10 lines....no dr, cv, hv, biting, blind spit...due in 30
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10 lines....no dr, cv, hv, biting, blind spit...due in 30
Checking In..........................
Aiyo....Foreshadow is a hint to tell wats about to come NEXT/
Does the foreshadow u readin give ya a hint bout this TEXT/
Like how i creap up from behind and take the WIN/
Im like the prince of persia, realease my warrior WITHIN/
Executuna reck fools with ease in a quick BATTLE/
facin me ur out like a Blind kid in a game of SCRABBLE/
My personals give yu cuts , scrapes and other REGRETS/
Cuz im know to bend bars like fat kids on swing SETS/ ---bars meanin lines<This verse was fun but it has to END/
for broken Foreshadows, it be hard to MEND/
Kick back and bust raps that won’t succeed
You’re better off in the OM rappin about weed
Maybe you should kill yourself and make my job easy
Because when the votes are in I’ll take this freebee
Ms. Ex with his dick between his legs running away
I bet front lines would have a field day on your ass if you’d stay
What’s wrong that doesn’t even turn you on
Your skills are just ridiculous humorous like your fat ass in a thong
Because you picked that name doesn’t mean you hand out death
Your just like most of the whack newbies who get fucked in the chest
Uppin for some votes.....
Will vote on battles if links are left...
Uppin for votes as well....also will return the feedback:thumbup:
Uppin for some damn votes people. c'mon......
wuts good, im new 2 tha site so if u dont wana count my vote its all good.
i think Executuna won dis battle
breakdown:
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Personals:Exe
Complexity:FS
Flow:Exe
Metas:Exe
ders much more but dats jus general, so my vote goes 2 Executuna..nice battle
easy
Kick back and bust raps that won’t succeed
You’re better off in the OM rappin about weed
merked form da beginniing with dis line...Good Job!!!!
vs.
Nothing
U really need to elevate ex u have good concepts but ur wording is to simplistic... good try man keep it up....
v/Fore...and both of y'all hit my battle wth chin3s3god or fif-t u choose!!!!!!!!
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
yo fore rtf man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the vote but you didnt poll it.. I take it you dont have enough posts.. I'll hit up your battles..
could you do the others or at least the china guy plz fore i will rtf if u have another link or I will in the future!!!!
u didn't poll man
executiona- your verse was uhh meh. prince of persia? wtf?
you had some really whack lines. you need to concentrate on more
witt and harder punches. elevate
foreshadow- hmm...werent you more of a topical head?
i remember you. but anyway your verse was eh.... average.
you threw punches that hit harder..but it wasnt all that great
either. work on creativity/wordplay.....
and note.. sex jokes are played to hell. elevate
v/foreshdow
beter overall verse.
I was topical but I'm trying to battle. Uppin for more votes.
EX,
Aiyo....Foreshadow is a hint to tell wats about to come NEXT/
Does the foreshadow u readin give ya a hint bout this TEXT/
tha 1st line was a aight build up...but there was no punch...structure an flow were good... 1/10
Like how i creap up from behind and take the WIN/
Im like the prince of persia, realease my warrior WITHIN/
SG...decent flow an structure,but no punch... 1/10
Executuna reck fools with ease in a quick BATTLE/
facin me ur out like a Blind kid in a game of SCRABBLE/
this is a punch!....weak...but a punch...tha wording coulda been betta(to make it hit harder)...decent concept,flow an structure were good... 2/10
My personals give yu cuts , scrapes and other REGRETS/
Cuz im know to bend bars like fat kids on swing SETS/
again,weak punch...but couldve been alot harder... 2/10
This verse was fun but it has to END/
for broken Foreshadows, it be hard to MEND/
flow is a lil off...kinda got a bit of wordplay off...very simple wordplay...attempted punch is weak... 1/10
7/50
VS
shadow,
Kick back and bust raps that won’t succeed
You’re better off in the OM rappin about weed
weak opener...jus coz it aint really a punch...but it does put em down,flow an structure work well... 2/10
Maybe you should kill yourself and make my job easy
Because when the votes are in I’ll take this freebee
structure is decent...but tha flow seems off...anotha 'push'... 2/10
Ms. Ex with his dick between his legs running away
I bet front lines would have a field day on your ass if you’d stay
structure an flow are off,no punch... 2/10
What’s wrong that doesn’t even turn you on
Your skills are just ridiculous humorous like your fat ass in a thong
structure an flow are off...not really a hard punch eitha...i like tha wording... 2/10
Because you picked that name doesn’t mean you hand out death
Your just like most of the whack newbies who get fucked in the chest
again...i like tha wording...but i dont think thats really a punch eitha...nice structure an flow. 3/10
11/50
shadow,good structure an flow...didnt throw any heavy punches...but didnt need to.
EX,had decent flow an structure,an aight concepts...but you need to work on wording them so they hit...
V/shadow,betta structure,wording,flow....an burnt his opponent more.
return tha favour honestly.....no hate
peace
Kick back and bust raps that won’t succeed
You’re better off in the OM rappin about weed
^^
Whats That word that alot of rappaz like to use when theyve kicked another rappaz ass really really bad ......U,mmmmm...,... Oh YEAH!!! MERKED !!! lol
That Line rii thgere made his verse overall look way much better than his oppenent and thats why he takes my vote on anyday LOl but reall he showed more Spunk and more Determination in his vers so my vote goes to
Foreshadow
I Heard That You RTF ......... I only Have two battles mayne ...and i only need one more vote in the last one So can you RTF *honestly though* But when you see My verse youll Know i Won
Please Im beeging RTF
I think thats enough votes to have this battle closed.
fore ..... last request hit my topical plz man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Uppin this one more time...........
Ill Vote On This Battle If Youguy's
Can Vote On The Gods Lyrical Gift Vs Mc Jigga
It Would Be Much Appreciated...goodlooks
Noooo im takin this up wit cel foreshadow, u scammin me and tellin everyone to vote fo u
Dont bitch because I'm kicking your ass like everyone in the forum is. Go ahead and tell Celetial because then he will review my post and see that I only told people to vote on the battle so therefore you have no proof that I told anyone to vote for me they did it because of my verse being better then yours.
vote here if you will:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174654
B r e a k d o w n.
Aiyo....Foreshadow is a hint to tell wats about to come NEXT/
Does the foreshadow u readin give ya a hint bout this TEXT/
nope
Like how i creap up from behind and take the WIN/
Im like the prince of persia, realease my warrior WITHIN/
do you? nope.
Executuna reck fools with ease in a quick BATTLE/
facin me ur out like a Blind kid in a game of SCRABBLE/
funny.
My personals give yu cuts , scrapes and other REGRETS/
Cuz im know to bend bars like fat kids on swing SETS/
---bars meanin lines<This verse was fun but it has to END/
for broken Foreshadows, it be hard to MEND/
is it? where are the punches man?
vs
Kick back and bust raps that won’t succeed
You’re better off in the OM rappin about weed
yup. 1-1 punch count.
Maybe you should kill yourself and make my job easy
Because when the votes are in I’ll take this freebee
naw.
Ms. Ex with his dick between his legs running away
I bet front lines would have a field day on your ass if you’d stay
soft.
What’s wrong that doesn’t even turn you on
Your skills are just ridiculous humorous like your fat ass in a thong
k, weak but a punch.2-1 for fore, he wins.
Because you picked that name doesn’t mean you hand out death
Your just like most of the whack newbies who get fucked in the chest
naw.
v/foreshadoow
remember to hit my battle.