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10 lines no crew votesyou spit first
aight cehcking in ima spit after this shit dawg
yeah man i check in and i spit after you all alright
hurry up and like spt already
ill pierce your throat with TAZERS and LAZERS
this idea of beating me is obserd like the election of SWARTZANAGGER
-1-
nah you dont RECKON that ill take you owt wit verbal SUPPRESSiON
teach you a LESSON with insane lyrical WEAPONS
-2-
imma DEViNE MASTERMiND with lyrics and ill DESiGNS
creating harmful ENZYMES through your vertabrae and SPiNE
-3-
i ANTiCiPATE your SHiT anaylze iT then DEFiCATE
i PENETRATE every line SPiT ur fame gets CONFiSCATED
-4-
brace yourself cuz im a genius iNSOMNiAC
doctors state you: D.O.A. with lyrical ANTRAX
-5-
Every BAR will SEE ME FAR, while I get on the mic and FREELY SCAR
I aint no EASY STAR you値l get burn like a CD-R
-6-
You get SMACKED in PHYSICAL CONTACT, while I spit MORTAL COMBAT
You ATTACK but I BOMB BACK with indivisible BOMB RAPS
-7-
Spit my VERBAL CONFESSION, cause emcees to remain in MANIC DEPRESSION
Step and you値l REGRET SON, when I spit my VOLCANIC AGGRESSION
-8-
This is your LAST MEAL , before I let the BERRETA PEEL
Man Of STEEL, ripping on thugs with INTERNET APPEAL
-9-
Ill DRAIN blood from ya VEINS im just that INSANE
Burning like ACID RAIN while I get on the mic and eat ur REMAINS
-10-
good luck no dickryding
spit dawg ya turn...........................................
yo this kid thinks he from the fucking hood
but look his rhyms are wack and iant no good
how about you just pick yourself up and quite trying to rap find yourself a new hobby
not even a gangsta he just poor he wears signascking for money from people in a lobby
look at this kids pic what he think he some type a fucking superhero
really this kid got nothing the only fucking thing really he just a zero
striaght up his ryhmes wack his mom on crack this kid got merked
he goes home everday to watch gay porn and give him self a jerk
well look he thinks he tough saying thug life and packing his toy gat
his gun is fake really this battle over done its fucking checkmate
ill pierce your throat with TAZERS and LAZERS
this idea of beating me is obserd like the election of SWARTZANAGGER
nah 1st line is just filler, 2nd is weak
nah you dont RECKON that ill take you owt wit verbal SUPPRESSiON
teach you a LESSON with insane lyrical WEAPONS
sallgood flow & multie no real punch tho
imma DEViNE MASTERMiND with lyrics and ill DESiGNS
creating harmful ENZYMES through your vertabrae and SPiNE
again nice flow & multies no real punch tho
i ANTiCiPATE your SHiT anaylze iT then DEFiCATE
i PENETRATE every line SPiT ur fame gets CONFiSCATED
no
brace yourself cuz im a genius iNSOMNiAC
doctors state you: D.O.A. with lyrical ANTRAX
not bad heard linez like that before
Every BAR will SEE ME FAR, while I get on the mic and FREELY SCAR
I aint no EASY STAR you値l get burn like a CD-R
lol 2nd line was ok, needs rewording thp
You get SMACKED in PHYSICAL CONTACT, while I spit MORTAL COMBAT
You ATTACK but I BOMB BACK with indivisible BOMB RAPS
even tho this wasent a punch i liked it
Spit my VERBAL CONFESSION, cause emcees to remain in MANIC DEPRESSION
Step and you値l REGRET SON, when I spit my VOLCANIC AGGRESSION
naw not really
This is your LAST MEAL , before I let the BERRETA PEEL
Man Of STEEL, ripping on thugs with INTERNET APPEAL
decent
Ill DRAIN blood from ya VEINS im just that INSANE
Burning like ACID RAIN while I get on the mic and eat ur REMAINS
softish closer
yo this kid thinks he from the fucking hood
but look his rhyms are wack and iant no good
wack
how about you just pick yourself up and quite trying to rap find yourself a new hobby
not even a gangsta he just poor he wears signascking for money from people in a lobby
2 stretched.. wack
look at this kids pic what he think he some type a fucking superhero
really this kid got nothing the only fucking thing really he just a zero
wack as fuck
striaght up his ryhmes wack his mom on crack this kid got merked
he goes home everday to watch gay porn and give him self a jerk
lol
well look he thinks he tough saying thug life and packing his toy gat
his gun is fake really this battle over done its fucking checkmate
meh
fury dropped alot more linez, but even if he didnt still would have won, J learn to use punches, and dont be so wack..
Fury just keep that kinda shit coming nice multes,flow,dissing now just work on ur structure,layout.. and working those hard hitting punches and personals into ur multies and flow, with a good structure at the same time..
ight
v/fury
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Uppin Numba 3 Cmon Yall Dont Sleep On This Ill Return The Flava Fav
i would have to go with eva; cuz his flow was tight and easy as hell to read i like the way you set it up dog keep doing you do..
A CAN YOU HIT MY BATTLE UP AND DROP A FAIR VOTE??
IT STANDS ON THE FIRST PAGE OF FRONT LINES TITLED TRE-POUND VERSES M16 THANK YOU PEACE
Eval fury..
ill pierce your throat with TAZERS and LAZERS
this idea of beating me is obserd like the election of SWARTZANAGGER
ok opener
nah you dont RECKON that ill take you owt wit verbal SUPPRESSiON
teach you a LESSON with insane lyrical WEAPONS
nice multi but no punch..
imma DEViNE MASTERMiND with lyrics and ill DESiGNS
creating harmful ENZYMES through your vertabrae and SPiNE
another nice multi but no punch..
i ANTiCiPATE your SHiT anaylze iT then DEFiCATE
i PENETRATE every line SPiT ur fame gets CONFiSCATED
no...not a good line
brace yourself cuz im a genius iNSOMNiAC
doctors state you: D.O.A. with lyrical ANTRAX
kinda played but ok line
Every BAR will SEE ME FAR, while I get on the mic and FREELY SCAR
I aint no EASY STAR you値l get burn like a CD-R
nice multis..ok punch
You get SMACKED in PHYSICAL CONTACT, while I spit MORTAL COMBAT
You ATTACK but I BOMB BACK with indivisible BOMB RAPS
liked this..nice multi
Spit my VERBAL CONFESSION, cause emcees to remain in MANIC DEPRESSION
Step and you値l REGRET SON, when I spit my VOLCANIC AGGRESSION
nice multi but no real punch
This is your LAST MEAL , before I let the BERRETA PEEL
Man Of STEEL, ripping on thugs with INTERNET APPEAL
ok line..
Ill DRAIN blood from ya VEINS im just that INSANE
Burning like ACID RAIN while I get on the mic and eat ur REMAINS
ok closer..
Silent J..
yo this kid thinks he from the fucking hood
but look his rhyms are wack and iant no good
sucky opener..
how about you just pick yourself up and quite trying to rap find yourself a new hobby
not even a gangsta he just poor he wears signascking for money from people in a lobby
weak...stretched
look at this kids pic what he think he some type a fucking superhero
really this kid got nothing the only fucking thing really he just a zero
wack
striaght up his ryhmes wack his mom on crack this kid got merked
he goes home everday to watch gay porn and give him self a jerk
lol..good line
well look he thinks he tough saying thug life and packing his toy gat
his gun is fake really this battle over done its fucking checkmate
weak closer..
flow-Eval
punches-Eval
vocab-Eval
wordplay-Eval
V/Eval...eval def took this...he came harder an wit better concepts..he coulda spit less an still beat Silent
Silent work on ur punches..keep elevatin
oh an can u drop a vote on my battle...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=170395
thnkx can someone close this please
Bump!
Sorry, dude...the system ain't set up for KO...
Ya gonna need those last two votes if you want the win.
uppin numba 444444444444444444
its waz aight but ur rythms were 2 basic yal got no imagination
im sry but eval fury was pretty good this battle good flow and structure plus ook not very good but ok punches a lil personals but dawg you need more multis and metas overall good verse but ELEVATE!!
yo silent jay good verse to flow and stucture was good punches....you fell a lil short it was all there but you gotta come just a little bit harder next time aiight both you guys needa ELEVATE
but! overall both good you guyz are pretty tight but can still elevate i wish i coudl give a vote to both of you guys but only 1 and that is
eval fury for comin juss a lil harder aiight overallgood verse to homie
v/eval
word this battle was pretty close... both had some ok linez.. but for me eval fury had more harder and complex punches.. silent J. u just came to basic and simple man...
that wat ur spit mostly lacked.. o and silent J ya structure was a bit off, ur linez werent done properly.. which made ur flow sound gay.. no1 really had any strong personals.. eval had a few wordplay... abd multies... but nothing really aye..
overall vote would have to go to eval for coming harder and being more consistant...
v/eval