10 linez
House Rulez
Spit ASAP..plz
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SMOKE checkin in..
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10 linez
House Rulez
Spit ASAP..plz
gl
SMOKE checkin in..
Ill post soon..
Come On Wit The Come On And Get Down Wit The Get Down
pOSITIVE FEEDBACK...REAL MC'S DON'T NEED THAT*
JUST A ILL BEAT, A DUCTH, A A FAT WEED SACK*
i'm the type to kick in yo door, spitting a flow*
Put the cannon to your head and make you sit on the floor*
Then i'll nicely ask you, where the weed at*
And if you take too long, you getting popped in the knee caps
Because i'm strictly into mental elavation*
While watching competion back up like constapation
oh........u said 10
i don't hustle hard, cause my dough don't get that low*
I moving 3 O's in a row like tic tac toe
where u at.no writtin ryhmesQuote:
Originally Posted by SMOKE
Uh oh, we got a no show, ohhhh!
Uh oh, we got a no show, ohhhh!
You type the prolly need a ride to his own show*
You the type that need advances cause he ain't his own dough*
Silly as cats
kwiwK key for ya
U cant bare this...ya soft fruit...u'll never pass this pear test
Dont be ashamed...this whitey writes in bold & thinks he fairs less
U'll be shattered...so the reason is clear that i'm freezin u here
Dont get fatted..ur not my bitch...its just huntin season my deer
Like we at the school ball & ya tryna dance...Im slicing ya stunts
But Frost please...dont be scared coz i crush ice with my punch
Fucking ding-bat...about to go down without a bungee cord
I’ll bring you hot shit...you’d barely keep your undies warm
Dropping ill without trying?...i know u think i prolly did
But Frost could SMOKE cement and wouldnt bring a solid hit
and next time can u plz post ur fucking verse in one post..
now upping for votez
you went last....and that's the best you can do?????????Quote:
Originally Posted by SMOKE
I have a term 4 cats like you,,GARBAGO
Punchez:Smoke
U'll be shattered...so the reason is clear that i'm freezin u here
Dont get fatted..ur not my bitch...its just huntin season my deer
^ dat was coo
Vocab: Smoke
Wordplay: Smoke
Flow: Smoke hiz was way more direct
Vote: Goez 2 Smoke
J frost needa really elevate on make'n hiz shit more direct, and come'n wit harder punchez, keep elevate'n 2 both
* Peace *
YEAH HE GOT NICE PUNCHES, BUT IF I BROUGHT OUT MY RYME BOOK, I WOULD HAVE HIT EM UP.. I KEY STYLEDQuote:
Originally Posted by LivenLegend
so did i lol.. hence the line
Dropping ill without trying?...i know u think i prolly did
i keyed it in about 5 mins.. if u want to set up another one after this one is finished and go serious im more than happy haha
GO 2 OPEN MIKE........FOR YOU CRITICS...Quote:
Originally Posted by SMOKE
SET IT UP THENQuote:
Originally Posted by SMOKE
After this is finished boi.... cmon yall some1 get the votez in hur quick
J FROST = banned
win = SMOKE
vote smoke
U cant bare this...ya soft fruit...u'll never pass this pear test
Dont be ashamed...this whitey writes in bold & thinks he fairs less
U'll be shattered...so the reason is clear that i'm freezin u here
Dont get fatted..ur not my bitch...its just huntin season my deer
.vs.
Nothing worth quoting.
Frost- Weak verse man, punches werent really hittin, flow was aight, structure was not too bad. But to win battles you gotta work on ya punches. 4/10.
Smoke- Not a bad verse. Flowed well, nice structure, aight multi's, punches were there and hitting harder than his. Not a bad verse verse overall. 6.9/10.
V//Smoke, for having harder punches.
J FROST...
pOSITIVE FEEDBACK...REAL MC'S DON'T NEED THAT*
JUST A ILL BEAT, A DUCTH, A A FAT WEED SACK*
NO PUNCH...0/5
i'm the type to kick in yo door, spitting a flow*
Put the cannon to your head and make you sit on the floor*
huh...2/5
Then i'll nicely ask you, where the weed at*
And if you take too long, you getting popped in the knee caps
throw punches...2/5
Because i'm strictly into mental elavation*
While watching competion back up like constapation
aight goood try...3/5
i don't hustle hard, cause my dough don't get that low*
I moving 3 O's in a row like tic tac toe
WTF....1/5
8/25
U cant bare this...ya soft fruit...u'll never pass this pear test
Dont be ashamed...this whitey writes in bold & thinks he fairs less
U'll be shattered...so the reason is clear that i'm freezin u here
Dont get fatted..ur not my bitch...its just huntin season my deer
Like we at the school ball & ya tryna dance...Im slicing ya stunts
But Frost please...dont be scared coz i crush ice with my punch
Fucking ding-bat...about to go down without a bungee cord
I’ll bring you hot shit...you’d barely keep your undies warm
Dropping ill without trying?...i know u think i prolly did
But Frost could SMOKE cement and wouldnt bring a solid hit
^^dont need to break it down...
overall...
J FROST didnt rreally throw punches...he mostly just freestyled ort whateva.,.SMOKE threw sum pretty good punches and his flow and structure was better too...overall the PUNCHES won it for SMOKE....
v/SMOKE
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SMOKE = WINNA
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
smoke takes this... all the other guy really did was talk about blazing sacks of weed... which is good and all but no. Smoke try to make your first line connect with the second makes the punches hit alot harder... and try not too pack too much into it keep it simple. Not bad verse... definatly was better than the other guys but still plenty of room for elevation keep it up man...
vote - Smoke