Final Fantasy (93rd open mic)

Braggadacio- Caramac

Crack Don Diss- Stats

just something i wrote up while playing an old favourite playstation game of mine.



Final Fantasy

I'm creating a situation of tragic mysteria
When i blast the ultima from my magic materia
Have celebrities killed, leech my enemies skills
Swing a big hammer, the greatest pedigree's drilled
Duck and dive for cover from the meteorain
Omni-Slash a contestant, bleeding in pain
Believe, its the same, Red, savage, 13th cat
With Ifrit to scald dipshits and burn beef black
I know you know we back, and as sick as you heard
'though Final Fantasy 7's a contradiction in terms!
About a million hit points, a trillion sick joints
Faster than a chocobo and killing those pigs, oink!
Landscrape-ya, my ultimate plans greater
From Wu-Tai to Midgar, inspire fans and haters
No Pale Shadow of a man who open Pandora's Box
Could stand up to the Cloud's when his jaw has dropped
Gliding through the Lifestream, an Ancient subconscious
Infinite knowledge, remain patient when faced with wrong fucks
It's on us, to save the planet people taken for granted
Since Shinra covered it with granite, i can't stand it
My Knights of the Round, put the bite on those clowns
In the Leviathan's Tidal Wave of hype they drown
So write this now, we're always and forever climbing
Peace, I'm off the mic and gone on the Highwind

About a million hit points, a trillion sick joints
Faster than a chocobo and killing those pigs, oink!
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you're sick....I mean ur crazy...wtf this was tight dog...had me like wow the whole time it took to read...my chin still rests on my fuckin keyboard...lol....keep droppin that fire fam...pz

ok,let's see...first things first:i liked it.good usage of vocab,helped empasize the message.some nice multis there which helped the flow.olso had some deep ideas in there,i like this cuz proves if somebody is an artist.no deep ideas,just clapin yar mouth.agree with berlin's'best on that particular drop,so ill.by the way 93 !? open mics...that's something.keep it up

my fav line:
"No Pale Shadow of a man who open Pandora's Box
Could stand up to the Cloud's when his jaw has dropped"

if ya have time,check my drops from the sig

that was shit u aint got shit fuck u shit hahaha shit..nerd shit nerdd nerddd
HAHAHAH
NERD
NERD
SHIT

dope piecde johnny I liked the read it was real interesting i think i will write one about nba live or something lol. This was good though nice job.

this was dope..topic was good, original lol.. structure was good in this, everything flowed well. multis were strong, wich helped your flow alot. came creative, everyline was describing wich made this a good read. there was no weak points in this verse, everything came hard. vocab was also good in here. i had no favourite line(s), all was dope.. was a good read. nice drop

uppin this one time^^

and ps, masterius? you criticising my work is like a midget squeaking at a giant, you insignificant herb. now go to your room and slap yourself for freeposting.

This was nice, I liked it a lot.

Took me a while to figure what you were trying to say in a few of those bars, I must admit, I'm not too familiar with the game. But the wording was great, you really excelled yourself in terms of syntax. I liked these bars:

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About a million hit points, a trillion sick joints
Faster than a chocobo and killing those pigs, oink!

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That made me laugh aloud for some reason. Very cool drop, keep at it man.

Flow and rhymecheme were nice. I never liked the game or got into it so I'm sure that's why I didn't quite get everything. Nice pieace. Keep writing.

My OM: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...88#post2153588

I had a strange feeling you'd make a piece about this sometime, ever since that cypher we were doing LOL.

I liked it alot, was rather creative...and word @ Knights Of The Round.....that materia just pointlessly kills everything...in one summon :rolleyes:

Keep it up Johnny boy :thumbup:

i liked this shit b/c it was real creative incorporating the game into ya rhymes is refreshing its to many lines for me to point out but i liked the chocobo line haha niceness
they got the movie coming out soon 2
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it brought back memories...

it was a decent drop, good topic, good meta's and what not...
a really solid piece....
could've been a bit better if it wasn't cheesy though, but the topic wasn't intended for it to be too serious IMO...

keep it up...

8/10

mines:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176869
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176604

I really liked this... Good vocab... Good flow... What really put it above others though was the fact that you actually found a different/new topic to write about. Reading the same OMs over and over can become tedious but this was really good to read. I think there's probably different topics out there other than a game but this was good.. Reminded me of some of Benefit's stuff...

So yeah nice piece... I'm going to drop a piece later if you could check that out I'd appreciate it.

Peace

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Originally Posted by Masterius

that was shit u aint got shit fuck u shit hahaha shit..nerd shit nerdd nerddd
HAHAHAH
NERD
NERD
SHIT

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Your gay and retarted.


This was a very good peice, it brings back memories on when i played and beat some of the games. Final Fantasy owns, great concept. peace and keep this up....btw the closer was dope. and your multis are very well flowed.

LoL @ writing about a dope game, that's awsome. I liked the piece it was still put together well and it seems like you did put some time into it. Props to you.

Believe, its the same, Red, savage, 13th cat
With Ifrit to scald dipshits and burn beef black


LoL word.

this was AIIGHT
You could have rapped more about the game's storyline.
anyway FFX shits on FF7.
Auron would murder Cloud.

lol @ everyone reminising about FF7. didn't think this was gonna get so many replies. ha.

uppin^ again^