you know the rules 10 - 16
30 mins to drop after check
and the basics
check.............................................
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you know the rules 10 - 16
30 mins to drop after check
and the basics
check.............................................
you goin check in or not ?....................................
ok well lesson, blood is thicka than water//
im tryin to rip right now, so i am already doin wut i aught of//
wit that 40-5 i can take wut you hand me//
i dnt think ur real you seem laid bac n dat face just hides the fact u probably sweet like candy//
your life thru my understandin doesnt seem so dandy//
i have a question for ya
r u really hard or just yappin, cuz to me u wud be scared to kill ne member of my family//
tell me im tru n u dont kno hard life//
cuz in a second, to ya neck ill raise a knife//
so your brains ill splice//
you'll be the dumb dude to make a new name to battle me twice//
ok here i go
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must i say more
man listen, is you gonna talk or battle make a decision,
cause i'm way over ya head like a circumsism, :laugh:
and if u the champ, i'm taking the mic out ya hand,
and i'm showing off for puffy like i was making the band,
when ya gonna understand,u ain't even on my level,
what!!!...................u know that broke bread with the devil,
Obvisely.... it's simple to see this cat don't wanna battle me,
cause i defreeze rappers like i spit antifreeze,
act tough it's just another life i'm wasting,
ryhme hot like i just blew ya venalation,
squad up son i fucking kill ya team,
dropping more kats (kit kat)then a vendening machines,
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FINISH HIM !!!!!!!!
I'm leavein the battle with a breeze, makeing crack head ron sneeze,
leave ur knees~rattlin like u got parkinson disease,
gl on the votes kid you need to work on your stucture
come on rb dont sleep on this shit i need the win lol j/p uppin for votes
b u got this one, ur verse was decent, mos def could get better tho, wid some hard hard punches and disse..
ur fav linez for me this batt were the opener and closer
good shit
leave u kill this battle crack wasn't ready
v/b_leave
leave takes this easily,but ya structure an flow need sum work. throwing more punches might help aswell,alot of ya verse was jus filla. NOTE:self glorification is weak in any battle......even if your opponent cant land a hit.
Cron, ya punches were weak, ya structure an flow were off, an it was way too simple.
ELEVATION is wat you need.
uppin for poll votes (1)...................................
uppin 2 times and cancer either you or the other cat didnt poll vote drop that shit on the poll aight
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leave you killed the bitch
jsut work on structure an shit.....
all that needs to be said
crack elevate hardcore
RTF an hit up my battle vs. Born in my sig........
ya'll poll vote there is 3 votes for me right there and no 1 poll voted but 1 of you
some one fucking vote on this battle please ..............
yo good battle croncrack everything you had was wack elvate and like B_LeAvE' you had soem nice flow and better punches and good structure good battle
v=B_LeAvE' for better punches and flow
can i get this win as a k.o i am up 3-0 thankz if so
it is obvious this is a ko so could ya'll give me the win and close this ?
thankz
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leave, i must agree..ya murked the new mothafucka...but he'll get better...i hope....
ya had good punches, decent flow, basically a pretty decent verse...could def. use some work...but can't we all?
crack, mayne, homey, ya just wasn't ready...ya structure is fucked up, and ya had no real punches to speak of ...but like i said, you'll get better...it will come..
botha ya keep uppin ya shit...
v/bleave
thankz for the honest vote pimp come on rb i need 1 more vote to close this shit