Duson Donuts vrs Lil Indian

Alright just check in we gonna go 12 lines, once you check it ill drop ma shit.

-=Duson :hump: Donuts=-

Ok man, go for it, you go first, but lets not record this battle, thanks....good luck

ey man, you gonna go or what?..you gonna set it up?

Lil indian, man I hope you just playin around//
This flow bout to put you 6 feet underground//
You lil bastard, which reservation did you come from//
Haven't your people ever heard of that winterfresh gum?//
Tryin to act black, we don't need indian bitches//
You always get the worst job, like diggin our ditches//
Sittin there typin "yea, you go first please?"
Remember while ya read this, to stoop on ya knees//
I give ya another name call ya "Squatin Mouse"//
Go back to your tee-pee, please leave ma house//
I understand this is your first, but heres a clue//
This ma first win, and its ma first battle too//

Kinda rushed, throw ya shit. Max 20 mins, im waitin...

I'm climbing to the top quick,chisled this craft in rhyming form/
Against me you'll be coming blind like masturbating to albino porn/
I'm a dinosaur,ur nothing but a bunch of dudes that act tough/
And when it comes to handle ur own, rely on ur crew for back up/
I don't need approval to smack,wack punks,they embarass themselves/
Beware of ya helth, to be tight takes more than just wearin a belt/
You have to stare into hell, it goes from bad to worse in a matter of seconds/
Sure u can shatter a sentence, but can u handle a shattered apendix?/
This ladder is endless, prefection is impossible,therefore no one is greatest/
But I'd say I'm better than you, cuz you're the MC who's satisfied rhyming in basements/...

Good for a Rookie?

Dude, ya threw in not one personal. I doubt you even just wrote that, i bet you been having that saved for 2 months... lol. If im wrong im sorry, but ill act like you just wrote it, even if you didn't.

Lets see, people start voting. Leave ya link here ill hit ya up.

Peace.

So....did this one go to the record?...I just wanted an exhibition...but, what do you think...?...people vote i guess

Ya it went on record, just take this link and go hit some peeps up and leave our link. and if they vote for us, go hit there rhyme up.

na man, i just wrote it, i was like freestyle typing....i didn't want this to go to the record, but good job man...people vote, thanks

next time throw in some punches agaisnt me tho, anyways vote plz

ight my bad, thanks for the first battle....good luck in the future...battle's all love...pz

yall vote plz i promise to hit ya up



peace

if i could vote i would vote duson donuts dude ur punches was sick and lil indian nice flow but throw some bunches at tha dude i give the win to duson donuts

Thanks, sucks you can't vote. Any else that can vote, hit me up.

Thanks all -=Duson Donuts=-

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Jesse

ey duson, me and Baby J are both from kenner....we go to the same school...thas my son

koo....

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please vote someone imma hit yall up

wuts up lil indian thats my lil homie! much love playa! we still gonna make that crew huh? ya man we 2 mc's spitting flames from that K.C. well iam out holla! ~baby j~
~luv~
~ Breathe Easy Walk Light ~

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We need some votes up in hur, I been hittin peoples stuff up all day, come on someone vote plz.

sup son you got my message baby j? i answer ya question!

ya i got yo message. hey can you vote on this battle, but dont d/r please be honest man.

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lil indian wins... he had better punchlines, better multies..

the other dude had nice structure, but that aint gonna win.


and btw... why the fuck are you calling yourself little indian. if being an indian isnt embarassing enough, you had to be little too ? jeez, i wonder if theres a chinese guy out there.

Yup!....I wish i was uppin' 1, but nobody votes...so i guess this was just for fun or some shit...i'm out

we need votes, this is screwed up i vote on everyones stuff, someone vote plz.

upppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn wweeeeeee need some votes in hur

alright i'll vote again

vote = lil indian

lmao

thanks homie....trying to up 1 if people would vote...get on those ballots.....pz

well i'll have to give my vote to Duson well if i could vote cuz im not at 100 post yet
but dunson had some good punchlines they weren't great but for a newb they were decent lil indian put punches in ur verse cuz without'em people will always say you'll lose and talk about the other person a self-glorified verse is a down fall its jus some advice iight ~1~

v/duson donut

ight thanks for the advice....come on y'all keep voting, i got this in the bag...pz

ya we need some poll votes, remember leave ur links ill hit ya up

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lil indian u needa throw stronger punches
my vote goes to dohnuts

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duson donunts shit had titer rhymes and it just had better flow than the lil indian did i mean what the hell "I'm a dinosaur,ur nothing but a bunch of dudes that act tough/
And when it comes to handle ur own, rely on ur crew for back up" wow thats clever i mean really?

I'm sorry you didn't like it, it wasn't my best, but if you wanna, call me out...we can do this thing, me n u...holla..pz

donuts took this but not very good battle
both need punches
structure is ok
flow is ok
personals get some
closers hella weak from both you

start elevating b4 you challenge anyone else you two

ight....i guess this battle's over....becoming old...pz

nah we just need more votes, someone acutally poll vote plz peace