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10 lines...
due in 1 hour...
blind...
yeah..
vote honestly you little bastards...
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yea Twix. im here. Good Luck.
Checkit…
Eyo, to me it seems insane what’s in a name can fit so perfect
i mean i don’t even needa thing to say…
…this bitch already claims he’s worthless!
X’s meant to shine,
while twixn struggles to invent an effect rhyme…
or find…
a decent way to word it
i hurt kids…twix is just another emo faggot afraid to surface,
a herb….just a nerd bitch, making the dirtlist of weak textcees
so fuck try’n to vex me…
how the fuck are you legit...when u rep a crew that jocks ICP!
u’r lyrics equal bird shit…………… cuz all u’r drops are just a mess
the best say less is more, but u’ll always stay pathetic moral less…
keep’n me bored at best…
Fucking me up in this battle? Please… u’r lines redefine celibate
cuz
hero’s & legends are always remember & both ARE NOT irrelevant
To clear some ish up...
The verse is weird like that in the middle to mock my punch,
i have a feeling alot of kiddies here will think that it's just
skattered all crazy like. Also, to Twix... its 10. G/L
stick em up? too bad this guys saggin, has no idea...
n... sure the kid el drop hard, with s fist full of viagra
heard he comes with personals... fuck that!
counting someone elses losses...
...don't make yah shit all that
so ill traumitize sirusX and whats next?
hes joining forggoten crews like TNL so he could flex
n' sure he made it to the next level... with god
but shit we already see threw you n' ya idols fassad
aint dangerouse...bitch yah too busy watching your back
so face forward... and stop pretending your black
finally unbanned.... uppin this.... btw nice verse sirus.
vote here: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174509
Eyo, to me it seems insane what’s in a name can fit so perfect
i mean i don’t even needa thing to say…
…this bitch already claims he’s worthless!
ight
X’s meant to shine,
while twixn struggles to invent an effect rhyme…
or find…
no fucking gay
a decent way to word it
i hurt kids…twix is just another emo faggot afraid to surface,
nah not feeling it aye
a herb….just a nerd bitch, making the dirtlist of weak textcees
so fuck try’n to vex me…
how the fuck are you legit...when u rep a crew that jocks ICP!
lol
u’r lyrics equal bird shit…………… cuz all u’r drops are just a mess
the best say less is more, but u’ll always stay pathetic moral less…
decent
keep’n me bored at best…
Fucking me up in this battle? Please… u’r lines redefine celibate
cuz
hero’s & legends are always remember & both ARE NOT irrelevant
ight
stick em up? too bad this guys saggin, has no idea...
n... sure the kid el drop hard, with s fist full of viagra
haha good
heard he comes with personals... fuck that!
counting someone elses losses...
...don't make yah shit all that
lol
so ill traumitize sirusX and whats next?
hes joining forggoten crews like TNL so he could flex
haha word
n' sure he made it to the next level... with god
but shit we already see threw you n' ya idols fassad
lmao
aint dangerouse...bitch yah too busy watching your back
so face forward... and stop pretending your black
LOl
this battle was pretty weak.. syrius had 1 good bar.. and ur structure was FUCKED son.. hard to read.. trixm came consistant and had a better structure..
this battle goes to him
v/tixm
uppin................ leave links and ill drop an honest vote...
Quote:
Originally Posted by SMOKE
lol...
u didnt even break up the bars right kiddo.
uppin..... meh.....................................
nice spit sirus that was tight
thx, twix did well to... suprised me alot.
drop a vote neutral, break it down so we can both see what we need to improve on.
uppin............................................. ..
his idea... used in this post.
uppin4............................................ ......
my vote would go to sirus cause he dissed his opponent but irrelevance made it seem like stand up comedy and if he wants to make someone laugh do it on Comedy Central
v/goes to sirusx
cant vote.....
X took this wit ease....nice wordplay an punches,tha structure seemed a bit off,but it flowed well(dunno....maybe smoke should READ tha verse b4 he votes)
...i like this:nice wordplay
the best say less is more, but u’ll always stay pathetic moral less…
irrelevance,you need to work on structuring ya punches....(stretchin ya lines helps)
but you had sum aight concepts....ya gotta reword sum of ya lines....play round wit tha words....an ya flow an structure need work....
return tha favour.....no hate
peace
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i gotta vote sirus on this battle but both nice job
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174593
Vote here OR I WON'T OFFICIALLY CAST MY VOTE
Sirius X
Checkit…
Eyo, to me it seems insane what’s in a name can fit so perfect
i mean i don’t even needa thing to say…
…this bitch already claims he’s worthless!
=Haha nice opener.=
X’s meant to shine,
while twixn struggles to invent an effect rhyme…
or find…
a decent way to word it
i hurt kids…twix is just another emo faggot afraid to surface,
=Nice use of disses, flows nice=
a herb….just a nerd bitch, making the dirtlist of weak textcees
so fuck try’n to vex me…
how the fuck are you legit...when u rep a crew that jocks ICP!
=Good Personal.=
u’r lyrics equal bird shit…………… cuz all u’r drops are just a mess
the best say less is more, but u’ll always stay pathetic moral less…
=Haha @ More or Moral Line=
keep’n me bored at best…
Fucking me up in this battle? Please… u’r lines redefine celibate
cuz
hero’s & legends are always remember & both ARE NOT irrelevant
=Closer could of been better.=
Irrelevance
stick em up? too bad this guys saggin, has no idea...
n... sure the kid el drop hard, with s fist full of viagra
=Viagra line? :|=
heard he comes with personals... fuck that!
counting someone elses losses...
...don't make yah shit all that
=Alright.=
so ill traumitize sirusX and whats next?
hes joining forggoten crews like TNL so he could flex
=Hm.=
n' sure he made it to the next level... with god
but shit we already see threw you n' ya idols fassad
=..=
aint dangerouse...bitch yah too busy watching your back
so face forward... and stop pretending your black
=Chuckled at your closer.=
Overall Irreleance shit was type weak. You could work on it buddy. I think SiriusX got it. It's plain as daylight to see. His flow was way better, his disses wee moe concise and deliberate, plus his shit was straight out funnier.
VOTE = SiriusX. REMEMBER! I WILL NOT CAST IN A OFFICIAL VOTE UNTIL YOU VOTE IN MINE. LATER.
i replied....^^^^
now poll sirus...
uppin5......
ehh yo sirusX is way good ..
this whole kinda verse beat you twixn
"X’s meant to shine,
while twixn struggles to invent an effect rhyme…
or find…
a decent way to word it
i hurt kids…twix is just another emo faggot afraid to surface,
a herb….just a nerd bitch, making the dirtlist of weak textcees
so fuck try’n to vex me…
how the fuck are you legit...when u rep a crew that jocks ICP!
u’r lyrics equal bird shit…………… cuz all u’r drops are just a mess
the best say less is more, but u’ll always stay pathetic moral less…
keep’n me bored at best…"
that was crazy....aight man well c u later.....
v/sirusX
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cool beans @ the replys so far.
& i will check into theses votes and try and find battles from you guys.
up.
thx cel... lol.
up #4 i think............................
Eyo, to me it seems insane what’s in a name can fit so perfect
i mean i don’t even needa thing to say…
…this bitch already claims he’s worthless!
X’s meant to shine,
while twixn struggles to invent an effect rhyme…
or find…
a decent way to word it
i hurt kids…twix is just another emo faggot afraid to surface,
vs.
aint dangerouse...bitch yah too busy watching your back
so face forward... and stop pretending your black
Not a great battle.. but a fairly easy decision.
Twixn... your verse was very lackluster, didn't have any witty concepts or hard hitting punches.. poorly worded verse.. decent structure but basic rhyme scheme.. nothing that impressed me too much.. but your closer was your best punch.
SirusX, your verse was better than Twixn...'s but it wasn't great either.. had a couple of semi-witty punches and a pretty nice personal or two in there.. which is what got this battle for you.. overall, just a better verse.
v/ SirusX
v0 SirusX
for having a kick ass rhyme scheme mostly. i liked it a lot .. other dudes was really bad for the most part. anyways sirus' last two punches were hot .. all of irrelevance's were soft & didnt hit at all even though they mighta been a little wittier. anyways, sirus wins for an overall better verse.
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a herb….just a nerd bitch, making the dirtlist of weak textcees
so fuck try’n to vex me…
how the fuck are you legit...when u rep a crew that jocks ICP!
u’r lyrics equal bird shit…………… cuz all u’r drops are just a mess
the best say less is more, but u’ll always stay pathetic moral less…
keep’n me bored at best…
Fucking me up in this battle? Please… u’r lines redefine celibate
cuz
hero’s & legends are always remember & both ARE NOT irrelevant
vs.
n' sure he made it to the next level... with god
but shit we already see threw you n' ya idols fassad
v/sirus.... two of the other guy's lines didnt even rhyme
There, I casted My vote.
Go vote in my battles in my Signature. I voted in here now return the favor! Thanks.,
Man this was a good battle and I was feeling both competitors alot because both brought something real nice to the table. Sirius you had a nice verse it had alot of punchlines that hit hard and a couple that were pretty mild. Twixn you had a good verse and i talked to you on aim this morning and you said that you quit battling I think but fuck it. Your verse was real funny and I think i noticed a personal ion there nice job. I'm voting for sirius because he had more personals and the personals that he had hit harder then twixn s hit.
vote sirius.
ey0, i forgot about this battle.... up for the final vote, if it works out like that.
Eyo, to me it seems insane what’s in a name can fit so perfect
i mean i don’t even needa thing to say…
…this bitch already claims he’s worthless!
Fucking me up in this battle? Please… u’r lines redefine celibate
cuz
hero’s & legends are always remember & both ARE NOT irrelevant
.vs.
aint dangerouse...bitch yah too busy watching your back
so face forward... and stop pretending your black
Eh...Not the best battle here. X got this clearly i.m.o. Punches were pretty simple but harder than his, flow & structure was good, some multi's were in there too. Twix, I've seen ya do heaps better than his, punches were weak, flow wasnt bad, but some lines were fairly short, structure was good, overall not a bad verse but not enough punches to win.
V//SirusX for having the harder punches.