ight kid u spite 1st
house rules
lik u say 10-100 lines
no dick riding none of that
due 45 minutes after check
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ight kid u spite 1st
house rules
lik u say 10-100 lines
no dick riding none of that
due 45 minutes after check
ok checking in............................. can u specify dick riding?
no crews or non of that votin 4 u jus cuz day cool wit u
ight check
dang nikka you give ya self 45 minutes on a spit
once you sed that i knew id take it,
i rite my rhymes in a matter of time,
you can sit on yur couch scared to commit the crime,
well once i start up these verse i know itz done,
man kidd i aint even tryin the basics is funn,
i dont even kno why im sitting here spittin this
i shood come to ya house and use my fists,
but that aint gunna happen cuz theres no reason for that,
id rather embarrass you up front wit no knives or gats,
cuz all i need is a paper and pencil,
my rhymes are authentic, you use a stencil,
well thatz ok ill beat you fair and square,
my rhymes are out the world, yurs rhymes are queer,
now remember my name git it stuck in yur head,
cuz thisll be the name who has you lying dead,
just watch when i catch you trippin on the street,
youll wish that you never faced me and tasted defeat,
but trust me boii i never panic,
yur crosing yur fingers shakin in a franic,
but fuck this shit itz time to end you here,
yur rapp will be blury, minez crystal clear.
Crazy is something u gotz 2 b
Ima leave your body parts anonymous like Michael Jackson’s lady
Im lik a teacher dat saw u running the halls
I don’t even consider u a man u still swimming in ur popz balls
Kid u aint worthy
Ima leave your chest open like open heart surgery
What u need in dis life is money, power and respect n u O n 3
U lost em all as soon as u agreed in battling me
U should Drop rapping n pick up a real job
Ill pick up da gat n leave more holes in u than sponge bob
Ill leave a unique design on your face like a eagles nest
While on the other hand my eagle has u gasping 4 your last breath
So when u see death don’t run embrace it
I solved all your problems your life is now basic
U don’t know what dick riding is, n that’s all u do wow son u is pitiful
He masturbates so much his right arm is the size of ludicrous “get back” video
U used 22 lines n it didn’t matter if he would have used 50
At the end dis battle still goes 2 me
Der aint going b a next time, but if der was u should come harder
I know u give me respect n I fucked ur mother but I aint your father
need votes hit up the votes
uppin need votes hit up dis battle
need votes vote please
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Bar Non came pretty shitty but he had concepts and punches in there. Work on your structure and all that jazz and thats a decent verse in the beggining
Crazy J jus pretty much rhyme while sayin he better than you. No real disses in there
Vote- Bar Non
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ight ight uppin need votes hit up this battle vote
is it best outta 5 votes or first to 5 votes?.....
1st to get 5
ok................................................
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uppin need votes
ight both you came pretty weak on this one n both you needa work on ya punches...crazy...your verse was basically pure self-glory so you wernt winnin nefin with that verse you needa focus on your opponet more..ad some personals n multis....bar you had some good concepts but the wordin wernt quite right so work on that n your punches...ight pz
v/bar for coming harder n havin better concepts
hit up the battle between me n Raid-r in ma sig pz
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