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Check...GL............
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Insane Joker Lyricsist huh.. ?
i'll rip open ya text... break every bone in your neck
and i'd pull your card but..
.................. Joker's get thrown from the deck
i could think of nameplays but thats lame hes a dimwit
cuz dawg Telekinetic.. is just a gay name to begin with
he aint for-seeing shit.. i'll send him in a car to hell
to prove the outcome of this battle's..
................................. gonna be hard to Tel
ya head'l start ta swell.. just one bang and its open
then i'll choke him with film negative's..
........................... have him hangin by a moment
battlin me was a bad idea.. but its too late to retreat
u of all people shoulda known.. it was ur fate to be beat
GL
I’m a vile edition of style… so know your position
You’ll never touch this kid, like a pedophile in prison
Edit ya styles condition, the rest of dm is miles ahead
But this time even I blew…
…………………………..........your bitch ass style to shreds
I ripped methods and said fuck ya diamond minds crew
But I’ll give you the shaft… when they get off it dude
Why cats still dread you remained just accidental hype
You just got hostile with lead once… in a pencil fight
My first strike ended almost all of your mental plans
&It didn’t take carbon dating to know your simple man
up for votes
damn this battle was pretty hot, so ima break it down thorough
i'll rip open ya text... break every bone in your neck
and i'd pull your card but..
.................. Joker's get thrown from the deck
^^^^ LOL cool opener
i could think of nameplays but thats lame hes a dimwit
cuz dawg Telekinetic.. is just a gay name to begin with
^^^ decent attempt.. jus wasnt feelin it
he aint for-seeing shit.. i'll send him in a car to hell
to prove the outcome of this battle's..
................................. gonna be hard to Tel
^^^ set up was nice punch was dope
ya head'l start ta swell.. just one bang and its open
then i'll choke him with film negative's..
........................... have him hangin by a moment
^^^^ good punch
battlin me was a bad idea.. but its too late to retreat
u of all people shoulda known.. it was ur fate to be beat
^^^ nah not feelin the ender
8/10
tel
I’m a vile edition of style… so know your position
You’ll never touch this kid, like a pedophile in prison
^^ meh wasnt feelin
Edit ya styles condition, the rest of dm is miles ahead
But this time even I blew…
…………………………..........your bitch ass style to shreds
^^^ good but nothin spectacular
I ripped methods and said fuck ya diamond minds crew
But I’ll give you the shaft… when they get off it dude
^^^ lol i liked this
Why cats still dread you remained just accidental hype
You just got hostile with lead once… in a pencil fight
^^^ lol good punch again
My first strike ended almost all of your mental plans
&It didn’t take carbon dating to know your simple man
^^^ ok finisher
7/10
ima have to go wit center on this... i jus feel like his verse had more thorough n direct punches then tele.... no hate to both... good drops
vote - center
here comes the break down
i'll rip open ya text... break every bone in your neck
and i'd pull your card but..
.................. Joker's get thrown from the deck
Nice line..i like that punch. good punch at his crew. 9/10
i could think of nameplays but thats lame hes a dimwit
cuz dawg Telekinetic.. is just a gay name to begin with
ain't feelin that line too much...nice try tho. 4/10
he aint for-seeing shit.. i'll send him in a car to hell
to prove the outcome of this battle's..
................................. gonna be hard to Tel
again, nice name play...just tweaked it alittle bit woulda been perfect. 9.5/10
ya head'l start ta swell.. just one bang and its open
then i'll choke him with film negative's..
........................... have him hangin by a moment
eh...the frist line ain't too hot, but tha last two make up for...very nicely done. 8/10
battlin me was a bad idea.. but its too late to retreat
u of all people shoulda known.. it was ur fate to be beat
it appears that was sloppily thrown on there jsut sou oculd end the verse..5/10
Center:
TOTAL : 35.5/50
I’m a vile edition of style… so know your position
You’ll never touch this kid, like a pedophile in prison
Lol. nice touch w/ the pedophile line..could improve tho. it was funny. 7/10
Edit ya styles condition, the rest of dm is miles ahead
But this time even I blew…
…………………………..........your bitch ass style to shreds
I ripped methods and said fuck ya diamond minds crew
But I’ll give you the shaft… when they get off it dude
that coula been better. nice blow to D.M, but you could do better than that. 5/10
Why cats still dread you remained just accidental hype
You just got hostile with lead once… in a pencil fight
^^hahahahaha...thats a great line..had me laughin for a while. very nicely done. 10/10
My first strike ended almost all of your mental plans
&It didn’t take carbon dating to know your simple man
Again,very nicely done. excellent closer. 9/10
TOTAL:
31/50
very close battle. nicely done by both cats..but the vote goes to Center Sight.
v/C.S
would you gents be so kind as to hit that up since i took the time to to reply to yours, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161579
center, nice verse, which is definitely a rarity in fl
good to see something actually worth voting on
anyways, let me break it down. You started out strong
with your opener which i felt hit pretty hard. I cant say
if it's been done before since i don't read tons of battles,
but we all know ijl punches are pretty much played. Though
this seemd creative to me and had some nice wit too, good
work on that. The next punch was kind of a let down though.
It hit n all and had the flow but i just wasn't that hard.
Good rebound however on the following punch. The setup
wasn't real good, because telekenisis is moving things with
your mind not for-seeing, regardless you still had the personal
with the wordplay, nice and hard. Again good consistency on the
next punch, not that harsh but it had some wit to it. Wasn't
feelin the closer though, it wasn't really a punch and you
went back to the for-seeing thing which you had incorrect
in the first place.
Also a pretty good verse from you Ryan, which i've
come to expect from you nowadays. Anyways, i'll
get to it. Good opening bar, Your flow is always good
as i've noticed the case is in most of your battles
i liked the simile too, not that direct but it definitely
packed a punch. The next few punches weren't bad
either, i liked the style of the second one where you
leave em hanging thinking its one thing but then in comes
the diss, not to hard hitting though but you had a
hint of wit in there. Good follow up though with the
pencil fight punch, nice wit. but like center i wasnt feelin
the closer. As it didnt seem like much of a punch to me
in conclusion i'm going to have to go with Tele on this
for just coming a bit more consistent with his disses
but it was damn close. props for both on good verses
and keeping me entertained
^Yea it was close... but you didn't even add in one of my bars.
That dont really seem fair. :/
^That was meant for prodigal.
...........Upping for more votes
drop links if u want an honest vote returned
please oh please vote, oh please oh please
Center took thsi battle
this battle was hot....you both came hard you both were just awesome in your drops....not lackin too much in them....you were both consistant and come so tough...this is a very good, close battle boys....good job.......
Center got it for comin a little bit harder......
Return the favour in my battle vs. LyricallAce in my sig...
Center Sight:
i'll rip open ya text... break every bone in your neck
and i'd pull your card but..
.................. Joker's get thrown from the deck
^^good punch woulda been better if his name was joka
i could think of nameplays but thats lame hes a dimwit
cuz dawg Telekinetic.. is just a gay name to begin with
^^lol good punch
he aint for-seeing shit.. i'll send him in a car to hell
to prove the outcome of this battle's..
................................. gonna be hard to Tel
^^Good punch and play off the name
ya head'l start ta swell.. just one bang and its open
then i'll choke him with film negative's..
........................... have him hangin by a moment
^^okay punch
battlin me was a bad idea.. but its too late to retreat
u of all people shoulda known.. it was ur fate to be beat
^^not really feelin that one
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Telekinetic:
I’m a vile edition of style… so know your position
You’ll never touch this kid, like a pedophile in prison
^^Good punch
Edit ya styles condition, the rest of dm is miles ahead
But this time even I blew…
…………………………..........your bitch ass style to shreds
^^nah not really feelin that one
I ripped methods and said fuck ya diamond minds crew
But I’ll give you the shaft… when they get off it dude
^^Decent punch
Why cats still dread you remained just accidental hype
You just got hostile with lead once… in a pencil fight
^^Good punch but played concept
My first strike ended almost all of your mental plans
&It didn’t take carbon dating to know your simple man
^^Good punch
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This battle was pretty close both of did well and this was a pretty even match up but I gotta say that Center Sight took this battle because of more consistency…..just had a few better punches………….good battle by the both of you though………
VOTE: Center Sight
sweet tits... up #4.....................
last up
Good battle C...
I look forward to doing it again sometime.
DM member are more than welcome to vote also.
I dont mind. -peace
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sorry to free post...... but can yall drop n honest vote on skrollz vs sylentz... ive already voted on this thnx a bunch
i'll rip open ya text... break every bone in your neck
and i'd pull your card but..
.................. Joker's get thrown from the deck
i could think of nameplays but thats lame hes a dimwit
cuz dawg Telekinetic.. is just a gay name to begin with
he aint for-seeing shit.. i'll send him in a car to hell
to prove the outcome of this battle's..
................................. gonna be hard to Tel
ya head'l start ta swell.. just one bang and its open
then i'll choke him with film negative's..
........................... have him hangin by a moment
vs.
I ripped methods and said fuck ya diamond minds crew
But I’ll give you the shaft… when they get off it dude
Why cats still dread you remained just accidental hype
You just got hostile with lead once… in a pencil fight
My first strike ended almost all of your mental plans
&It didn’t take carbon dating to know your simple man
this was pretty close. both had had some good and some mediocore
punches.it was pretty even..i wasnt feelin tele"s first two
bars and i wasnt feelin centers closer..but overall it was a good match
...center edged this one out for having more consistant punches..
v/center sight