collab me-red-insane so dope we're discusting

So Dope We're Discusting


b_leave
i walk around the underground as a powerful thundersound..
wearin the low down profound lyrical under crown...
advanced listening wrestle with pressured exspessions...
steppin in as a special and spitten fresher than freshman...
obvious it over dosin coastin over oceans...
with explosive potions flyer than your promotional posta's...
walking around the planet, rockin the ground like granet...
cockin my sound cannon, and stoppin at sound phantom...
sicker than liquor and medicane burning and blisterin...
leave ya light flicerin quicker than strobes you tripp'n in...
simple derange brain exchange pain for game...
re-arrange ya frame in different patterns with slange..
cause im bigger, badder and better...
than all your golden chedder...
when spreadin win like medicine men..
with ancient tribal letterin...

Chorus: (2x)
so nice that were nasty, so bangin were bustin
so sweet that were sick, so dope were discustin


red
I'm rhyming, my adrenaline is rising
Losing over 20 battles is just verbally surprising
Especially with the verbal tactics you got at yo hand
Intellectual Murder is the position where I still stand
Defeating yo ass-quick, won't let yo ass last-quick
Rhymes are intellect, even though i have fast-spits
Getting whip-lash, getting quick-cash al-though
while i dismantle all ya'll verbally, insane will terminate all-hoes
Permanently, my verse has you fucked up mentally
Senselessly, destroy wack-cees so bad they wouldn't tell-me
Trust me, you can't handle-it, Pretty soon I'll dismantle-it
Couldn't have "fly rhymes" if you wrote them on a mantle-hit
Hit the floor hard, CRASH BANG KABOOM!
That had to hurt, with yo rhymes shattered all over the room
Got creative lyrics, but even if you had 20/20 vision
you'd be losing this battle and still wouldn't be able to see-it
Panic, massive drama to ya mama cuz she suffered from lyrical trauma
I gots an evil type Karma, ended ya life, now youz a gonna
Hot like Hell's sauna, wrong up-bringing made me last longah
As rap relates to me, I commit verbal rapes unto wack-cees
Like asthma to ya bronchiual tubes
My rhymes is crazy, no doubt ya gon lose
'Tween me and death who ya wanna choose?

Chorus: (2x)
so nice that were nasty, so bangin were bustin
so sweet that were sick, so dope were discustin


insane
Aiight, check it…organization is key, so I gotta grab the check list
I gotta clean up this mess ‘cuz I made sure this kat was left breathless
Pick up the flesh bits before Feds inspect the specimens and I get arrested
But next it’s…important to report nothing to any human connections
What’s left of this gruesome corpse, direct the scalpel and dissect it
No misperception…my sickness in the head may cause audiences indigestion
Back to the topic of question…what happens to this body and possibly the next one
So I need to ship the pieces to third-world species to grease the meat and eat it
Believe it…I’ma even make a profit…this scheme is steaming with hotness
Now, my mind is streaming with projects as my illness develops
Next setup, I’m gonna ship sick body parts to family members drenched in ketchup
Don’t come to me wit pressed luck…you might be the next up to this dopeness!

Chorus: (2x)
so nice that were nasty, so bangin were bustin
so sweet that were sick, so dope were discustin

damn boy's we fuckin killed it ya'll might as well move us to the hall of fame

lol.....damn homie....that wsa NOT my best right there!...i shoulda madwe mine better yo...well anyways UPPING!

what you think of my verse pimp

dat was pretty nice my vte is def it deserves studio tiem but not quite a million dollar song yet lol

-ryda

thankz pimp keep the feed back comin rb this is my first collab on here

shit was tight yall.. likin the spits from my crew mainly nah b leave ya shit was allgood 2.. keep em coming yo

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

B leave's verse was the best, as far as flow, the flow was in fact disgusting, maybe coulda had more content, but the flow was nice enough to make me not care, after reading that verse, red's was a real let down, it went from awsome flow to like.. he tried to keep up with it i just didnt see it happen, still not a bad verse, just shouldnt have been after B's.. and insane had a good verse too.. probly had the most sensinble content.. each had their own highlights.. a close behind 2nd, nice collab..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172961

come and vote for da new battle
brilliant vs skateboard

u choose whos da best ight holla
aint losin
easyyy

here is 2 open mices i left feeb back on

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...91#post2115191

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...99#post2115199

hello its that site killa
comin'for
you

ill battle anyone

dawg why the fuck you freepostin in my thread get the fuck out

it was a great read even the few flaws in it where made up for by other factors overll i definetly woul like to see another collab

thankz for the feeb cack pimp ............................

So Dope We're Discusting


b_leave
i walk around the underground as a powerful thundersound..wack
wearin the low down profound lyrical under crown...wack
advanced listening wrestle with pressured exspessions...coo
steppin in as a special and spitten fresher than freshman...aiite.. apart from fresshman...another word or a name like Edmond would be better
obvious it over dosin coastin over oceans...aiite
with explosive potions flyer than your promotional posta's...aiite tite flow
walking around the planet, rockin the ground like granet... nah
cockin my sound cannon, and stoppin at sound phantom...nice
sicker than liquor and medicane burning and blisterin... nice
leave ya light flicerin quicker than strobes you tripp'n in...tite
simple derange brain exchange pain for game... like it
re-arrange ya frame in different patterns with slange..played
cause im bigger, badder and better...
than all your golden chedder...played
when spreadin win like medicine men..
with ancient tribal letterin...doesnt flow

Chorus: (2x)
so nice that were nasty, so bangin were bustin
so sweet that were sick, so dope were discustin


red
I'm rhyming, my adrenaline is rising
Losing over 20 battles is just verbally surprising... tite
Especially with the verbal tactics you got at yo hand
Intellectual Murder is the position where I still stand... needs work
Defeating yo ass-quick, won't let yo ass last-quick
Rhymes are intellect, even though i have fast-spits... good flow
Getting whip-lash, getting quick-cash al-though
while i dismantle all ya'll verbally, insane will terminate all-hoes
Permanently, my verse has you fucked up mentally... flow
Senselessly, destroy wack-cees so bad they wouldn't tell-me... tell me???
Trust me, you can't handle-it, Pretty soon I'll dismantle-it
Couldn't have "fly rhymes" if you wrote them on a mantle-hit...nah
Hit the floor hard, CRASH BANG KABOOM!
That had to hurt, with yo rhymes shattered all over the room...wack
Got creative lyrics, but even if you had 20/20 vision
you'd be losing this battle and still wouldn't be able to see-it...played
Panic, massive drama to ya mama cuz she suffered from lyrical trauma
I gots an evil type Karma, ended ya life, now youz a gonna...played
Hot like Hell's sauna, wrong up-bringing made me last longah
As rap relates to me, I commit verbal rapes unto wack-cees... nah
Like asthma to ya bronchiual tubes
My rhymes is crazy, no doubt ya gon lose... nope
'Tween me and death who ya wanna choose?
????
Chorus: (2x)
so nice that were nasty, so bangin were bustin
so sweet that were sick, so dope were discustin


insane
Aiight, check it…organization is key, so I gotta grab the check list
I gotta clean up this mess ‘cuz I made sure this kat was left breathless... aiite
Pick up the flesh bits before Feds inspect the specimens and I get arrested...nice
But next it’s…important to report nothing to any human connections
What’s left of this gruesome corpse, direct the scalpel and dissect it ...cool
No misperception…my sickness in the head may cause audiences indigestion...nah
Back to the topic of question…what happens to this body and possibly the next one...nice im with u
So I need to ship the pieces to third-world species to grease the meat and eat it ...still wiyth u dawg
Believe it…I’ma even make a profit…this scheme is steaming with hotness
Now, my mind is streaming with projects as my illness develops... Dope/Nice Whoa Damn!
Next setup, I’m gonna ship sick body parts to family members drenched in ketchup... lolololz
Don’t come to me wit pressed luck…you might be the next up to this dopeness!... nah


thats how i feel it line for line neegras
basicaly pretty nice but needs sum werk
keep em up

pz 1

im shakin my head rite now!
B_LeAvE ya verse was great, but tha funny thing is u didnt rite it or even tha hook lol.
you wanna kno who did Some guy named Benefit n tha track is Called Im sick. i dont like biters.

But otha then dat it was a good song yes im talkin about tha otha to cats

I rate it a 7 wit out benefits verse.

download tha song off kazaa if u dont belive it.

son you are full of shit you know who did this song i orignally did this song and it is on my soundclick page i added these 2 cats in to it bitch so know what the fuck you talking about before you bring some bullshit to the table
aight bitch o and have you heard of an "alias"


fuckin newb

dawg fuck u ive be aroud on plenty of boards.
hhe hhi 411 tha older one. 360 n plenty mo n u aint rite that verse
cuz i got that song on my cd player.
if u did rite it, then u did it 3 four years ago.
cuz most of ya lines are played out.
N why are u banned rite cuz u bite tha song.
if u serious about ya soundclick why ya aint drop a link to see if tha voice
is tha same as tha one i got called im sick.
Because u cant prove it.
so sit on a big dick fag.