heauheuaheuaheuhauehauehaue.
10 Lines
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You spit first
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Good Luck. :thumbup:
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heauheuaheuaheuhauehauehaue.
10 Lines
Due asap
You spit first
No dickryding/hate/crew votes
Good Luck. :thumbup:
u called me out, so u spit first
i left out the squigglys and shit this time, so you'll have to use a different topic in your rhyme hahaha
Cript’s breath taking with literature like a ligature, so read it and suffocate in awe
Cus I’ll bury sin like foundation steel in concrete, cut perfectly like my verse is a mason saw
Flawed cus u couldn’t have a streak of brilliance if u was meteor showers, coward cus ur overly rated
So I’ll peb gay across ya grill, multiple times, 2 show u being a fag is written all over ya face!
Cus you’re a waste and all talk, couldn’t drop street shit if u defecated after ingesting rocks
And ur lame, cus your brain prevents u from spittin sick, like your mind’s prophylactics on infected cocks
Soft, so I’ll rip and discard u like I’m trashing shit music
Cus sin u couldn’t spark heat orally if ur oral orifice was full of teeth fuses
Defused and useless so I’ll float bullets in ur direction for u 2 catch my drift, then I’ll embarrass u quick
By slicing ya face nice with a pen knife 2 make u lose face twice before I bury u BITCH!
uppin your shit
4th line, peb---------meant to be pen, spelling mistake
Blah @ you
Damn, I aint even gotta rap to prove im better than what you stated
So why watch TV when we all know tales from the Cript is outdated.
Your underrated, & thats only funny cuz your just getting worse
And its like dogs in the freezer the way I-cy bitch in his verse.
Your surely to curse, how could he go on........ Without a doubt
But its amazing he dont even know half the words he rappin about.
He claims I shout, bitch and complain......... Then I got whored?
Oh yeah, I screamed my head off...... Over a damn keyboard.
I'm cloudy? cuz I reign-in and poored.... This sorry son of a bitch
So he threw a ball in celbration of a win, but forgot he couldnt pitch.
peace.
uppin this
Leave links bitches.
cript - prophylactics on infected cocks? oral orifice was full of teeth? What the fuck dude? Your flow was pretty off as your lines were too stretched and you had some real bullshit lines like the ones above. Work on throwing punches with concepts that aren't as gay and are more creative.. no hate
SinAmen - Eh, pretty weak for you but easily enough. The opener was decent and I for some reason really liked the one about him not knowing the words he was using cause it really seemed that way and hit him hard, haha. The rest was eh, you knew you didn't need to try harder, but your punches were clearly harder than his so you take this.
Vote - SinAmen
Please peep the sig, thx
i know this freepost but how the fuck your saying that i dont know the words i used, i wouldn't fuckin use them if i never.
it sounds to me like your the one who doesn't understand them
no hate
and it was teeth fuses dumbfuck, u know what 1 of them is??????? thick twat
Cript’s breath taking with literature like a ligature, so read it and suffocate in awe--(IIGHT)
Cus I’ll bury sin like foundation steel in concrete, cut perfectly like my verse is a mason saw(NOT HARD@ALL)
Flawed cus u couldn’t have a streak of brilliance if u was meteor showers, coward cus ur overly rated(WEAK)
So I’ll peb gay across ya grill, multiple times, 2 show u being a fag is written all over ya face!(NOT-FEELIN)
Cus you’re a waste and all talk, couldn’t drop street shit if u defecated after ingesting rocks(WOAH-NON-SENSE)
And ur lame, cus your brain prevents u from spittin sick, like your mind’s prophylactics on infected cocks(WAS LIKING)
Soft, so I’ll rip and discard u like I’m trashing shit music
Cus sin u couldn’t spark heat orally if ur oral orifice was full of teeth fuses(EHHH)
Defused and useless so I’ll float bullets in ur direction for u 2 catch my drift, then I’ll embarrass u quick
By slicing ya face nice with a pen knife 2 make u lose face twice before I bury u BITCH!( LAST 2-3 LINES WERENT BAD-BUT NOT GOOD, I FEEL)....
IT WAS A DECENT SPIT , BUT HONESTLY, IT WAS LIKE STOP N GO A COUPLE TIMES W/ YA VERSE...NICE LINES, WEAK STRUCTURE, FORMALITY WAS OFF....
SEEMED YOU COULD HAVE CAME HARDER OVERALL........
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Blah @ you
Damn, I aint even gotta rap to prove im better than what you stated
So why watch TV when we all know tales from the Cript is outdated.(FUNNY)
Your underrated, & thats only funny cuz your just getting worse
And its like dogs in the freezer the way I-cy bitch in his verse.(STRONG META)
Your surely to curse, how could he go on........ Without a doubt
But its amazing he dont even know half the words he rappin about.(HOTT)
He claims I shout, bitch and complain......... Then I got whored?
Oh yeah, I screamed my head off...... Over a damn keyboard.(IIGHT)
I'm cloudy? cuz I reign-in and poored.... This sorry son of a bitch
So he threw a ball in celbration of a win, but forgot he couldnt pitch.(KILLED THE LAST-LINE).............
YEA.YEA. I WAS DEFINITELY FEELIN THIS PIECE....FROM (SIN)....
HAD A BETTER STRUCTURE.......
NICE MULTIS + PUNCHES........
CONSISTENCY OF FLOW.......
THE ONLY THING I SEE THAT COULD OF BEEN DONE DIFFERENT WAS, MORE LINES, OPEN 4 MORE VOTERS, BUT GOOD BETWEEN BOTH,
X-CEPT, SIN CAME HARDER, & MORE EFFICIENT........7-10.....GOOOD..........
VOTE ON MY BATTLES.........PLZ.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176857
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176588
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176852
if i lose then i lose
but i've got skills anyway
2-0 sin
Your skills are shit.
Uppin 2 thanks for the votes.
lie your momma was
cript, had some ok parts to his verse, but most was soft and soggy, had some self glory, and flow was weak and unconsistant ... this is a battle not a game of grab ass...
Sin had some really good lines i was feelin him more, his punches were harder, good meta's and more consistant flow... props..
V/Sin
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
Damn, I aint even gotta rap to prove im better than what you stated
So why watch TV when we all know tales from the Cript is outdated.
Your underrated, & thats only funny cuz your just getting worse
And its like dogs in the freezer the way I-cy bitch in his verse.
.vs.
Nothing worth quoting.
This was one-sided. Sin came better in all aspects. Nice flow, structure, punches were pretty good. Good job overall. Cript, work on punches and flow, some lines were too streched, and punches just werent hitting. Keep battling and you'll get better. no hate. pz.
V//SinAmen, for having the better overall verse.
crit had one or two ok lines....but your lines were to stretched and your punches never really hit....n your flow was a lil off....so try keep your lines nice n short n add more personals n shit into your verse
sinamen...a weak verse for you but you did what you had to i guess...your punches came alot harder than crit's n your flow n structure was much better than crit's....therfore ima have to go with sinamen....
v/sinamen for harder punches n an overall better verse
Ight cript yur verse waz way off on this one...Your other battles was betta, alot betta, u had a confusing vocabulary, try to keep it to a minimum of big words but still have em.....Syn u had hott metas , strong punches and shit....Your shit was dope, i mean dope as helll like your sig lol....N e way i vote Syn for coming Way harder and hitting you with his punches :thumbup:
V/ Syn
Rtrn the favor by making me a sig or voting on my battle pleez
v/sin
reason he had better punches, flow, structure, metas...and a better verse..
now give me my money bitch.