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Whitedogg is blacklisted from voting
so are any crew members
Chezech....
Im gonna have to post first, although your widely know for feeding
even your girlfriend laughs durin sex......no matter what shes readin
another forbidden sickness........damn its like youve got H.I.V
online so much, your street language changed to "lol, o i c"
fuck the rest?, this kid thinks he can be one of the best
hes that much of a retard......he even failed a fuckin iq test
your a hillbilly kid....so what the fuck you rappin for...
you bin married 3 times.and still have the same inlaws
this gucci cross dresser likes to eat drink and "be mary"..steppin out in high heels
he lit a match in his kitchen....blew his house...right off its own wheels
Dont Get It? dont Vote
Gucci takes the "piss still" just to show you aint on "something dope"-
Compare me to oral sex with a vice grip the "niceness" causes 'Crushing Blow's'-
This kid is dreaming of success- forever like "Peter-Pan"-
He's just like the character cuz his punches 'never-never-land'-
Syl the balls in my spits, are more than what your whole crew measures-
I'll ground you then punch ur torso till I 'bury ur chest' like "lost treasures"-
Syc is a loner and he has no-one like a table of even numbers-
Cos this dudes circle of friends is smaller than neck holes in babys jumpers-
I'm destined to drop flavourous shit while this faker get 'dicked'-
Cos ur like "Hulk Hogan shirts".. u were just made to get 'ripped'-
yo this is a pretty tight battle.......but it'll have to o to Gucci
Sylentz - you came hard....coulda came harder....an you shoulda....your verse was pretty good but didn't have what it needed to beat Gucci who came surprisingly pretty tight....Gucci you elevated since i last looked at ya shit..an Sylentz you came down a lil or didn't go to your full potential from tha last time i looked at ya shit.....
Sylentz -
Im gonna have to post first, although your widely know for feeding
even your girlfriend laughs durin sex......no matter what shes readin
reading during sex ?? :huh:
another forbidden sickness........damn its like youve got H.I.V
online so much, your street language changed to "lol, o i c"
lol nice bar
fuck the rest?, this kid thinks he can be one of the best
hes that much of a retard......he even failed a fuckin iq test
lol aragin nice
your a hillbilly kid....so what the fuck you rappin for...
you bin married 3 times.and still have the same inlaws
again nice lol
this gucci cross dresser likes to eat drink and "be mary"..steppin out in high heels
he lit a match in his kitchen....blew his house...right off its own wheels
ok closer
minus your opener and your closer you were consistly decent. opener didnt make sense and closer was ok.
Gucci^
Gucci takes the "piss still" just to show you aint on "something dope"-
Compare me to oral sex with a vice grip the "niceness" causes 'Crushing Blow's'-
your opener > his opener but it still not too good
This kid is dreaming of success- forever like "Peter-Pan"-
He's just like the character cuz his punches 'never-never-land'-
thats more like it :thumbup: ... pretty decent
Syl the balls in my spits, are more than what your whole crew measures-
I'll ground you then punch ur torso till I 'bury ur chest' like "lost treasures"-
ok
Syc is a loner and he has no-one like a table of even numbers-
Cos this dudes circle of friends is smaller than neck holes in babys jumpers-
nice
I'm destined to drop flavourous shit while this faker get 'dicked'-
Cos ur like "Hulk Hogan shirts".. u were just made to get 'ripped'-
nice closer
your opener wasnt that good but apart from that a good drop
Vote - Gucci^ ..... both close verses but sylentz opener lost it for him.
^^ agreed...both close..but sylentz opener was a lil' to weak neva
neva really made sense to me...gucci came a bit hard than syl aswel so therefore i v/gucci
WTF at this, not to sway but my first line means his sex is un pleasing, if shes reading whilst hes spose to be having sex with her.
lets get some real votes in here
sylentz :
Im gonna have to post first, although your widely know for feeding
even your girlfriend laughs durin sex......no matter what shes readin
lol...nice line...4 the herbs...it means that he cant sex a woman good...
another forbidden sickness........damn its like youve got H.I.V
online so much, your street language changed to "lol, o i c"
aight....
fuck the rest?, this kid thinks he can be one of the best
hes that much of a retard......he even failed a fuckin iq test
ha ha....
your a hillbilly kid....so what the fuck you rappin for...
you bin married 3 times.and still have the same inlaws
lol....nice ....
this gucci cross dresser likes to eat drink and "be mary"..steppin out in high heels
he lit a match in his kitchen....blew his house...right off its own wheels
ha ha !....keepin with the hillbilly theme....
gucci :
Gucci takes the "piss still" just to show you aint on "something dope"-
Compare me to oral sex with a vice grip the "niceness" causes 'Crushing Blow's'-
aight.....
This kid is dreaming of success- forever like "Peter-Pan"-
He's just like the character cuz his punches 'never-never-land'-
This line is the most played line.....ever...period
Syl the balls in my spits, are more than what your whole crew measures-
I'll ground you then punch ur torso till I 'bury ur chest' like "lost treasures"-
nice wordplay...
Syc is a loner and he has no-one like a table of even numbers-
Cos this dudes circle of friends is smaller than neck holes in babys jumpers-
ha ha nice meta........
I'm destined to drop flavourous shit while this faker get 'dicked'-
Cos ur like "Hulk Hogan shirts".. u were just made to get 'ripped'
aight close....touch of s.g 1st line.....2nd line slightly played.....
vote : good drop by the pair of you.....but gucci lost this one when he decided to use played lines instead of being original....never ever use the "never-land" punch again....its worse than the micheal jacksons house name play....most of your verse was nice....but sylentz takes this on a all round hard hitting verse....with ORIGINAL concepts.....peace :thumbup:
Im gonna have to post first, although your widely know for feeding
even your girlfriend laughs durin sex......no matter what shes readin
i get it decent..donno why no1 else didnt get it
another forbidden sickness........damn its like youve got H.I.V
online so much, your street language changed to "lol, o i c"
witty nice
fuck the rest?, this kid thinks he can be one of the best
hes that much of a retard......he even failed a fuckin iq test
linez didnt conect and worded bad for last part
your a hillbilly kid....so what the fuck you rappin for...
you bin married 3 times.and still have the same inlaws
nice smart
this gucci cross dresser likes to eat drink and "be mary"..steppin out in high heels
he lit a match in his kitchen....blew his house...right off its own wheels
like the way you stuck wit the theme overall nice verse
Gucci takes the "piss still" just to show you aint on "something dope"-
Compare me to oral sex with a vice grip the "niceness" causes 'Crushing Blow's'-
nice complex opener
This kid is dreaming of success- forever like "Peter-Pan"-
He's just like the character cuz his punches 'never-never-land'-
played but atleast worded nice
Syl the balls in my spits, are more than what your whole crew measures-
I'll ground you then punch ur torso till I 'bury ur chest' like "lost treasures"-
good
Syc is a loner and he has no-one like a table of even numbers-
Cos this dudes circle of friends is smaller than neck holes in babys jumpers-
good
I'm destined to drop flavourous shit while this faker get 'dicked'-
Cos ur like "Hulk Hogan shirts".. u were just made to get 'ripped'-
nice good closer overall good verse
v/ Sylentz overall better an Gucci had 1 played line but actually gad a better closer but overall Sylentz wins
wack votez but upping ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Na man, they good votes. They vote because they get my punchlines.
up2
nah that lowlife guy said my verse was allgood, then said just that one bar was played, but worded nice, same about ur verse, but that urs didnt conenct, played > not connecting and rhyming
but caring its only a battle
uppppppppppppppp
Sylentz -
Im gonna have to post first, although your widely know for feeding
even your girlfriend laughs durin sex......no matter what shes readin
nice opener...lol
another forbidden sickness........damn its like youve got H.I.V
online so much, your street language changed to "lol, o i c"
good punch line..lol
fuck the rest?, this kid thinks he can be one of the best
hes that much of a retard......he even failed a fuckin iq test
lol...another good punch
your a hillbilly kid....so what the fuck you rappin for...
you bin married 3 times.and still have the same inlaws
lol a this line..tight punch
this gucci cross dresser likes to eat drink and "be mary"..steppin out in high heels
he lit a match in his kitchen....blew his house...right off its own wheels
dope closer..lol
Sylentz-dope verse...used original punches an wordplay...good vocab
Gucci^
Gucci takes the "piss still" just to show you aint on "something dope"-
Compare me to oral sex with a vice grip the "niceness" causes 'Crushing Blow's'-
ok opener..
This kid is dreaming of success- forever like "Peter-Pan"-
He's just like the character cuz his punches 'never-never-land'-
like this line..but played
Syl the balls in my spits, are more than what your whole crew measures-
I'll ground you then punch ur torso till I 'bury ur chest' like "lost treasures"-
ok punch...
Syc is a loner and he has no-one like a table of even numbers-
Cos this dudes circle of friends is smaller than neck holes in babys jumpers-
nice meta..
I'm destined to drop flavourous shit while this faker get 'dicked'-
Cos ur like "Hulk Hogan shirts".. u were just made to get 'ripped'-
dope closer..
wordplay-gucci..liked his wordplay..sylentz could of came harder in this
vocab-Sylentz...was feelin the words he used an how he rhymed em..
flow-Sylentz..was feelin his verse...had consistent flow
punches-Sylentz...came with more original punches...some of guccis punches were played
V/Sylentz...came harder wit the punches better flow an good vocab...both had a good battle
Sylentz had a more solid verse with more connecting punches because the concepts were more original. Gucci could've won and he had a good bar, but he just didn't follow through with the whole verse. Anyway, Sylentz had a pretty nice structure, with the excepttion of the last bar and good flow except for the "for/inlaws" line. Overall it was a good verse. Gucci, your verse had an okay structure, but I don't get the whole bold and italic thing, and the 'around' your 'wordplay' just doesn't make sense because it's like you're telling me I'm too stupid to understand your simple wordplay or whatever, so that took away points. Your concepts weren't too original either, but I liked the Peterpan one, that was your best bar.
v/Sylentz
nothing dope from either
but gucci came played..the never land line is
soooooooo played man..seen most of ur other shit
before..the neck line wasnt very good..opener was weird
hulk line was ight.not agreat verse
Sylentz , came with fresher concepts..although they werent
really hard hitting.then were aight, and one or two funny lines
u came better overall
vote Syl
Im gonna have to post first, although your widely know for feeding
even your girlfriend laughs durin sex......no matter what shes readin
fuck the rest?, this kid thinks he can be one of the best
hes that much of a retard......he even failed a fuckin iq test
Vs
I'm destined to drop flavourous shit while this faker get 'dicked'-
Cos ur like "Hulk Hogan shirts".. u were just made to get 'ripped'-
These were the lines that were good. Gucci, you had a decent verse and all of your punches were either pretty decent or just played. You didnt have a punch that made me laugh or be like..Ohhh...so yeah work on that. Sylentz, you had a decent verse. Opener was pretty good, gave me a chuckle, but other than that you had only one more punch that was good. Keep workin.
V/ Sylentz
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