10 lines max
no dick riding
the usual
white dogg spits first
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10 lines max
no dick riding
the usual
white dogg spits first
30 mins dude.....
Imma have you laid out for me like a red carpet to travel on,
Imma run through you like a Hummer crashing through an AVALON,
You nothin but a young boy and you're trapped in a wannabes stature,
You need a life swap, and so, Imma turn ya 180 degrees like a protractor,
Imma shoot my rockets off and blast you into space, you don't belong here,
Yo style I have seen it all before and guess what dogg?? yo fate draws near,
Imma chew you up and spit you like a cow that fuckin regurgitates,
Like da Hoover Dam imma flo like H2O and imma rip open da flood gates,
When you on the fuckin mic you rap easily, your style is very cheesy,
I ain't gotta try very hard against a fake ass EZE, this battle goes to me!!
I'm spittin for white cuz he got banned for some gay ass reason he will be back on in 3 days cuz he got 3 day banned
ok whatever, well since your posting for him im just gonna post my original verse
Ok, you from Cali-Forn-I-A, ok yeah right
I'll leave you d.o.a., i dont mean dead or alive
You rhymes infantile, at best your a baby genius
Beating me? The only thing you beating is your penis
If it wasn't for my semen, you would be breathing
I was spitting hot 16's when you were still teething
Looks its a shame, your average rhymes I wasted
I can predict ya next words, like oracle from matrix
White Dogg, with 2 g's? What are you illiterate?
Ya career is like sex, I came and just finished it
i just got word that white dogg was banned for two months man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but still keep this up the votes still count!!!!
what the hell'd he get banned for?
typo in my verse. *if it wasn't for my semen, you wouldn't be breathing*
freeposting 4 times in same thread cuz he was defendin someone!!!!!
uppin for votes. oh that sucks. i wanted him to witness his loss.
he ain't gonna lose man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well if I could vote um for sure it would go to white because he ate you after he said his first line!!!!!!!
v/White...but my vote don't count so it's okay!!!!!!!
Imma have you laid out for me like a red carpet to travel on,
Imma run through you like a Hummer crashing through an AVALON,
You nothin but a young boy and you're trapped in a wannabes stature,
You need a life swap, and so, Imma turn ya 180 degrees like a protractor,
vs.
You rhymes infantile, at best your a baby genius
Beating me? The only thing you beating is your penis
Looks its a shame, your average rhymes I wasted
I can predict ya next words, like oracle from matrix
avalon came way more consistent on structure aswell as punches and takes the victory.
well done
v/young avalon
please post on the linkx below
White Dogg, with 2 g's? What are you illiterate?
Ya career is like sex, I came and just finished it
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my vote dosent count but for sure if it did it would go to Avalon his rhymes were complex so it was good
V/Avalon
av gets my vote for a ore consistent verse nice punches and all out verse
nice battle to both emcees
v/ avolone
can you return the favor ?
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171786
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173044
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171974
Imma have you laid out for me like a red carpet to travel on,
Imma run through you like a Hummer crashing through an AVALON,
nah no real punch was in this
You nothin but a young boy and you're trapped in a wannabes stature,
You need a life swap, and so, Imma turn ya 180 degrees like a protractor,
alrighish getting better
Imma shoot my rockets off and blast you into space, you don't belong here,
Yo style I have seen it all before and guess what dogg?? yo fate draws near,
no
Imma chew you up and spit you like a cow that fuckin regurgitates,
Like da Hoover Dam imma flo like H2O and imma rip open da flood gates,
no
When you on the fuckin mic you rap easily, your style is very cheesy,
I ain't gotta try very hard against a fake ass EZE, this battle goes to me!!
nah
Ok, you from Cali-Forn-I-A, ok yeah right
I'll leave you d.o.a., i dont mean dead or alive
huh ?
You rhymes infantile, at best your a baby genius
Beating me? The only thing you beating is your penis
boat, but ok
If it wasn't for my semen, you would be breathing
I was spitting hot 16's when you were still teething
lol
Looks its a shame, your average rhymes I wasted
I can predict ya next words, like oracle from matrix
not really hard
White Dogg, with 2 g's? What are you illiterate?
Ya career is like sex, I came and just finished it
blah
both verses for me were blah
You nothin but a young boy and you're trapped in a wannabes stature,
You need a life swap, and so, Imma turn ya 180 degrees like a protractor,
vs
You rhymes infantile, at best your a baby genius
Beating me? The only thing you beating is your penis
Looks its a shame, your average rhymes I wasted
I can predict ya next words, like oracle from matrix
although he got 2 quotables, whites one was better than the both of them, and they were boats.. so no
v/white
Gotta agree with other voters that Young Avalon had the more consistent drop here. White Dogg's lines were mad hard to spit unless you got a machine gun delivery, and even then they don't sound all that smooth. So a few style points lost there. And after the opening 4 lines the rest of his verse wasn't as memorable. Not terrible, but not enough to edge out Young Avalon, who came with more concepts and wordplay even though the subject matter was played out.
Not official vote from me until I get to 100 posts, but unofficially the vote goes to Avalon.
skillz skillz all around ill vote later when i figure out who really done did it
man i cant vote but if i could i would prolly vote for avalon
its close but i think avalon won ey but yall gotta vote on mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173317
uppin for votes. come on vote niggaz. i need a few more votes!
You nothin but a young boy and you're trapped in a wannabes stature,
You need a life swap, and so, Imma turn ya 180 degrees like a protractor
v.
If it wasn't for my semen, you would be breathing
I was spitting hot 16's when you were still teething
White Dogg, with 2 g's? What are you illiterate?
Ya career is like sex, I came and just finished it
and the first dudes shit was stretched, so
NAv
uppin
Well Im Not Gonna sit Here and give some long ass explanations becuase Past voters have explained what i was gonna say
which was
Young Avalon Takes this Battle With Ease his punchez clearly Connected way hared than white dogg But Still you Both Dropped very good verses this was a battle worthe reading If you ask me But Still Young avalon Takes this one
uppin for more votes. one more vote and its a wrap come on people
Thought avalon tookk this, I'm not gonan take time and explain cuz my votes doesnt count, But yea he won..Barley tho, both verses were lame...
Drop a vote in my battle with 3x if you have time, ..
Tree u had a hard start and u started slipin at the end
Avlon came strong all the way
Vot = Avlon
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic
well avolon got the ko already,so he win^^^^^^^^^^
Dogg - You had all statements and no actual punches. You threatened to do lots of shit to him but none of them actually hurt him at all. Work on writing punches not just saying you'll fuck him up.
Avalon - Very simple verse, better verse definately. The teething shit and the closer could have been much better, but never the less, they were punches. You had a few punches in your battle and he had none so you take this.
Vote - Avalon