Just Ain't Dope (My Style)

Just Ain't Dope (My Style)
Written By: ELEETE

My scriptures are written lyrics that'll burn the gimmicks...
When you hear it I'll turn your image like your words dimished...
My soul yurns to comform an reform the rhythmic...
Your turn is finished, should've known I cant be learned or mimicked...
Like a mystic magician, my wizadry cripples all competittion...
I'm like Jesus on a mission to bring you all of god's religions...
I would open your mind, If my lyrics could cut like an incision...
I'm divine in sight so I can see truth through the lies in vision...
Even though emcees say I just aint dope enough...
No hope for luck, the road I chose at the fork is rough...
I got kids callin me out like "ELEETE your flow just sucks"...
Shit makes me want to choke my throat till my vocals erupt...
Check my expression when pressure is pressed against me...
You attempt to tempt me but the gauges have measured empty...
I'm in school with kids, like an adult trapped in elementary...
This is the documentary of a an emcee whos words are alimentary...
But now sadness absorbs my status, im comformed in madness...
Thoughts are morbid, tragic, my soul's been scorched to ashes...
Body stored in blackness, these visions are horrid lapses...
Playing in my head...torturous sights of corpse in masses...
I just wanted you to feel the nostalgic spirit resident thats evident...
A style so intelligent, its apparent, wack shit here is irrelevent...
Evidence shows perfection when combining the elements...
It takes dedication, development of a mind beyond intelligence...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171361
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=170442

yo twin this was ill shit you know i peep content so i cant really do the rest but he content was fire twin

This is wicked shit it had a nice flow keep droppin.

hit me for collab whenever you want

Wow... I really liked this.
I liekd the words you used, and the presentation of the concept.
Good vocab.
You really just pulled it off here, man.
Good job.

yo i liked that, lotta emotion in that man, ill piece, lookin forward to another one

nice dawg i felt the emotion
and good vocab yoo
kepp it up

Was a good drop... you had a nice structured flow, wordplay was there... multis were there as well, nothin was basic, it was nice and complex... you also had good vocab in this.. but overal, this was a good drop.. keep it up!

Fa Realz....One of the best I've seen in a while :) Keep It NYCE.... :thumbup:

Yo appreciate the feedback...leave a link ill hit you up...

Yeah, this was actually pretty good. I see a lot of kid's forcing multis and using words out of context, but I didn't see this happen with your verse. Your emotion was good and your vocabulary was very good also.. the flow was really nice and overall, this piece kept me entertained. I could easily see this being lengthened and converted into audio. I also liked the simple message behind this piece. My favorite lines are as follows:


But now sadness absorbs my status, im comformed in madness...
Thoughts are morbid, tragic, my soul's been scorched to ashes...
Body stored in blackness, these visions are horrid lapses...
Playing in my head...torturous sights of corpse in masses...

those were just nice, straight up. ^

and these were good also...

Even though emcees say I just aint dope enough...
No hope for luck, the road I chose at the fork is rough...
I got kids callin me out like "ELEETE your flow just sucks"...
Shit makes me want to choke my throat till my vocals erupt...
Check my expression when pressure is pressed against me...
You attempt to tempt me but the gauges have measured empty...


Overall, this drop was really solid and above average.. keep dropping cuz I like your style.

Aiyo, return the favor please and drop feedback on this OM Diss with $pit, Feeble and myself. Thanks in advance, peace.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171404

by the way, the picture of that chick in your signature.. the one on the right... daaaaaaaaaamn, she's fine as fuck yo. Look at those lips, who is that? lol.

well, first thing thats striked me was the flow
and the brilliant use of internals. Was really
smooth and i could imagine it being spit out
over a beat. Good bar length as well. You
had some nice vocab in there, came strong.
You kept it complex but then again, not too
hard to follow or understand. Message & content
was good, all relevant, didnt stray or go off to
another topic...dope.

Overall, it was nice, a good read, again the flow
was what really captivated me...4/5...!

Return the favour:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171441

Damn this was a nice piece. I was feeling this all the way throught. the flow was just amazing and i loved it. The story was real nice as well it went wioth the rhyme or whatever it was real nice.

ill shit man,nice vocab,tight multisyour style is ill,all in all this was an ill drop,keep droppin tha hottness.~1~

hit me up if you wanna do a clooab.

collab* my bad

Yo i appreciate you all...much love...leave a link ill hit it up...

vocab here was tight... real tight... its good to see alot of heads uppin their shit with vocab and what not.... content was nice... rhyme scheme stayed dope, but got syllable-fucked at a few parts... an extra syllable can make a huge difference when it comes to adjustin multies to a certain length of how far (syllable wise) u want it to go... but thats just my view on it coz i like to maintain my rhyme scheme on 1 level and not switch it up or mess around with it soemtimes, coz it can sound quite.. ehh.. but anyway the rest was decent... real good imagery in there, dope shit..... keep it up..

and hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171622

peace

Yo appreciate the feed...Leave a link ill hit it up...

Your turn is finished, should've known I cant be learned or mimicked...
Like a mystic magician, my wizadry cripples all competittion...
I'm like Jesus on a mission to bring you all of god's religions...
I would open your mind, If my lyrics could cut like an incision...
I'm divine in sight so I can see truth through the lies in vision...

These are just some lines that I had to stop reading and say 'damn' this piece was talent thats the only to describe it and I usually dont like half the stuff i read on here whether its 'conscience' or 'gangsta' rap most of it is just alright to me but this one was hot i coul tell this is natural it aint forced u didnt have ya dictionary wit u when u wrote it and i like to read stuff like that i never read none of ya stuff before this so i dont know if you always come off like this but if not stay on this level cause this one was good and ya flow was nice so keep droppin

yo ya vocab was on point had a good flow all togetha this was ill shit yo keep up what u doin

yo this was fire right here big up

well I Tell You What I Think

I Think That This OM is a Piece of ....................... Sickness from The Rap Hell Of terror EELETE ripped them lines like Rapist Rip Pussies And Personally thats Some hard rippin LOL

One word to describe this

Spectacular!!!


kepp it Up Mayne

Stanza.