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Check in's are due by Wednesday.
10-20 Lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Verses are due by Friday 11:59 PM eastern.
Vote on 3 battles and leave links. I'm checking.
Only LLL competitors may vote.
[only those with a battle this week]
20..
sure.
LWs claiming they're better, ya'll are a crew of imposters
I'd tell them cut the crap.. but i laugh seeing you on the roster
jace lost to me, shadows & spit no showed, u brag its achieving
but really your rosters just a list of all the faggots I've beaten
you dickrode, & elevation? thats a concept this newb believes in
you have promise.. but we all hope it has to do with leaving
im truly even.. sick of ya bitch music, u get bruised quick
cant even make a name for yourself.. you had spit choose it
shoppings a feminine trait, your the kinda bitch i devour
I'd leave him alone, but he'd spend that shit in an hour
this'll be ya worst yet, rep tainted, remember its broken
when to get here, you dq'ed an LW member from voting
grew a huge ego, but against center the duckings worse..
far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
You bitch, quit bowing to spit.. we dont need it for reference
why you Lay Doubt, when its clear the knees is your preference
I may be prejudiced, but it isn't like your rapping is fine,
since i wasnt even bias. . until i started passing his lines
aint near my level.. caught up in the doubt & distortion
treat ya head like a mistake & blow it out of proportion..
rofl, slant rhyme? ^Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
you ain't cut out for this Feeble, i'll dismantle you boss
how you gonna handle LLL? crybaby can't even handle a loss
your bantering stops, we all know what your verse brings
so fuck convincing the voters... you losing is assure thing
i hurt kings, played fuck.. obvious new material's needed
went and flipped that hair line so much it started recedin
n if it pleases.. Deja's worthless and ain't livin for reasons
you don't care? then watch me leave you indifferent pieces
y'all have the least wit, they ran... looks like you won't win son
cuz they got outta Dodge.. while you can't even afford to get in one
kid musta dimmed some, lousy spits but still the loudest bitch
after i strip him of his title i betchu the homo gets aroused n shit
no flow and thinks he has a thousand hits, nah, $pit's right
that bar wouldn't be a slant rhyme if you posted with this type
you're mostly the bitch, guy.. and i'm just here givin' some help
cuz his verse brings arraign of wack lines that could imprison himself
his shit isn't well, Deja ain't run shit.. cuz i'll sever and bash herbs
go ahead and protect your forum.. but you'll still never password
i smack nerds, quit acting tough cuz Feeble, you're most bitch
so how you gonna pic a fight when you're too pussy to post it?
If you read this battle, please vote. Me and Geno aren't going to be asking for votes, but if you read it please vote on it.
Peace
-feebs
LWs claiming they're better, ya'll are a crew of imposters
I'd tell them cut the crap.. but i laugh seeing you on the roster
im truly even.. sick of ya bitch music, u get bruised quick
cant even make a name for yourself.. you had spit choose it
shoppings a feminine trait, your the kinda bitch i devour
I'd leave him alone, but he'd spend that shit in an hour
grew a huge ego, but against center the duckings worse..
far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
You bitch, quit bowing to spit.. we dont need it for reference
why you Lay Doubt, when its clear the knees is your preference
I may be prejudiced, but it isn't like your rapping is fine,
since i wasnt even bias. . until i started passing his lines
aint near my level.. caught up in the doubt & distortion
treat ya head like a mistake & blow it out of proportion..
: pretty good verse from you, wasn't feeling a couple of ya punches but for the most part they were solid.. the loan, bias, and out of proportion were ones i liked best from you.
-lay
your bantering stops, we all know what your verse brings
so fuck convincing the voters... you losing is assure thing
y'all have the least wit, they ran... looks like you won't win son
cuz they got outta Dodge.. while you can't even afford to get in one
kid musta dimmed some, lousy spits but still the loudest bitch
after i strip him of his title i betchu the homo gets aroused n shit
you're mostly the bitch, guy.. and i'm just here givin' some help
cuz his verse brings arraign of wack lines that could imprison himself
:those were the ony punches i was feeling from you, you came pretty inconsistant for my taste, but the assure punch was your best one in my mind.
count this or not but you guys wanted votes and so i gave you one
v- Feeble Minded
you dickrode, & elevation? thats a concept this newb believes in
you have promise.. but we all hope it has to do with leaving
im truly even.. sick of ya bitch music, u get bruised quick
cant even make a name for yourself.. you had spit choose it
aint near my level.. caught up in the doubt & distortion
treat ya head like a mistake & blow it out of proportion..
vs.
i hurt kings, played fuck.. obvious new material's needed
went and flipped that hair line so much it started recedin <---omg
y'all have the least wit, they ran... looks like you won't win son
cuz they got outta Dodge.. while you can't even afford to get in one
kid musta dimmed some, lousy spits but still the loudest bitch
after i strip him of his title i betchu the homo gets aroused n shit
his shit isn't well, Deja ain't run shit.. cuz i'll sever and bash herbs
go ahead and protect your forum.. but you'll still never password
lol@feeble complaining about not being creative with personals and then using them in like half his shit -_-.
v - Lay Dizzout =/
My complaint is that most peoples personals = the most boring shit I have ever seen. Lol. Its cool though. even though you had no need to make that comment. 1-1
LWs claiming they're better, ya'll are a crew of imposters
I'd tell them cut the crap.. but i laugh seeing you on the roster
you dickrode, & elevation? thats a concept this newb believes in
you have promise.. but we all hope it has to do with leaving
shoppings a feminine trait, your the kinda bitch i devour
I'd leave him alone, but he'd spend that shit in an hour
You bitch, quit bowing to spit.. we dont need it for reference
why you Lay Doubt, when its clear the knees is your preference
aint near my level.. caught up in the doubt & distortion
treat ya head like a mistake & blow it out of proportion..
vs
i hurt kings, played fuck.. obvious new material's needed
went and flipped that hair line so much it started recedin
y'all have the least wit, they ran... looks like you won't win son
cuz they got outta Dodge.. while you can't even afford to get in one
kid musta dimmed some, lousy spits but still the loudest bitch
after i strip him of his title i betchu the homo gets aroused n shit
his shit isn't well, Deja ain't run shit.. cuz i'll sever and bash herbs
go ahead and protect your forum.. but you'll still never password
Feeble won this by a nut hair, it could go either way tho dependin on preference but I think Feebs took this with a little more consistency and more quotables, I think both came dope tho, And Geno really made this tough for feebs, but i think he fell a bit short, good shit 1
I only said something cuz I felt you were just trying to fit in instead of doing what you know you want to do. But you know I still luh you so why care? :love:Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
wow Lay Doubt is the dopest thing to hit this league in ages.
I wish I was as dope as him.
I think I'll start crying now just to begin my Genocide emulation. :thumbup: :thumbup:
harsh breakdown kap, considering your verses aren't all that great.
just basically saying i didn't have one good line in my verse? lol, right.
i know the "password" line didn't suck and the "Dodge" line isn't played.. k thx.
2-1.
LWs claiming they're better, ya'll are a crew of imposters
I'd tell them cut the crap.. but i laugh seeing you on the roster
^eh, so u cant tell them to cut the crap cuz yur laughing? weak
jace lost to me, shadows & spit no showed, u brag its achieving
but really your rosters just a list of all the faggots I've beaten
^ jace also beat you too, i dunno bout the rest, me and u are 1-1 meh
you dickrode, & elevation? thats a concept this newb believes in
you have promise.. but we all hope it has to do with leaving
^lol, i likes
im truly even.. sick of ya bitch music, u get bruised quick
cant even make a name for yourself.. you had spit choose it
^lol, another good 1
shoppings a feminine trait, your the kinda bitch i devour
I'd leave him alone, but he'd spend that shit in an hour
^ok wordplay i guess
this'll be ya worst yet, rep tainted, remember its broken
when to get here, you dq'ed an LW member from voting
^ok
grew a huge ego, but against center the duckings worse..
far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
^nah, this 1 was more of a stretch, cuz the word changed completely
You bitch, quit bowing to spit.. we dont need it for reference
why you Lay Doubt, when its clear the knees is your preference
^eh
I may be prejudiced, but it isn't like your rapping is fine,
since i wasnt even bias. . until i started passing his lines
^nope
aint near my level.. caught up in the doubt & distortion
treat ya head like a mistake & blow it out of proportion..
^ok
decent
you ain't cut out for this Feeble, i'll dismantle you boss
how you gonna handle LLL? crybaby can't even handle a loss
^ok i guess
your bantering stops, we all know what your verse brings
so fuck convincing the voters... you losing is assure thing
^nope, didnt like
i hurt kings, played fuck.. obvious new material's needed
went and flipped that hair line so much it started recedin
^ok i guess
n if it pleases.. Deja's worthless and ain't livin for reasons
you don't care? then watch me leave you indifferent pieces
^no
y'all have the least wit, they ran... looks like you won't win son
cuz they got outta Dodge.. while you can't even afford to get in one
^i like
kid musta dimmed some, lousy spits but still the loudest bitch
after i strip him of his title i betchu the homo gets aroused n shit
^heh, it was ok..the aroused part was funny
no flow and thinks he has a thousand hits, nah, $pit's right
that bar wouldn't be a slant rhyme if you posted with this type
^nope
you're mostly the bitch, guy.. and i'm just here givin' some help
cuz his verse brings arraign of wack lines that could imprison himself
^dope
his shit isn't well, Deja ain't run shit.. cuz i'll sever and bash herbs
go ahead and protect your forum.. but you'll still never password
^nah
i smack nerds, quit acting tough cuz Feeble, you're most bitch
so how you gonna pic a fight when you're too pussy to post it?
^eh
v/feeble, just more consistant
iont kno, but im gettin tired of all these lw and deja lines really, they boring as fuck
hey im fatassG and i came to to disturb the peace,
i hipnotyzed your mom and made her striptease,
just by reading your verses i can tell you's a bitch,
you rhyme like a dumb ass white boy named mitch,
dont talk like you know a lot of shit,
come to my hood and your ass gonna get hit,
just respond to me and try to dis,
i know yo weak ass cant come back hard like when i fucked your bitch ass sis,
ive rapped the best and done the impossible,
everyones tried me and lost cuz im just that unstoppable,
I double post within days of distance.
I'm dope like that.
Kap, His password line is basically meaning this.
Feeble could protect his crew forum, by puting a password on it. Thats obvious. But thats not the punch. The punch is that Feebles crew could never pass Word.
He is talking about the crew Last Word, which he is in.
Not Pass, Word?
Get it, it was dope.
thnx cap'n break it down
still, it was iight, not dick ride worthy
nahsayen?
perhaps not, but def not sway worthy.
fuck outta here Krapholins
spit= my hero
yeah the password line was dope no way was his verse corny
mind making that a coherent sentence "bgizzy"? rofl.. go back to frontlines.
^ *sighs* your still a fucking bitch....the only reason you elevated is cause you get ghosted for bitch so dont talk shit dont make me expose you FAG!
lmfao.. you're a fucking moron.. even IF I EVER DID get ghosted for.. how the FUCK does that make someone elevate? rofl.. if someone does your math homework are you gonna get better at it?.. wow, your logic is fucking idiotic. nobody's ever ghosted for me you untalented faggot.. now get the fuck outta LLL, herb.. and stop jocking my nut's in your signature.. wack bitch.
wack bitch lmao never said you personaly elevated im saying your ghost writer is but keep talkin bitch thats all I got to say now go jok Feebles dick
he dont have a ghost, n thats word bgayzzy
okay then faggot, explain WHO THE FUCK is ghostwriting for me? even if you look at my old battles .. i ALWAYS had a rhyme scheme like i do now.. same fucking style jackass... just because i elevated and you haven't.. get the fuck over it.. why you keep posting in this thread? dumb motherfucker.. feeble won't be too happy.. you have no business piping up in LLL.. fuck your opinion.
Who is Lay Doubt?
Surprised me, good battle by both.
Genocide....
I'm godly..triple post like whoa
your breakdown of my verse was obviously biased from last week's battle.
3-1.
Good battle Feeble.
LWs claiming they're better, ya'll are a crew of imposters
I'd tell them cut the crap.. but i laugh seeing you on the roster
im truly even.. sick of ya bitch music, u get bruised quick
cant even make a name for yourself.. you had spit choose it
shoppings a feminine trait, your the kinda bitch i devour
I'd leave him alone, but he'd spend that shit in an hour
this'll be ya worst yet, rep tainted, remember its broken
when to get here, you dq'ed an LW member from voting
grew a huge ego, but against center the duckings worse..
far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
You bitch, quit bowing to spit.. we dont need it for reference
why you Lay Doubt, when its clear the knees is your preference
vs
you ain't cut out for this Feeble, i'll dismantle you boss
how you gonna handle LLL? crybaby can't even handle a loss
i hurt kings, played fuck.. obvious new material's needed
went and flipped that hair line so much it started recedin
n if it pleases.. Deja's worthless and ain't livin for reasons
you don't care? then watch me leave you indifferent pieces
kid musta dimmed some, lousy spits but still the loudest bitch
after i strip him of his title i betchu the homo gets aroused n shit
no flow and thinks he has a thousand hits, nah, $pit's right
that bar wouldn't be a slant rhyme if you posted with this type
his shit isn't well, Deja ain't run shit.. cuz i'll sever and bash herbs
go ahead and protect your forum.. but you'll still never password
tough tough call... both witty, both hard... I thought Feeble won orignally, when I first read them both as I had already seen lay's, but after re-reading them, it's too close to call... Feeble had the edge on the wit, barely, while I feel Lay was meaner... damn.
tie.
both were good. HW match done well.
v/ geno.
feeble
jace lost to me, shadows & spit no showed, u brag its achieving
but really your rosters just a list of all the faggots I've beaten
you dickrode, & elevation? thats a concept this newb believes in
you have promise.. but we all hope it has to do with leaving
shoppings a feminine trait, your the kinda bitch i devour
I'd leave him alone, but he'd spend that shit in an hour
You bitch, quit bowing to spit.. we dont need it for reference
why you Lay Doubt, when its clear the knees is your preference
Lay Doubt
you ain't cut out for this Feeble, i'll dismantle you boss
how you gonna handle LLL? crybaby can't even handle a loss
kid musta dimmed some, lousy spits but still the loudest bitch
after i strip him of his title i betchu the homo gets aroused n shit
no flow and thinks he has a thousand hits, nah, $pit's right
that bar wouldn't be a slant rhyme if you posted with this type
i got that nigga feeble here, his shit was more smooth & creative
nahnahming
4-1, more votes please...?
this battle should get at least 10 votes total.
nice shit from both i think, some good punches in there,
doubt hit harder tho.
vote - geno
Well.. I don't get how Lay's hit harder. Someone might have to compare to me on aim about that. Anyway, good battle Lay. I win 4-2 or something like that.