you know the rules but 3-0 is a k.o
ok
and it is a blind spit
10-16
check!!!!
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you know the rules but 3-0 is a k.o
ok
and it is a blind spit
10-16
check!!!!
check this website doesnt do KO's its first to 5 votes so theres no d/r aight
aight
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dont tense in this battle and be flexin this or sweatin this...
dawg i so devilish i turn heads like the excorcist....
lyrically im the gatekeeper of hellso in battles i direct heck...
the reason your bitch loves me is cause i fingured her like a tech deck...
i rap with lead points so lyrically i'm about to erase this mark...
i pace from the start so with my gun i leave you waistless with no heart...
nigga what? dont respond unless you want your death to be a tragety...
dawg im a heavyweight you your kind of fly (fly weight) so my rhymes about to fill you wit calories...
from my point of veiw you seen i was the top nigga so you thought you'd try it...
this battles over bitch i fed you so many punches they make lowlifes wanna diet...
aight gl on the battle pimp
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aight ok
Bitch is a retard..this site dont do KO's..anyway why u in a rush to lose?
gettin his Hopes up ..only to get Murked..what bad opponantz u choose
See Ima Hold back this time...since theres alot of bigger prospects
if this bitch ever asks for a Lesson..its gonna be a big project..
teachin this fool is no simple task...but dissin him is not a problem
leave em dazed an confused...sumthin these Herbz have in Common
im using a tenth of my skill while this bitch pullin out his hair
cant cope..an doesnt know what to do..another thing..herbz share..
came on here thinkin he could live the dream...get rich an signed
bitch open yer eyez...Become Famous?...u can barely even rhyme
structure is unstable an his lyricz are fallin off the sides......
even they dont wanna be seen with you..an thats the story of yer life..
good battle dawg to bad nigga's got to sleep on it ya know
yo ya'll goin vote on this bitch or note ? uppin for votes (1)
come on ya'll vote.....................................
uppin
sry guys I know u wanted votes, but I don't see where either one of you took this although it was a close battle it was weak and um.....nobody did better than the other to me man srry....later!!!! no vote-tie!!!!
yo low life that was a nice battle pimp could you do me a fav and hit up some of my battles ?
heres the link
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171948
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171974
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171786
thankz pimp
im out
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yo rb why the fuck you got to sleep on battles you all exspect us to vote but you wont vote on my shit wft ?
aight i am uppin this bitch for (1) and dont sleep on it please
yo i thought ya'll said you was goin hit this shit up but you couldnt find it well here it is now vote aight
id vote on this but i aint wasting my time since b-leave will get dq'd from the battle.... dawg ur only ALLOWED 5 posts of any sort after u drop ur verse u have like 7
not even close b you raped his ass after i get some more ex ill challenge you
yo dawg i only upped 5 times ..........................
u can only have 5 posts.... ^^^^^ that kinda post counts as well man.... jus lettin u know read the rules
i didnt know post counted as uppin for votes so my bad could a mod close this or excuse me this time
dont tense in this battle and be flexin this or sweatin this...
dawg i so devilish i turn heads like the excorcist....
^good start but..no punch^
lyrically im the gatekeeper of hellso in battles i direct heck...
the reason your bitch loves me is cause i fingured her like a tech deck...
^keeping the theme but...no punch...love=fingered...no^
i rap with lead points so lyrically i'm about to erase this mark...
i pace from the start so with my gun i leave you waistless with no heart...
^aiight=wit^
nigga what? dont respond unless you want your death to be a tragety...
dawg im a heavyweight you your kind of fly (fly weight) so my rhymes about to fill you wit calories...
^not really..1/2callories=food+heavyweight and flyweight=hungry fo yo rap^
from my point of veiw you seen i was the top nigga so you thought you'd try it...
this battles over bitch i fed you so many punches they make lowlifes wanna diet...
^first line was aiight but..didnt follow through to second line^
low life
first line-no punch
second-1/2
3rd-diss..yeah
4th-diss yeah
5th-diss no
6th-ironic,yes
basically,low life took this for even structures,and wittier punches
B-LeAvE if you followed through with your themes to both lines
or just rearranged a few words you wouldve taken it.
that said your second verses were kinda longer..
v/low life
hahahahahahahahaha yeah right u got to be kidding me
uppin
B- your verse would have been good if it had more punches. seems like ive seen alot of people talking about themselves in battles lately and it really hurts them. one piece of advice i can give you is to try and throw a punch with every line and it will really help you elevate. flow- 8.5/10
punches- 5/10
similies/metas-6/10
vocab-8.5/10
multies-0/10
structure 6.5/10
overall 34.5/60
Lowlife- you seemed to do a much better job with your structure and wordplay. your flow and vocab was decent enough. the important thing here was that you didnt idolize yourself, you just threw punches- (some of which connected, some didnt) also...i didnt get the "something herbs have in common lines but meh.."
flow-8/10
punches-7/10
similies/metas 6/10
vocab-7.5/10
multies- 0/10
structure 8/10
overall- 36.5/60
v/ lowlife
pz
B
dont tense in this battle and be flexin this or sweatin this...
dawg i so devilish i turn heads like the excorcis
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from my point of veiw you seen i was the top nigga so you thought you'd try it...
this battles over bitch i fed you so many punches they make lowlifes wanna diet...
VS
LOWLIFE
NOTHING
Vote: B fo better and more punches
i cant vote yet but i say b_leave won this one he had better punchlines and flowed better
B-Leave::dont tense in this battle and be flexin this or sweatin this...
dawg i so devilish i turn heads like the excorcist....
......this fukkin line just killed that 1 nigga.....10/10
..lyrically im the gatekeeper of hellso in battles i direct heck...
the reason your bitch loves me is cause i fingured her like a tech deck..
......im still laughing my ass off shit that was good9/10
i rap with lead points so lyrically i'm about to erase this mark...
i pace from the start so with my gun i leave you waistless with no heart
.....ONLY 2 words....GOD DAMN...nice..8/10
nigga what? dont respond unless you want your death to be a tragety...
dawg im a heavyweight you your kind of fly (fly weight) so my rhymes about to fill you wit calories...
.......i like it but it wasnt as good as the other 6/10
from my point of veiw you seen i was the top nigga so you thought you'd try it...
this battles over bitch i fed you so many punches they make lowlifes wanna diet...
........AMAZING GRACE HOW SWEET A LINE THAT GoT ME HIGH AS THEE10/10
LowLife:
aight ok
Bitch is a retard..this site dont do KO's..anyway why u in a rush to lose?
gettin his Hopes up ..only to get Murked..what bad opponantz u choose
See Ima Hold back this time...since theres alot of bigger prospects
if this bitch ever asks for a Lesson..its gonna be a big project..
teachin this fool is no simple task...but dissin him is not a problem
leave em dazed an confused...sumthin these Herbz have in Common
im using a tenth of my skill while this bitch pullin out his hair
cant cope..an doesnt know what to do..another thing..herbz share..
came on here thinkin he could live the dream...get rich an signed
bitch open yer eyez...Become Famous?...u can barely even rhyme
structure is unstable an his lyricz are fallin off the sides......
even they dont wanna be seen with you..an thats the story of yer life..
__________________
im not gona even say anything to u.....(spits LowLife in the face)
oh and b-leave got my vote..............................
^u gotta be kiddin me right?...so how many votes he throw yer way u give sum1 10/10 for B-Leave::dont tense in this battle and be flexin this or sweatin this...
dawg i so devilish i turn heads like the excorcist....u fucking retard dont come into my thread
uppin
nice battle i think both was good....................tie...............go voting
Big T vs Ethnic that battle need votes
even though tha whole exorsist line is gettin played out im still gonna give it to Bleave cuz he still kept it deent and lowlifes kinda was like a essay or sumthin.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic
this is text battlin its different to freestlyin on the street spitin aload of random shit off the top of yer head if u gonna come in and vote on my battles like a complete fucking idiot u can fuckoff..he didnt have 1 diss that had any kind of meaning.......but lets not sway
uppin
B leave is dq'd for over upping
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