..yep,word
10 lines
house rules you know the deal
drop tonight yo
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..yep,word
10 lines
house rules you know the deal
drop tonight yo
check
checkin in gimme some time yo...........................
gay @ you wanting to post tomorrow... whatever.. go ahead, do as you wish
cel deleted my verse... if you want an explanation Cin check IR.... no biggie....
but i'm also gonna go 14 lines.... i think you can handle that.... besides, i let you slide on the due date.. so you should be ok with 14 lines...
i'll post soon
peace.
how about 20 lines? muhahaha!
somebody has problems, this retarded fag's gotta be messin
cuz a wack verse like yours...
...takes less time than your check ins!
put it to rest kid, you aint bright,just gassed a handful
somebody replace his mind, cuz it's just been dismantled
just shows you aint smart, an instant SEMI vet that burned out
you thought you spit FIRE...
...'till mr. key had your quote in his sig, WOW!
that was so fuckin funny, wanting to battle people above your level
"no flyweights or noweights"...
... it took you that long to reach the pedals?!
And your head’s in dissarrange, runnin at slow rate like my windows 98
How could you COOK me when your GRILL aint even set straight
c'mon son can't you raise your standards n' accelerate to just get by?
your record is torn on the joka...
...and you think using this alias with the same gay punches is a disguise?!
I’m a good guy that kills evil and that’s directed to SIN
Cuz cheating in the vote system, is against the constitution
N' other dudes lines your usin,son just learn to flip the cards you dealt
kings n' queens aint for you...
...so just leave the "joker" exposed for hell
yo man everybody knows RB's your only house
if i took the glow outta his name he'd think we're having a blackout
your rhymes aint solid,so sorry buddy wrong state of matter
i see through ya,your soft...
...we all know glass WATER easily shatters.
i was gonna set the post count to a certain amount to take out some herb voters who don't get shit.... but fuck it, i'll explain
first of all, his checkin took long....then i used the concept of how he's just gassed and he really isnt that great... like dismantled, and his brain's been dismantled.. get it? look up mantle in the dictionary if your a dumbass.. he also has an alias callled the-joka where mr. key made fun of him about when he said he wants to start battling people that were as good as him.. which are not flyweights or noweights … and grill..and head.. yeah… I’m talking about how he talks to sinamen a lot… cuz sinamen has been accused of cheating with vote rings.. and cin (aka tha-joka) is thought to be part of it…. And by “reach the pedals” I mean he finally grew out of his flyweight stage…
No hard feelings guys, it’s just a battle
that's about it, if your still not understanding, then go to RV where you belong.
Bad Choice Dissing Me Vince.
Droppin now
This wannabe Text Head can't be dope...guess that's how he lost WordPlay
SsinnerisBack?Can't be true because this two-faced punk is flipped like a fillet
Wanna do 20 lines...as if our previous battles didn't put you in the grave-yard
He acts as if he's lost in the situation....Stop stuttering you illeterate re-tard
He was the first herb to join W.O.E. that's why V.C. Visualizes My Cock(V.C.)
D/R's...he's the chairman of the Crew...This pussy keeps dicks on lock
He comes with more shit than ever... Self praises and thinks he spits tighter
Complains about SinAmen the worst... Yet was his ONE and only dick ryder
You punk ass bitch change rules and make excuses so you can say it's love you felt
RB is not your A.C. so when someone spits hotts your wax verse gets melt
Cel deleted your verse? guess even he saw your constant flaws
Talking shit is the effect of you battlin me..You've been merked thats the cause
He talks shit about Sin when he knows he's offline..I smell pussy
The kind that goes behind my back looks up old shit like the Wa-Toosie
Then uses it to sound funny...He told me about a Voting Ring so I'd back out
But when i appear...he gasps for air,flaps on the ground,and squirms like trout
Where's your excuse now...P.O.?Or will you face the truth Dylon..Diddy is gone
So you can finally clown me in front of ya Mom..and call Rb your 2nd home
They had a IN Box for herbs...who would like to elevate in wack-a-fool
So when i call you scary Violent Coochie(V.C.) it's honesty being practical
wow sinamen... i told you it wasn't a diss against you
vote up kids....
by the way
sinamen= blacklisted... don't take it personal... just don't vote
LMAO that's hilaroius
I'm not in his voting ring..I don't even think he has one...wtf
Eh I guess so either way it goes
VC:
just shows you aint smart, an instant SEMI vet that burned out
you thought you spit FIRE...
...'till mr. key had your quote in his sig, WOW!
that was so fuckin funny, wanting to battle people above your level
"no flyweights or noweights"...
... it took you that long to reach the pedals?!
And your head’s in dissarrange, runnin at slow rate like my windows 98
How could you COOK me when your GRILL aint even set straight
vs.
nothing to realy stick out and hit me but I seen you do alot better than than this but ok battle yall keep dropping
v. VC
up 3...
violent coochie ;)
1-0 me
c'mon son can't you raise your standards n' accelerate to just get by?
your record is torn on the joka...
...and you think using this alias with the same gay punches is a disguise?!
I’m a good guy that kills evil and that’s directed to SIN
Cuz cheating in the vote system, is against the constitution
N' other dudes lines your usin,son just learn to flip the cards you dealt
kings n' queens aint for you...
...so just leave the "joker" exposed for hell
vs
He comes with more shit than ever... Self praises and thinks he spits tighter
Complains about SinAmen the worst... Yet was his ONE and only dick ryder
Cel deleted your verse? guess even he saw your constant flaws
^3 lines vs more than 3 lines.
v/vc
eh, vote here if you will:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174654
up 4... don't sleep
2-0 me
meh.
V.C has some good lines..and some were worded badly. =\
and i was not really feelin your structure,
you had a couple weak punches...but eh overall
a pretty decent verse. keep elevatin
Cin..most of your rhymes were weak. no wit no wordplay.
you just straight out called him a retard..wow. how original?
and then called him a trout and fillet? wtf?
elevate.
v/V.C
had the better overall verse
somebody has problems, this retarded fag's gotta be messin
cuz a wack verse like yours...
...takes less time than your check ins!
Good opener...to me you merked him from this line on.....Nice!!!
He talks shit about Sin when he knows he's offline..I smell pussy
The kind that goes behind my back looks up old shit like the Wa-Toosie
Then uses it to sound funny...He told me about a Voting Ring so I'd back out
But when i appear...he gasps for air,flaps on the ground,and squirms like trout
Where's your excuse now...P.O.?Or will you face the truth Dylon..Diddy is gone
This was a perfect played line....but his opener was better than all this and he merked you the whole time .....IMO!!!!!
v/V.C.....both of you hit my battle vs. fif-t plz!!!!!!!!! in my sig!!!!
Oh I thought V.C won because of his punches but i still cant vote
up 5 kids...
4-0 me
i cant vote yet but ima gow wit VC
N' other dudes lines your usin,son just learn to flip the cards you dealt
kings n' queens aint for you...
...so just leave the "joker" exposed for hell
yo man everybody knows RB's your only house
if i took the glow outta his name he'd think we're having a blackout
your rhymes aint solid,so sorry buddy wrong state of matter
i see through ya,your soft...
...we all know glass WATER easily shatters.
This wannabe Text Head can't be dope...guess that's how he lost WordPlay
SsinnerisBack?Can't be true because this two-faced punk is flipped like a fillet
Wanna do 20 lines...as if our previous battles didn't put you in the grave-yard
He acts as if he's lost in the situation....Stop stuttering you illeterate re-tard
He was the first herb to join W.O.E. that's why V.C. Visualizes My Cock(V.C.)
D/R's...he's the chairman of the Crew...This pussy keeps dicks on lock
nice battle......some good punches by both of you......but ima have to go with V.C on this one i feel he came a lil harder that cin therefore i give this battle to him for harder punches....no hate....both ya did good keep droppin
v/v.c
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
V.C - You had a more consistent and superior piece to Cin's. You used better punches and wordplay to put yourself above him. Some lines could've been worded better and I suppose the structure and vocabulary could've also been improved.
Cin - You used relatively generic punches that were often very poor. It seemed as though you were grasping for ideas and not going the whole way - perhaps over-confidence that you were going to win? Anyway, elevate and put more effort into your rhymes.
Both verses needed work but, overall, V.C.'s came out on top with visibly better aspects to it.
V/ V.C.
Thanks for feedback on my battle.
Peace