devilish notice his flow is still effortless
killen this foe and turning heads like the exorcist//
my rhymes shine like a bezel or two
clap medal your threw, ill Hansel and griddle you crew
you wack, remind me of game but im not settle’n dudes
the point is im a head of my time….an lame I been better then you//
really you multi’s suck, to battle is more to style
he’s like you is sick…naw really I think the boy is wild
im sonnin you man you know the boy is foul
im killin you silent…so why would anyone want the 40KAL//
LMAO at the last line
Good verse son dukes
Uppin 4 Votes, Plz
No Hater Votes.............
Drop Linx, Will Return The Favor..............
Uppin...............
Can I Get Some More Feed Back On This............
I Need It. Upp The Votes Plz............this Dude Garbage
Can I Get Some More Votes Plz ............................ppl
Will Return The Fav:
kalikoze got this... just a more complex verse, an way harder punches... youngcell barely had any punches... your last line was ight:
im killin you silent…so why would anyone want the 40KAL//
but all this was just filler basicaly:
right… to much bull shit like you come for me
you pussy, it’s just that time of month to bleed//
i stunt for free, and you know I hold the weapon
i’m suggestin that you testing this, you learn’n the lessons
step into the lessons of perfectionist
this kid devilish notice his flow is still effortless
both had cool multis though... kalikoze just came harder:
Like 'Nintendo's' you 'PLAY'd-OUT' "PEON", you dont 'punch', they all scratches, like 'DEFENSELESS-hoes'...
coo
I could 'hold-up signs' & let you 'combine-MINDS' with cats here, you'd still have 'SHITTY' rhymes...
I'll put ya 'BRAIN' on 'verbal-lockdown', imprison' ya lost soul, & have ya 'WHOLE' unwitty STYLE 'doin-time'...
those were coo too... pretty good battle, props to both... but:
vote-kalikoze911
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PS: please return the favor an vote in the battle in my signature, thanks.
Weak battle, kalikoze came straighter all around with his verse... Since I read I will vote.
Young Cell - Something tells me this isnt your only account, sean-fetti? Either way you need to lengthen your lines drastically and straighten the structure. it is called structure for a reason man. The better structure, the less dleay you have because you know what you want in your verse. Your punches were all played but concepts were on target for a beginner... Keep battling, and work on your surrounding words a little more.
Kalikoze - You came with better everything in this battle, except conepts.. I mean they were about average beginner on both sides so there is nothing wrong with it. Point, is, you were better.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176756
^ thanks.
^^^^word thanks yo keep it up ...........................
yo i gotta give this to young cell.... kalikoze did have harder punches but youngcells verse was structured WAY better.
step into the lessons of perfectionist
this kid devilish notice his flow is still effortless
killen this foe and turning heads like the exorcist//
my rhymes shine like a bezel or two
clap medal your threw, ill Hansel and griddle you crew
you wack, remind me of game but im not settle’n dudes
the point is im a head of my time….an lame I been better then you//
really you multi’s suck, to battle is more to style
he’s like you is sick…naw really I think the boy is wild
i was feelin that.
1 thing i liked from kalikoze was:
I'll put ya 'BRAIN' on 'verbal-lockdown', imprison' ya lost soul, & have ya 'WHOLE' unwitty STYLE 'doin-time'...
v/ young cell
young cell laid a straight merk game......kaloko just wuznt ready!!!!!
my rhymes shine like a bezel or two
clap medal your threw, ill Hansel and griddle you crew
you wack, remind me of game but im not settle’n dudes
the point is im a head of my time….an lame I been better then you//
really you multi’s suck, to battle is more to style
he’s like you is sick…naw really I think the boy is wild
im sonnin you man you know the boy is foul
im killin you silent…so why would anyone want the 40KAL//
my favorite part just blew dude out the water..........i didnt even like readin da otha guys shit no flow and da punches hit like a gay mouse....no hatin just opion
vote~ young cell
isnt that like 2 - 2 now??????????????????????????
uppin this please someone vote this guy was lame i dont see how he is winnin
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Originally Posted by Young Cell
I THINK IT IS.......................
Im Winning Nicca, Cuz The Stats Dont Lie...........
Good Battle Tho'..............
Lets Hurry Up N Get This Shit Voted On And Closed, So That You Can Bring All Ya Aliases To Help You In Rd.2......lol....iight Homie
no aliases homie lmao
someone vote on my battles
I AINT THE ONE W/ THE ALIASES. BUT THIS NEEDS TO GET UPP'D WIT SOME VOTES WUTS GOOD PPL.......................
VOTE ON MY BATTLES:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176857
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176588
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176852
LOL...................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176857
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176588
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176852
ITS IIGHT THO' I AINT HATIN......
uppin this battle
No Doubt............................................. ....voters, Plz......no Haterz......................
uppin this battle again someone goddamn vote
Quote:
Originally Posted by 2_sides_of_life
YES I AM BACK! I KNOW CURRENTLY HAVE THE POST AMOUNT TO VOTE ON THIS POLE...
Punches: kalikoze
Flow: cell
Multis: kalikoze
Imagery: cell
Vocab: cell
Overall Enjoyment: cell
AS I WAS SAYING, *AHEM*...
step into the lessons of perfectionist
this kid devilish notice his flow is still effortless
killen this foe and turning heads like the exorcist//
my rhymes shine like a bezel or two
clap medal your threw, ill Hansel and griddle you crew
you wack, remind me of game but im not settle’n dudes
the point is im a head of my time….an lame I been better then you//
really you multi’s suck, to battle is more to style
he’s like you is sick…naw really I think the boy is wild
that was illness!
v/ young cell
uppin votes
uppin this battle for votes
uppin this battle please someone vote
uppin again
KALIKOZE911 if i could vote you'd have it you have awsome structure and great punches keep up the good work
well this was a pretty good battle, and from votes it loks like it as well, or we just got dickriders......anyway
Kalik....
u had a pretty nice verse some times it was better then others, but a lot of times it is like that, hard to come through on hard punches every battle everyline but o well, u had a pretty good flow goin, and u had nice punches here and there, work on personals a little bit more and get more creative with ur style aiight man
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Young Cell....
i have seen u do better peeping some of ur other battles, u kind of confuse me every now and then some times u come hard and iight then sometimes u spit just wack, but anyway u had an ok flow, and stuff but ur punches were just not there, they were just lil nudges or some shit nothin really connected from my eyes, some lines were ok though liked a couple but other then that work on ya shit man
1
v/ kalik
--=|BreakDown|=--
Kaliko- Ya whole verse was well done. I like the punches but some of them were a lil bit forced. Nice wordplay, metas, multies(i like) and the consistency was good. Overall you did well on this battle, but i seen a lil bit better of you. Keep this shit going and also werk on ya structure...it was a lil hard to read.
Young Cell- You a young'n and needs to elevate dawg. Your whole verse was shit, mayb a lil somethin but nothyn compared to Kal. Just need to work everything you need. Improve on this shit and you alright. You had some nice flow though..i'll give u that...good shit thought...elevate
vote on my shits in my sig
^^^^this was my first battle on this site but look at my others tell me if i got better
nice battle cell
u ripped it up out dere
if i had 100 votes mine wud go 2 u cell
wen i get 100 i will breakdown da battle n vote 4 u
my vote- cell
ay yo hit up da link!
Quote:
Originally Posted by b rabbit
yo i apprciate the compliment.......
drop linz will return the fav:
good lookn, chk out more battles........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176857
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176588
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176852
young Cell" quick wit his 'chicken dances', dunn posted so this 'cock-advances' & still no chances...
I break stances, this 'so-sad' cuz this FAGGIT had to 'breakdown' & battle death, I BATTLE wit glances...
His pants is 'wet' like 'school-nerds', who wanna do 'homework', on this FAGGIT? Cus 'Young Cell' is just 'CLASS_less'...
Ya verse is 'Bull', 'Young Cell' is so 'WACK' he bring down 'PROPERTY VALUE ON WEB-BOARDS'...
Your 'Artificial' when it comes to 'character', I'm surprised you even gone 'SPIT' using ya 'OWN' vocal chords...
I'm 'Original' wit words, a lyrical scientist paving the way 'BITCH',
manufacturing 'BATTLE STYLE' inuendo's...
Like 'Nintendo's' you 'PLAY'd-OUT' "PEON", you dont 'punch', they all scratches, like 'DEFENSELESS-hoes'...
had to 'run-quick', to get ya freepostings up for 'RESPECT', cuz real flow in you is really hard 2 'FIND'
I spit on 'time', 'Young Cell' be fishing in 'water's without FISH' cuz all over this board, you 'DRAGG'N-YA-DEAD-LINES'...
You'll 'feel the need' to spit hard on 'PROMINENT people' becuz You'll never be 'one', already fail'd so ima call you my 'G-son'...
Take a 'free-run' among the only one who will 'out-freestyle' your 'PRE-WRITES' & father your 'PITIFUL-ways'...
Another 'Group-E', rap 'pussy*' without 'creativity'. I spit 'bullets' that leave 'YOU' seeing more 'SHELLS' than 'OCEAN-WAVES'...
Nothing saves you against me, cuz CREWS, FRIENDS, ALIASES, can only do so much to help this 'LIL-CHILD'...
Try'na 'buy-time' with me to write ya 'PLAYED_OUT' verse, while U kow I got the 'competance' 4 a straight 'FREESTYLE'...
I could 'hold-up signs' & let you 'combine-MINDS' with cats here, you'd still have 'SHITTY' rhymes...
I'll put ya 'BRAIN' on 'verbal-lockdown', imprison' ya lost soul, & have ya 'WHOLE' unwitty STYLE 'doin-time'...
WHO'S NEXT-2-GET-RECYCLED........
REALI REALI REALI NICE SHIT A GOOD FLOW
Damn this guy rushed me, wow I dump them 3’s
this is a peace of cake, but with the KALI this lame stunt wit G
right… to much bull shit like you come for me
you pussy, it’s just that time of month to bleed//
i stunt for free, and you know I hold the weapon
i’m suggestin that you testing this, you learn’n the lessons
step into the lessons of perfectionist
this kid devilish notice his flow is still effortless
killen this foe and turning heads like the exorcist//
my rhymes shine like a bezel or two
clap medal your threw, ill Hansel and griddle you crew
you wack, remind me of game but im not settle’n dudes
the point is im a head of my time….an lame I been better then you//
really you multi’s suck, to battle is more to style
he’s like you is sick…naw really I think the boy is wild
im sonnin you man you know the boy is foul
im killin you silent…so why would anyone want the 40KAL//
Yo a nice verses but not al der!!!SOZ MAN
V/KALIKOZE911