1man Army..it's Mrdr..!! Feedback Plz.
Non-Sensical, back-bit'N ryhmer'z, try'na spit spirant, like I did,
Yall couldnt get a crowd 2 C ya point, by slicing off they eyelids,
I penetrate wit punchlines, Jerk'N offs ya only Vibration,
I got old cats wit velcro say'N 'that cat laced it'!,
I'm question'n ya potential, A large debate is @ stake,
Theres such dissagreement, cuz I only see fakes in my face,
Time to erase ya rhymes cuz they neva were, Nor will ever be Great,
Only time ya bars got flow, is swimming down the lake,~~~
yall cant get at me with deplorable situations, its time yall took warning,
its been ground for war, my bars'll pound you whore's untill (mourn)ing,
i been pour'n, carn-I-vorous, deplorums over these forums,
cuz i hate to see cats fight back clawless, without caution, :shocked:
winner & champ, abus'N these dispicable fags, :hump:
No Niccaz & GATZ, just spitt'n Riddl'z N Raps,
Ya'll could neva get it together wit reynolds N wrap(Reynolds wrap)
My submissive ways got'em think'n bout bring'n a Gun 2 a Raid,
Nuff'N'll change, ma' barz pack ammo, and you stuck wit tha cliP, :shoot:
Im bust'n Yo shit, an' goin back n 4th playn with words,
I could use metaphors, verbs, or regular words,
But it'll only be worst, for you.. when i post it on-these boards. :help:
it's 'MURRDURR'...... I'll take a toast to ya Corpse,
My flows Nastier than throw-up-on-tha-floor,
I BET IF THESE CATS REALLY WANTED 2 BATTLE THEY WOULDNT SHOW UP, FO'SHO........... :thefinger
GEDD@ME.......KALIKOZE9/11:shoot:
feedback plz.....
my 2ew linx:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...25#post2151325
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...98#post2151398
