well u should kno the rules if you dont like'em then quit
10 lines
no d/r and shit like that
u spit first you have 30 mins.
time starts once you check in
i'll drop after ur done and it wont take me long so dont worry
well u should kno the rules if you dont like'em then quit
10 lines
no d/r and shit like that
u spit first you have 30 mins.
time starts once you check in
i'll drop after ur done and it wont take me long so dont worry
my check in i'll be waitin....................................g/l lets keep this friend with a minimum of shit talkin
damn your not even gonna check in.........................i smell, i smell, PUSSY!
Shut the fuck up its called voting on other battles. Dumb shit newbie ass mother fucker.
wow is this your first time cussin lol hurry up and drop ya shit you have a battle go'n on no time for vote'n
I seen the shit you posted against ethnic and your better off dead
Your punchlines are whack and trust me, no one was feeling what you said
The only reason you walked out victorious is because eth was crap
You know, living kind of like are battle, I had you beaten from the bitch slapped
Talk some shit before the battle to try and add the effect that you’re hard
The only time this seems to be true is when your anus has been scared
Take notes on how to properly kill a newbie because it might help to know
Your all of the above plus you suck, fuck, lick, flick, grab, swallow, and blow
Living you become even more famous after your dead so let me help you
So while I become a necro I’ve foreshadowed you whole record, now you’re screwed
2 minutes left punk ass..
check in......
thats all the time i need cuz 2 me ur jus free postin pussy
wit 2 minutes i think you've talk'd enough shit
gotta question, with 30 minutes thats the best you came up wit
you dumb bitch after i spit u'll realized that the rest ova
your mad ucz your a waste like unwanted left ovas
im like ya lines put me to sleep like babies with warm milk
cuz ya whole verse was borein like watch the lce melt
i aint the best but im betta then you
your lines prolly would've stood out if you text'em blue
i've forshadow'd your fate outta this battle you wont rob me
make'n threads must be ya job freepostin must be ya hobby
done now people vote....
well people vote and Forshadow you had all the time in the world cuz you neva check'd in one of the rules was time starts after you check in pay attention
yo....
i vote foreshadow just cause this nigga legend sucks!!!wow bro i mean seriously
waht the fuck were u thinkin when u decided to come to rapbattles .com
wow
thats all i can say
v/foreshadow
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uppin for some more votes..
haha sum gd linesQuote:
Take notes on how to properly kill a newbie because it might help to know
Your all of the above plus you suck, fuck, lick, flick, grab, swallow, and blow
V Foreshadow
No hate peace
yo im have to go with foreshadow on this one he clearly came harder than live....he punches were alot harder than livings aswel....living dawg u needa work on them punches 4real they were weak as fuck dawg....dont be so arrogant in ur verse aswel....ight no h8
fore....dawg good verse punches were decent....i really cant fault ur verse....even though i know u could come alot harder....
v/foreshadow for harder punches and an over all better verse
hit up the battle between me n eminem......it should be on the first page.....pz
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aiiyo im goin wit shadow even if he denied mine he got nice punches u got jokes
4-0 me
2-0 poll votes
2. uppin for more votes...
easy choice here
v/ foreshadow
Dude u just got overpowered. To much 4 u man. Elevate b4 u challenge some one of eleete status.
Hot line:
The only reason you walked out victorious is because eth was crap
You know, living kind of like are battle, I had you beaten from the bitch slapped
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ledgend
wit 2 minutes i think you've talk'd enough shit
gotta question, with 30 minutes thats the best you came up wit?
Decent opener.
you dumb bitch after i spit u'll realized that the rest ova
your mad ucz your a waste like unwanted left ovas
Eh.
im like ya lines put me to sleep like babies with warm milk
cuz ya whole verse was borein like watch the lce melt
Could of been better phrased..But Really just filler.
i aint the best but im betta then you
your lines prolly would've stood out if you text'em blue
Hmm.
i've forshadow'd your fate outta this battle you wont rob me
make'n threads must be ya job freepostin must be ya hobby
Decent Closer.
4Shadow.
I seen the shit you posted against ethnic and your better off dead
Your punchlines are whack and trust me, no one was feeling what you said
Decent
The only reason you walked out victorious is because eth was crap
You know, living kind of like are battle, I had you beaten from the bitch slapped
Good Diss.
Talk some shit before the battle to try and add the effect that you’re hard
The only time this seems to be true is when your anus has been scared
No.
Take notes on how to properly kill a newbie because it might help to know
Your all of the above plus you suck, fuck, lick, flick, grab, swallow, and blow
Nah.
Living you become even more famous after your dead so let me help you
So while I become a necro I’ve foreshadowed you whole record, now you’re screwed
Horrible Closer.
Both Verses Were...Lame. Living Ledgend..Where's the punches man?! You're flow was good, Structre was generic and easy to follow, but your main diss was the opener and everthing else seemed to fall apart.
Foreshadow, your verse sucked with the exception of the bitchslapped line. It was a good diss, but I mean..You could of come up with something a little more...damaging.
Personally...they both look like exactly the same verse, They both suck. I'm going to give this to Ledgend though because he didnt write in Tiny ass font that made mt eyes hurt.
Vote= Legend.
I seen the shit you posted against ethnic and your better off dead
Your punchlines are whack and trust me, no one was feeling what you said
good opener!!!
Fore- ur 3 and 4 lines were ok, but they seemed a bit stretched and a lil played in y opinion....NICE JOB THO!!!!
i've forshadow'd your fate outta this battle you wont rob me
make'n threads must be ya job freepostin must be ya hobby
It's ok....!!
Living- Man I dunno I usually like your stuff, but man ur shit is played....especially sayin that you foreshadow his fate....fore has probably heard that every time he battles someone so I would say it's played......later....
v/FORE!!!!
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well well well God'sLyricalGift if you hate on me a lil more i'll start to think your racist i already kno i wont this 4real cuz nobody gave any decent feedback they just voted for you sorry ass cuz you voted for them im not stupid im jus waitin on the people who'll vote honestly cuz you should kno that those votes are gonna get DQ'd dumbass so if your gonna have people ryde on ya dick at least tell'em to leave a decent feedback
i meant i already kno i won this 4real........................
Nice votes everyone except dough thats a bullshit reason to vote.
ur an idoiot just accept defeat actually wanna topical me livin i will murder you!!!!!!!
Like i said most of ya votes will be DQ'd cuz of inadequate feedback if they're gonna dick ride leave decent feedback Oh and uppin for votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
fuck you shadow,you pussy ass nigga battle with legend,i dont use name in my battle so you dont eather.............and you say im crap,battle me....but i take topical battle with you.......
yo dude ill hit up this 1 if ull hit up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175685 thanks
Peace
What happened to the votes. Okay I see. But Celest you could delete all of the other posts because this battle wont get that much reviews because of the number of repluys.
vote goes to foreshawdow if i could vote but i cant yet so v/foreshawdow........................... LoYaL-T
notice how half of the ppl that voted for foreshadowin is banned........
I dont know if i can vote yet because i have less than a hundred post but i think that these dudes that voted are friends of foreshadow because his verse was not tight at all, like for real for real. Living Legend this aint your best work i seen some of your other battles and you came harder on them but in my opinion you still one this battle anyway. Foreshadow's lines were too long which didn't seem to flow well together and they say they didn't like living legends punchlines but i didn't see any in foreshadows. Chi-town running shit GOON SQUAD
I seen the shit you posted against ethnic and your better off dead
Your punchlines are whack and trust me, no one was feeling what you said
(ok)
The only reason you walked out victorious is because eth was crap
You know, living kind of like are battle, I had you beaten from the bitch slapped
(ok)
Talk some shit before the battle to try and add the effect that you’re hard
The only time this seems to be true is when your anus has been scared
(ehh)
Take notes on how to properly kill a newbie because it might help to know
Your all of the above plus you suck, fuck, lick, flick, grab, swallow, and blow
(ehh)
Living you become even more famous after your dead so let me help you
So while I become a necro I’ve foreshadowed you whole record, now you’re screwed
(ok)
wit 2 minutes i think you've talk'd enough shit
gotta question, with 30 minutes thats the best you came up wit
(ok)
you dumb bitch after i spit u'll realized that the rest ova
your mad ucz your a waste like unwanted left ovas
(played)
im like ya lines put me to sleep like babies with warm milk
cuz ya whole verse was borein like watch the lce melt
(ehh)
i aint the best but im betta then you
your lines prolly would've stood out if you text'em blue
(ok)
i've forshadow'd your fate outta this battle you wont rob me
make'n threads must be ya job freepostin must be ya hobby
(played but funny non the less)
now i dont know if i can vote actually because i dont have 100 post but imma vote anyway cause not to many do here
in my opinion you both came pretty weak no h8 just truth
but my vote goes to LL he had more hard hitting punches
Fore your verse was consistent just lacked in punches
it looks like both of yous underestimated each other and just threw something together
anyway good battle much respect to both return the favor
B-Safe
foreshadow droped better than livin legend
livin legend put some better stuff together
foreshadows blew living legends away, living legend needs to talk about something else then lines making him sleep