Topic: Crystal Clear
Line limit: 14-20 Lines
Check-in: Tonight
Due Date: Sometime before Wednesday.
Rules: No feeding, no biting, no crew/hate votes, the usual shit.
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Topic: Crystal Clear
Line limit: 14-20 Lines
Check-in: Tonight
Due Date: Sometime before Wednesday.
Rules: No feeding, no biting, no crew/hate votes, the usual shit.
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Ndust . . . ?
check....my bad man hope you don't hol this gainst me
i ain't used to the Check in rule...never used it
This day and age...its all fucked an everythin's a blur
never know whats gonna happen...what'll occur
Terrorism is never left out in the States since 911...
when those bastards sent all those innocent people to heaven
Raisen heads an reavealin what was real an hidden
its almost like it was supposed to be...it was forbidden
Now the world is fucked...war everywhere you look
everythin has a hook...cause now people are shook
Crystal clear...we wish this was the world could be like
eliminated of fear...not worryin of a mislead air strike
People are dyin left right and center...its crazy
celebs are worried too...guards for Em...Dre... and Jay-Z
I wish we could get passed everythin an leave everythin behind
but i'm one...it'll take the voice of millions and all of them combined
I pray that for the next generation they'll become wise
learn from our mistakes...and then come ta conflict demise
aiite .. just postin to let you know im workin on it now. i just got home so give me a bit :]
Where am I? What is this world .. filled with all the hatred .. war seems endless
But why? We have all this fighting over which religion is better .. war seems senseless
Since when does religion tell you to bomb another country .. suicidal attacks
Or when does a country have a constant threat for 50 years .. peace is what we lack
Why can't the Jews be Jews and not be persisted by the Nazi race .. let them live ..
Why couldn't we let the Indians stay? Or treat african-amercians fairly .. we couldn't forgive
Using a colored bathroom and being black was a serious crime .. things were out of proportion
Now-at-days you have 14 year old girls banging .. get a child .. ending its life with an abortion
You got terrorists .. like Saddam Hussein and Bin Laden .. our values in human race seem lost
Paper wrappers .. soda cans .. pollutes the earth we live on .. even the fumes from cars exhaust
Our disregards for the world .. for the people .. for the future of generations to come ..
Our disregards for the lives of people .. we end thousands of lives with the split of an atom
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Why can't people understand .. this world will never become blessed with peace again ..
Even when Jesus step foot on the Earth .. he was persucuted for his saying of 'Amen'
If our Earth was Crystal Clear .. there would be no more longing for the use of drugs
If our Earth was Crystal Clear .. there would be no more gangstas and street thugs
If our world .. that we lived on was Crystal Clear .. there would be no more pollution ..
No place can be perfect .. but to treat each other nicely ....
...and to respect your enviroment, other cultures, religions .. yes, I find Crystal Clear a solution
bah, nice drop ndust
get somevotes on this shit .. ill return the favor later.
This day and age...its all fucked an everythin's a blur
never know whats gonna happen...what'll occur
this first line was really deep dogg i Liked this ndust.....
Using a colored bathroom and being black was a serious crime .. things were out of proportion
Now-at-days you have 14 year old girls banging .. get a child .. ending its life with an abortion
dude this stuff was tight too, but....
Imma give this to ndust because it is harder to come up with a good opener rather than a good filler...good job both on topic but he wins anyways!!!!!
v/ Ndust!!!!
aight thanks man....uppin this shit [1].....and key i liked your verse man shit was tight
this should be a good battle
NDust...Nice Punches Flows...nice evrything....
Key...u were pretty close with NDust
Using a colored bathroom and being black was a serious crime .. things were out of proportion
Now-at-days you have 14 year old girls banging .. get a child .. ending its life with an abortion
You got terrorists .. like Saddam Hussein and Bin Laden .. our values in human race seem lost
Paper wrappers .. soda cans .. pollutes the earth we live on .. even the fumes from cars exhaust
..liked those...they won it for u...
V/Key Revolver.....My Battles in sig return the favor..both of u
By the way i call nice lines punches.................................
Returning the favor. Vote! I return the favor. Pz.
Uppin for votes in this shit [2] leave a link.....
Uppn for votes. Leave a link .. Pz.
uppin this shit come on drop a vote an link i'll RTF [3]
Last uppn. Come on guys :/
I'll return the favor, just leave a link!
yo ill vote later if i can,im kinda busy now ill tell u later if i can vote good luck 2 both
Uppin this shit....[4] come on leave a link don't sleep!
Im Not To Hype On Topical But Only A Real herb Would Say Nice Punches In A Topical
and you are the only one to call nice lines punches
hang yourself
anyway
this was a pretty dope topical i like keys concepts and scheme a lil better then ndust even tho i enjoied them both i have to sway to keys side for i like his concept better
dopness both of you
v/key
yo i liked both of urs, but im leanin towards key cuz he has better vocab, talked about many different things, instead of just terrorisom, and asked questions, no hate tho keep doin ur shit both
v/key
votiong for ndust because i can..
and because key is wack az fuck and just prooved it.. hes a fat wack az fuck mutha fucka.............
nah close battle, unno y yall niggaz battling for but meh, dust stayed on topic more, i liked the flow of his shit... sounded and came out nice.. key the way u posted ur verse was wack to,...
v.dust
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thanks to all who voted now uppin for more votes on this ish! DON'T SLEEP
we bth RTF fuck!
Id vote but im not really much of a topical reader, but i guess u can consider this an up, ill prolly come back tho and read it again, and make a decision but for now its jus not my fortay
lol ^ thanks man i appreciate the free up.........
but please come back an drop a vote
v/key
better word play structure and flow
nice battle though close to call maybe next time ndust
return the favor on me vs. excalibur
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my vote goes to key, better lines and punches to me.
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Alright, NDustrial minded had the better flow whic made it easier to read, but he lacked the depth in his piece, there didnt seem to be much emotion, if any behind his words. His imagery was alright, but it was as good as Key revolvers. Key's flow was choppier, and at points he stretched his bars too much, but his piece had more feeling better imagery and overall was a better read. That is why he gets my vote in this. 1
ight im not much of a topical reader but i enjoyed both ya'lls verses both ya'll had good concepts n both stayed on the subject i know that its hard to stay on subject rather than turnin it into text battle...therefore props 2 both ya...on the whole it was a close battle between u i know that both u do regular topicals so it was as expected...but im guna have to go with key on this one cus i like his concepts more...but he only gets this one by a close shave...so ndust i'd like to vote 4 u but i cant soz dawg....
v/key