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No bullshit votes i dont even need to go into that
Check in by tomorrow morning
verse due by 8 pm ET
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10 - 16 lines
No bullshit votes i dont even need to go into that
Check in by tomorrow morning
verse due by 8 pm ET
Checkin in dont be late
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ok frist i jus like do say a lil somthin about this nigga, frist of all he frontin...
talk shit but he aint nothin, na nigga ill cant kill me wit that, an i wouldnt care if it was a iron ored bat... but i have much more then u wen it comes to beef, a whole list of them, its posted up wit the cheif of police.... so is the wildest chases, also a few double homasides that involed shoe laces... but lets get back to ur supliy of honeys, it reminds me of how low u r wen it comes to money... i would love to c u bcome somthin wit ur life,so i could take it all away wit the respect of a knife...the fact of it up to ur head willin to take ur life... now im not tryin to say i need or im lookin respect... but if i wen i c those lines u rite it makes me feel like u a animal an im ready to diesect.. this wat i said an this is wat i always will have to do, at frist i thought u knew, but now ill address it to u.. u fuck wit me or write a bad rhyme, then u will fo' sho b done wit... cuz it all comes to gether in time... an u'll get whiped worse then a nigga in the 18 hundreds
shit.. wen did u write that do u want it today or tomorrow?
o well i miss read so jus put urs in as soon as u c... ill send u a message if u dont c this frist
aahh o well its there already nothin i can do
ahh but i geuss early is better then late
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Originally Posted by PROductZ
hey my bad my bad my aunt got in a car accident today i ll have my verse up in a lil bit...
Newbie productz tried to own me in cypher with a wack rhyme
Hes nervous and breakin down, like a honkie smokin crack lines
He blabs and blabs about homos and who sucks dick
But his rhymes useless like Harry Potter without his magic stick
Rip him quick - or he could rip a vet quote
But in newbie fashion your biting still wouldnt get you a vote
Multiply up RB and wack MCs and your products still woudlnt be as wack as he
Disagree? Then d/r with a verse that doesnt even take offense to me
And then we'll see, you run back to cypher cuz 0-1 you ll be
Cop an admin a plea, before you experience this sappin plight
Cuz you come pretty weak for a guy who likes to "rap and fight" (check the profile)
Hed hurryed up - he couldnt get his ghostwriter guard locked
Knock on wood, cuz your zero losses about to be "HardKnocked" (^)
Uppin for votes people
good luck guy
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Zeal, nice opener...
Newbie productz tried to own me in cypher with a wack rhyme
Hes nervous and breakin down, like a honkie smokin crack lines
He blabs and blabs about homos and who sucks dick
But his rhymes useless like Harry Potter without his magic stick
those four lines right there got products whole verse..
products..
then u will fo' sho b done wit... cuz it all comes to gether in time... an u'll get whiped worse then a nigga in the 18 hundreds
not bad...
products sorda talked about himself more then getting punches in and zeal had nice similes and some funny punches
sooo my vote will have to goto Zeal
(i dont know if it will allow my vote but im a newbie...but i jus tell it how it is)
ps.. vote on my battle with kontext
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Originally Posted by K /\/ I \/ E S
^yeah if you reach that 100posts before this battle is over come back anbd vote
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Zeal... you easily took this... you had real good wordplay and your punches and structure were overall better than his-i dont even think he had a punch-but nevertheless you win.HIT UP MY BATTLE IN MY SIG.
v/Zeal
productz, just elevate. first work on your structure.pz
products. i think ur structure was hard to read and ur flow was to static. u had sum punches in ur verse but not many. i think u should work on elevating ur punches, using more personals and not veering off track.
zeal. ur structure was good. ur lyrical flow was steady and i liked ur punches. only thing i would say is come harder with them
overall vote goes 2 zeal
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Come on people only a few more votes dont sit on this
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blah cant i just get a couple of votes on this battle people honestly
hit this battle up and drop a link and i ll hit yours up
blah not enough people on rb vote enough
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Originally Posted by Zeal
^Honestly people this is sad, if you want votes for your battles just vote for this one is it really that much to ask.
Ight battle product has to work more on his stucture it really doesnt wanna make you read his verse because its setup like a book or something but it was a bit simple of a flow with a couple played lines in it also Zeal came ight alos i fwlt comming more witty with a better flow and a harder set of punches to go with it
vote...........zeal
RTF
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=170013
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products- just keep practiceing pretty decent tho just work harder on punches
zeal- easy win for you had sum good punches in there ncie job keep it up
so as you can tell
v/zeal
word to everyone who has dropped feed in here
Zeal - came hard an worked out for ya....you just got this everythin you did was better then products good job man :thumbup: the thing that you really kicked prods. ass with was structure....
Prod - come harder next time ( elevate ) work on everythin....just straight up elevate....wasn't feelin really nothin you spit.....
vote - Zeal