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A.F.S Anthem
Yo here go tha Another Forbidden Sickness ANTHEM!!!
AFS ANTHEM
Gucci^
Niggaz make way for Another Forbidden fucking Sickness
Yall shake n quiver behind ya post but in text impose on illness
We tight sons..like Siamese stepping to us is a terrible cause g
Like toxic waste just doubled our punches..& cause the textual contastrophy
Volitile ur throat and like seat belts we'll leave u strapped in
This is my ship and im the captain..floating flows with rhythm
We are a Forbidden Sickness..so be warned dont fuck with us
We knockin out these light-weight crews.. like we kickin up dust
Tha Joka
Nigga sickness comes to me..before i collapse
Lyrical beast..runs through my blood..forbidden time lapse
As i begin to become anotha dope emcee runnin a squad
Hurt ya mind like it was ya legs in P.E. doin squats
Don't hate me shawty we come by the ill-ness
You hate non-stop but fall back when we prove we ta ill-lest
I called you out so where you at nigga...you aint hard..I causes a trag-edy
Followin me will only sow Anotha Forbidden Sickness..fucked up you imposter emcees
Red_
Eliminate light in blackness, cuz AFS is still ill acquainted
Conditions unstabled, We enable release of fables
cuz our neurological cables can't even contain it
Leave the net tainted, red painted, blood splashed when the pain gets sorted
Delivered to victims in sizeable proportions leaving brains passed distorted
no gratification, but leave the sane contorted, with spinals sprained, report it!
Subjects the same? Deported, we think of new ways to attack
cerebellums that lack, the experience to pick up the pieces and react
we give mortal fatalities, aftaeffect is cranial cavities drained like batteries
the planet's gravity we bend-with-ease... you think with sanity?
So understand half of this piece, you'll understand tha AFS disease
rhyme scheme mastered in the rehearse when "emcees" submit to our defeat!
Lyrically Insane
When it comes to us spitting hard hitting mathematics,
we break lines down thoroughly like rocks to crack addicts
With feasible feedback, we make dickriding emcees defeatable,
we ‘unkillable’, we cease-wack, empty and…. repeatable
Leave’wack-cees’ stacked and torsos on meat-racks,ready-and-eatable,
We gots tight tracks, our mind is the heat-packed plus unbeatable
Yo...our verbal attacks" blaze mics to portray actual facts
our tactical tracks receive awards like graphical plaques
Cause when we rap, we break the boundaries of lyrical graphs
Overaccomplished sacrete the way we treat the unworthy and cheap
AFS never sleep, we works on our "Mic Disease" by fighting defeat
Forbidden Sickness, now we're resurrected kuz we can’t go undetected
We come through your krew spitting and leaving all yall minds "affected"!
FUCK!that shit was hot yall.......!And thats tha end for tha rest of tha krews.....lol!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172219
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172886
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I Couldnt Really See Flaw Joka Got Me And Lyricly Was Fire Gucci Came Nice
Red Was Impressive But Seams A Lil Lacking Never The Less There Wasnt Any Real Weaknessess And I Got To Say Blended Very Well Next Step Audio
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ayo ya'll fellaz reppin fo us aint it? lol that was pretty good, ya'll. im glad to see we doing something and yall doing something HOT keep it up
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yo good shit AFS
this was sum FIRE!,all tha verses were dope but i was feeling my CUZ INSANE's verse tha most though,
This show how AFS roll!..if you dont rep AFS!you aint shit!LMFAO
UPPING THIS!
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mayne, that shit was straight FYA! niggas,i'm tellin you, can't fuck w/ that shit right there.
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HELL YA!...straight FYAH!
this woulda been better if you was in this PROPHET,too bad...well anyways
UPPING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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eh, holla at me if you do anotha one...i had what i like to call writers constipation.
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LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeah i know what you mean homie!!!...LOL
UPPING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I Most Definetly Gotta Thatshit Was Blazing Im New To The The Site So I Need To Be Broken In Please Set Up A Battle For Me Asap Someone.
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baby i'll 'break' you in...lol....................
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yo ya'll that shit was fucking sick ya'll got that shit on lock i wish i was still a part of the crew ya know for the good shit like this yo red you need to pm me and me and you can drop a collab werd nigga and if you cuz is down we can do that 2 all three im out
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ya'll hit these up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173044
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171974
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That's wuz fire fam..Next Time..I'm on it..1
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ROFL at it only being your crew that give it good responses ..
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AFS ANTHEM
Gucci^
Your shit was aiight man...i think you could have done better on your flow...but your structure was fine...umm..your content wasnt all that bad..you could have worded your lines better..but they werent bad..your overall rhyme scheme was ok...i dont like alot of your rhymin options though..i think you should have come better there..
Tha Joka
Your shit wasnt all that bad either...i think you and Gucci matched in criteria..you layed pretty much what he laid..but you had one dope line..i thought was very good
Don't hate me shawty we come by the ill-ness
You hate non-stop but fall back when we prove we ta ill-lest
Dope shit
Red_
^your not all that bad man..but you talk too much about nothin..like it seems every line was the start to a new topic..your words werent worded all thaat well..but i give you props on your vocab..i think you can handle big words good...overall ok verse
Lyrically Insane
I think your prolly the best in your crew..i think you do very well on your rhymes..i liked your flow and structure..i think you word all your lines pretty good..your vocab wasnt bad..overall good job man..
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word ^ shot for the feed dawg
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lol.....thanx for da feedback yo!
UPPING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this shit was pretty tight
i felt every drop but i think it coulda been hotter
from all of you
no hate or anythin but that shit was only half what i think you can do
peace
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yo BUMPING this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo thanx for all da feedback!!!!!!
BUMPIN THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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........bumping This!!!!!!..............
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BUMPING THIS!!!!!!!!
this is sum hot shit for yall to peep!!!!!!!
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CMON people!...
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