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I hang niggers, cut evil beef like farms wit mad cow disease
Beat down gays that claim rape so they ass really aint a tease.
Bitch please, I share my food straight down to the cans n all..........
But if I ever met jesus I'd feed em crust so he'd be a canibal.
I'm standin tall, fuck your race and religion, I aint christian yo
I'll masterbate with holy water to get the upper hand on the pope.
Go get choked... I know damn well niggers at night is countin sheep
They spy on little girls so they can say they were "hangin wit peeps"
Its complete, masters and slaves are in love cuz ones always whipped.
But a mexicans the type to cum in his girl and claim he missed.
So think again, failed school: made it to jail and finally started countin
Show my apreciation for blacks and buy em they own water fountain.


No hate <3

LMAO...funny funny
This was a funny piece...I know you're not racist for one so that's not even an issue.Wordplay was good..use on facts was good basically I'm talking about your resources..the mexican thing was a lil off they claim their children for the most part black people say its not theirs but it was funny...lmao all around funny.

Wow ... A Lil Short But Like They say

Big Things come in Little packages LOL And you really Did a lil somethin In The Lil Piece I like it
Maybe youll Say More Next Time LOL

was ok yo.. nothing special...

^ That hurtz Gucci.

:'(

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Lmao..............Funny shit......my fav. part was when you said:

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They spy on little girls so they can say they were "hangin wit peeps"

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^^^lmao...........
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Its complete, masters and slaves are in love cuz ones always whipped.

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^^lmao...........this whole shit was funny.........i needed a laugh..thanx sin

Pz.

More, Feedb............................ACK

lmfao. Nice piece man, funny as fuck. Ur closure was madd funny, seems u done did ur research on this piece. Shoulda made it a bit longer cuz im wantin more, it was madd funny. I aint religious either so da pope shit made me laugh. Nice drop man.

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HELLA FUNNY... a lil racist but hella funny....

"I'll masterbate with holy water to get the upper hand on the pope."

comedy......OM needed something like this to laugh at...... i would of liked to see this longer thats about the only thing i felt was wrong with this piece, we may view other topics different but i agree on this one....~one~

not bad at all had some lines I liked and some that was a lil mah but all in all it was good.....



I hang niggers, cut evil beef like farms wit mad cow disease
Beat down gays that claim rape so they ass really aint a tease.
^ meh
Bitch please, I share my food straight down to the cans n all..........
But if I ever met jesus I'd feed em crust so he'd be a canibal.
^ good
I'm standin tall, fuck your race and religion, I aint christian yo
I'll masterbate with holy water to get the upper hand on the pope.
^ lmao
Go get choked... I know damn well niggers at night is countin sheep
They spy on little girls so they can say they were "hangin wit peeps"
^ good one
Its complete, masters and slaves are in love cuz ones always whipped.
But a mexicans the type to cum in his girl and claim he missed.
^ lmao
So think again, failed school: made it to jail and finally started countin
Show my apreciation for blacks and buy em they own water fountain.
^ think you might get banned lmao


peace

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haha that shit was funny as hell, wished it was a little longer but it was entertaining...
"Its complete, masters and slaves are in love cuz ones always whipped.
But a mexicans the type to cum in his girl and claim he missed."

that shit was funny cuz i know many-a mexicans like that...good shit...stay up homie...~1~

There was a lot of wordplay, you had some good ideas. The piece had good flow, and it works for entertainment. Higher than a skit, because its a technically sound verse, thought it was a funny drop. Nice little piece, had creative concepts.

LMFAO

ALl i gotta say

Nice Closer :)

LOL... Everything that had to be said has been said... Funny piece man though nice work...

Peace

Good Good, thank you all.

*bows*