VictoriaParkave vs. Jay-Rell

10 line battle,
house rules,
20 minute verse due time or automatic win for opposition
best of luck

u spit first jay

ayo, cats hate me V, cause of how I brag and boast// but at close range I wont miss like shaq in post//
I got that heat cook cats like roast// and my shots'll have u c-walkin dog when i'm popin that toast//
ya claims aint real, beleave me the shit ain't hard 2 tell// yo need quit it fam cause yo ass just frontin like pharell// yea the names rell//
but i dont roll wit killa cam// i roll wit them niggaz that be known 2 kill a man// fa scrilla fam//
my rhymes hot u a fan 2 this// and in ten bars i'ma make u give up the mic like canibus//

if jay-rell wanna live,thats his choice
ill roll up on him deep like barry whites voice

punch u in the mouth and put a tek 9 to ur ribs
and run up in ur house like mtv cribs

ill up the clip and pop it at jay-rell
hes on a seafood diet cuz im feedin him shells

fuck a pistol we got tanks,
and my wrist gotta stay frozen like seamen at sperm banks

the names vicpark,niggas u see the spliff spark,the fifth spark,on the new man found dead after dark

that was hot, :laugh: let's see how the vote gose :laugh:

the bout was weak but what can i expect??
From no weights?? but i would have to go with
JAY cuz his punchs were a little harder at the end..
Thats why i'm giving it too you... Victoria had it but i didnt like the end

yeah man u nice wid it,u got some nice punches,and tell m1 to shut the fuck up

can we get couple votes from ya'll get at us !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

i'm out here grindin fo luv I cant get no votes??? they shitin us VP!!

i gotta agree wiv m16...this was a weak battle...none of u actually came at the opponent that hard n IMO it bout yo' verses were a lil' self glorified....bout ya need to use personal's multis n metaphors...which will help ya...

im guna hve to vote jay thoucus he' did have harder punches than vic..well towards the end

v/jay

man,all they doin is shittin on us,bout weak battle,this battle was tight,yeah i know i closed this 1 weak

stop tryina shit on the battle and just give ur opion
I boast all the time cause i'm cocky
I might change my name 2 cocky, then maybe they'll feel me more :huh:

yo VictoriaParkave had this battle like jay you got owned man like good battle but you got owned man


v= VictoriaParkave hey hit up my links man

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jay-rell gets my vote on this shit....
jsut a better verse ya know?
victoria come better next time dawg
this wasn't a great battle
but rell took it

ahh it was hot i cant hate on that for two of you cats that can barely rap i give my vote to vp

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