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due midnight tommorow
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Iight then, I'll drop by tmrw at midnite..
BUMP...
Hurry up, I aint got all day to do this...
Punches are played, would throw personals but what the fuck is your name..
Calling me out? Thats a 'death wish' like goin to an evil church just to pray!!
Bitch, You verses are lame, Multis are wack and your concepts are horrid..
Beatin me? thats like sayin in that open mic I dropped you arent the orphin!!
Someone give this newbie a rhyme, Or pretty soon he will be using all mine..
Not only does he 'stand' defeated but like italics he gets 'pushed to the side'!!
Wit hooks to the eye I'll murk this gay, shoulda worked on ya verse for days..
Anticipatin for you to drop is like some 'fake gold', It's not 'worth the wait'!!
You drop nothing, Your not hot your soft, watch how easily I block punches..
Take that 3 from ya name an leave the x covered in blood like da stop button!!
Easy....
you say your the king be prepared to lose your crown/
when im threw with you your whole kingdom will bow down/
and his rhymes so bad that'll catch ganggreen/
when this battle threw hell be known as the queen/
i'll take your own sword and i'll puncture your chest/
fuck you homie you couldnt beat me if you used your best/
i'll slice you up like vega and leave you dead on the streets/
seein me rap is like given out treats as for you people just take a seat/
take your l its a given/
sorry i messed up and hit the wrong buttton heres the last line
you woudnt be in para dise even if you was in heaven
sorry about that now people vote and dont just vote against me cause im an idiot
V/ Caliber
Caliber, you came pretty good, some lines didn't seem to rhyme. Everything connected, good job on your part.
3x, you need to elevate bro. I mean, labelling your opponent as a queen isn't exactly a diss. Your flow was a bit off and your use of vocab is weak bro. Elevatate, keep practicin.
Return the favor on the battle with nDust. If you don't know what a topical is, don't vote then. Peace homies ;)
Ill Give It To Caliber If I Could Vote
Cuz The Otha Guy Stuff Had Lot Of Mistakes
Holla Come Hit Up My Battles
Da Kis Wit 1,000,000 Metaphors
Please return the favor. I took some time to hit up your battle ..
I would vote but I don't have a 100 post...
Still Uppin..
Can we get some more votes up in this??????.......
uuuuurrrrrrr
Punches-Ex
Flow-Ex
Structure-3X
Vocab-none
Wordplay-EX
\V/-EX
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if i could i would give this to caliber his wasent as simple as 3x
Can we get some more votes up in this??, Please...
vote here, both of u plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173579
Ex, won this for me for comin with a more harder battle verse.. with the attmpted punches.. most of them came nice, but sounded like self glory lines to be honest, 3x didnt come hard at all, no punches were really hard.. and connected, personals in this battle was pretty poor, was there but weak...
both structures was fucked EX ur lines were a bit to long, shorten em up a bit..
yeah, and EX cut out this '''' and " " to show ur punches.. its herbish..
v/ex
Thanks for the vote, But do you really even know waht your talking about??? Half of the time? ' ' those are for to show wordplay... And self glory is talking about yourself and I've been rapping for over 4 yrs so why would I do that in a battle, And personals are talking about my opponent or anything that has to do with him wich 80% of my lines were... Thx for the vote but learn what your talking about...
Uppin
yo im givin this to EX. he came harder and i like the way he put it all together,
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Thanks for voting everyone, Still uppin for votes tho...
decent battle sorta. 3x you really need to elevate. you came with metaphors that couldnt make a retard think twice about em. excalibur you came weak, but you came better at the end. therefore vote excalibur.
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Punches-excalibur
Flow-3x
Structure-3x
Wordplay-excalibur
uppin
This battles been over fag, How did it get re opened???
Excalibur - Nice flow going, not a bad verse. You had a lot of creative ideas like the church thing especially but work on your wording so the punches hit harder. Also another tip, don't talk about things people won't understand. Like you mentioned your open mic.. I've never read it and you can't expect voters to read it so don't make references unless they are obvious in what they mean. Other than that though, good job, solid verse.
3x - Sorry, not a fan of your verse. You had extremely basic rhymes and really brought no punches out to the table. Work on using more extreme vocab and trying to throw interesting punches. Excalibur used some good similies, that's what you gotta do too if ya want to win...
Vote - excalibur
Please hit the sig, thanks
Iight, Thanks for voting, Can we get some more votes tho????
im have to give this one to X...he came alot harder n his verse seemed more of a batttle verse.....he attempted punches...some came of but some didnt....X try n get you lines a lil shorter n work on ur punches ight....pz
3x dawg.....them punches let you down a treat.....something you gotta work on ight...plus your verse seemd a lil self glorified to me...try goin at ur opponent more....use personals n shit ight
but ima have to go wiv X on this one for harder punches n a much better verse
v/X
hit up the battle between me n eminem
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Can we get some more votes in here please????........
both had ight flow n punches but ex attacked harder if i could vote it wood b ex
it up my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175784
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Ex-Cal : Your Flow was a little Choppy in the Middle.
but you had better punches by far, your shit was a lil
more complexed in a Good way though, Could have Been
Better.. but g'yea.. .. ..
6.8/10
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3x : your flow was ok. it Flowed right, but your
punches were shitty.. fo'real LoLoL.. i Laughin with
you, not at you.. On Game..
ok.. your punches werent as Good as Ex's.. and thats
what a battle is i guess... blah..
4/10
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Vote-Ex-Caliber...
Return The Favor With an Honest Vote on My Battles, check My Sig, aight.
Can we get some more votes in here please????........
From peepd with more then a 100 post...
My votes for ex cuz he came harder nd he had a betta flow nd he threw mo punches out
Can we get some more votes in here please????........
From peepd with more then a 100 post...
Can we get some more votes in here please????........
From peepd with more then a 100 post...
Can we get some more votes in here please????........
From peepd with more then a 100 post...
Will return the fav...
Return The Favor With an Honest Vote on My Battles, God'$LyricalGift vs
MADRAP,God'$LyricalGift vs Lyrical Burst...
thank you it would be much appretiated...
Ex-Cal : Your Flow was a little Choppy here and there.
but you had better punches by far, your shit was a lil
more complexed hense the choppyness but i guess in a Good way though, Could have Been
Better.. but g'yea.. .. ..
6.8/10
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3x : your flow was iight. it Flowed right, but your
punches were shitty.. real shitty.. no disrespect though ok..
your punches werent as Good as Ex's.. and thats
what a battle is but thats not what a battles all about the punch doesnt count unless it rhyms ya got so tell ex that..
6/10
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Return The Favor With an Honest Vote on My Battles, God'$LyricalGift vs
MADRAP,God'$LyricalGift vs Lyrical Burst...
thank you it would be much appretiated...