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Good Luck Man.
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10 Lines
Due In 30 Minutes from check in..
Good Luck Man.
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Good Luck Foreshadow.
Check.
Good Luck Eclipse..
Eclipse please.. Your a broke bitch still sniffin powder
Damn I would fuck you but youve been on my dick for hours
You arent foreshadowing shit.. So take it for what its worth
I havent seen an eclipse in ages so your not affecting the earth
Your skill have decreased face it your inches from pathetic
I'm going to break your brittle ass and I dont care if your anarexic
I'll walk in circles around this clown with my cock in hand
I'm ready to cock back and bust this weak symbol of rap off the stand
Your not a man.. Your mearly a piece of shit that has a mouth
Eclipse your rhymes are as hardcore as Chingy and the whole DTP south
Your known more topical than text, its just what you do
Supposed to own SS, so how the fuck did Clipse make it farther than you?
You battling is askew, quadruple the compitition & you'll find the plateau
Cuz why only kill one, when i can destroy all of Fore's Shadows.
Turn on the fire kid, your best is yet to come so dont lay off
^But this is irrevelent, cuz how does a topical God not even make playoffs?
Those 6 are all I need in this one, but im forced to do 4 more
Cuz Fore's known to stay in the closet, and then trip outside the door.
Its obvious this kid knows who's better, and theres no debate
Clipse sealed your fate, cuz the only thing following him, is his shadow.
Good Luck.
damn he took this easy
Punches- ...Eclipse...
flow- ...Eclipse...
Structure- Tie
Mulites-Foreshadow
V)= ...Eclipse...
up..
up..
up...!!!!!
Na he didnt take it as easy as you make out
foreshadow - nice verse, some alright punches, jus mishit.
Eclipse please.. Your a broke bitch still sniffin powder
Damn I would fuck you but youve been on my dick for hours
You arent foreshadowing shit.. So take it for what its worth
I havent seen an eclipse in ages so your not affecting the earth
Vs
Your known more topical than text, its just what you do
Supposed to own SS, so how the fuck did Clipse make it farther than you?
You battling is askew, quadruple the compitition & you'll find the plateau
Cuz why only kill one, when i can destroy all of Fore's Shadows
Those 6 are all I need in this one, but im forced to do 4 more
Cuz Fore's known to stay in the closet, and then trip outside the door.
Its obvious this kid knows who's better, and theres no debate
Clipse sealed your fate, cuz the only thing following him, is his shadow
v/clipse
i can't vote but...
nothing
vs.
Your known more topical than text, its just what you do
Supposed to own SS, so how the fuck did Clipse make it farther than you?
You battling is askew, quadruple the compitition & you'll find the plateau
Cuz why only kill one, when i can destroy all of Fore's Shadows.
Turn on the fire kid, your best is yet to come so dont lay off
^But this is irrevelent, cuz how does a topical God not even make playoffs?
Those 6 are all I need in this one, but im forced to do 4 more
Cuz Fore's known to stay in the closet, and then trip outside the door.
eclipse had a nice verse.. except the closing... i wasn't feeling any of foreshadows
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=170648
Eclipse - 1
me - 0
this was an alright battle.
-foreshadow
Eclipse please.. Your a broke bitch still sniffin powder
Damn I would fuck you but youve been on my dick for hours
You arent foreshadowing shit.. So take it for what its worth
I havent seen an eclipse in ages so your not affecting the earth
^^your best punches.the rest was decent..
-eclipse
Your known more topical than text, its just what you do
Supposed to own SS, so how the fuck did Clipse make it farther than you?
You battling is askew, quadruple the compitition & you'll find the plateau
Cuz why only kill one, when i can destroy all of Fore's Shadows.
Turn on the fire kid, your best is yet to come so dont lay off
^But this is irrevelent, cuz how does a topical God not even make playoffs?
Those 6 are all I need in this one, but im forced to do 4 more
Cuz Fore's known to stay in the closet, and then trip outside the door.
^your best punches..
-Overall
this was a pretty decent battle...eclipse took this with more
harder hitting punches and was more cosistent...
v/eclipse
please hit up my battle with heartless its being slept on...
much appreciated...
i'm voting now.. this is V.C.
Aiight...
Foreshadow...
Eclipse please.. Your a broke bitch still sniffin powder
Damn I would fuck you but youve been on my dick for hours
Weak opener, punch wasnt hard hittin...
You arent foreshadowing shit.. So take it for what its worth
I havent seen an eclipse in ages so your not affecting the earth
Aiight wordplay, punch wasnt hard tho
Your skill have decreased face it your inches from pathetic
I'm going to break your brittle ass and I dont care if your anarexic
Weak
I'll walk in circles around this clown with my cock in hand
I'm ready to cock back and bust this weak symbol of rap off the stand
No
Your not a man.. Your mearly a piece of shit that has a mouth
Eclipse your rhymes are as hardcore as Chingy and the whole DTP south
Ehhh, Aiight i guess. OK closure.
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Eclipse...
Your known more topical than text, its just what you do
Supposed to own SS, so how the fuck did Clipse make it farther than you?
Aiight personal, opener be better then his...
You battling is askew, quadruple the compitition & you'll find the plateau
Cuz why only kill one, when i can destroy all of Fore's Shadows.
Aiight wordplay, good punch
Turn on the fire kid, your best is yet to come so dont lay off
^But this is irrevelent, cuz how does a topical God not even make playoffs?
Aiight punch again
Those 6 are all I need in this one, but im forced to do 4 more
Cuz Fore's known to stay in the closet, and then trip outside the door.
lol Aight
Its obvious this kid knows who's better, and theres no debate
Clipse sealed your fate, cuz the only thing following him, is his shadow.
No rhyme here but da punch was there, aiight closure.
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Aiight, Foreshadow u gotta up ya punchin and personals. Nuttin u threw really landed and if they did it wasnt hard hittin at all. Work at that. 'Clipse, ur punches was consistently hittin and ur personals be there, some nice wordplay too.
Vote - Clipse.
Good Luck Fellas. :thumbup:
Return da favor, links be in my sig.
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up..
up..
Lets Close this..
Drop Links.
Foreshadow..
Eclipse please.. Your a broke bitch still sniffin powder
Damn I would fuck you but youve been on my dick for hours
good opener..lol
You arent foreshadowing shit.. So take it for what its worth
I havent seen an eclipse in ages so your not affecting the earth
dope punch..
Your skill have decreased face it your inches from pathetic
I'm going to break your brittle ass and I dont care if your anarexic
ok line...
I'll walk in circles around this clown with my cock in hand
I'm ready to cock back and bust this weak symbol of rap off the stand
weak line..
Your not a man.. Your mearly a piece of shit that has a mouth
Eclipse your rhymes are as hardcore as Chingy and the whole DTP south
nice closer..
Eclipse...
Your known more topical than text, its just what you do
Supposed to own SS, so how the fuck did Clipse make it farther than you?
good opener..
You battling is askew, quadruple the compitition & you'll find the plateau
Cuz why only kill one, when i can destroy all of Fore's Shadows.
nice punch..
Turn on the fire kid, your best is yet to come so dont lay off
^But this is irrevelent, cuz how does a topical God not even make playoffs?
lol...good punch
Those 6 are all I need in this one, but im forced to do 4 more
Cuz Fore's known to stay in the closet, and then trip outside the door.
nice line...
Its obvious this kid knows who's better, and theres no debate
Clipse sealed your fate, cuz the only thing following him, is his shadow.
didnt rhyme...but good concept
flow-fore..consistent flow
punches-eclipse..hard hittin..
wordplay-eclipse
vocab-eclipse
V/Eclipse...good battle but eclipse came harder wit the punches an took this 1..
levv a vote on my battle...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=170395