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Aight Look..
Got the cash in the Ford, Sir Loins bashin this whore
battle me why?
Cause it ain't gonna give Ther-mo-stats on this board
ya dumbfuck, my punches pump like I'm stickin a slut
you got KO'd by Lyric, so now I'm just pickin you up
blast'n roast his words, broke ya throat & ruined spits
his punches are even gassed up, but only a fuel hit....
fool, cause my flows so strong it's used as a damper
only Dirty Jerz you've seen, is the one in ya hamper
don't front, you only take lyrics, it's fuckin theft
leave your rep like a room full of right handers...
......................................NOTHIN LEFT!!!
iight..whos this kid?
yo...this kids a dive remember?...word boys fake...
...cuz his bars.. come as tender as sir loins stakes
uz'a suck up, the type that would become feebles bitch...
so u stepped up, & choked on the dick like the eagles did
gitcha beagles kid, u need d/r's & an accessor kit...
well fuck it, heres a voting ring and neckless bitch
his personal life sucks, but shit u know I'm glad to exort'um...
his integrity's flush down the tubes, since'is girl had an abortion
I'll stab at supportin, look, kids are touched by dude...
...but when they feel his lines this fuck gets sued
blah
these where both extremely wack...i would expect more form you 2
SIR...you won this only by one line....everythign was basic...i can tell that you are not that good at freestyling a verse..........you closer was wack ass fuck...that is so fucking played....you first line not only sucked but it was sorry as hell and stupid....your second line..the line which oyu played off his name..that was what got you this win...everything else was feither played as fuck or was just plain out stupid...
all in all..i do not see how you got your record..elevate..that all i can say
STATS.....once i saw his verse i thoguht you had this for sure but..you came even wacker.......if oyu read his sig earlier....playing offf his name is already played.....and you attempted to play off his name anyways.....you shoudl have thoght of somehting new to say when you played off his name....you knwo how many times he has probably heard that.........
everything else was just pretty wack..i see mad potiential in oyu....
all in all......if oyu would had 1..i rpeat 1 nice bar you would have took this battle with ease..but you failed to do so...for that you loose...
vote=SIR..
i onyl have 60 post so i cant vote...this is just feedbackk
no hate..just honest feedback.............RETURN THE FAVOR......in my sig
^ lol... i just read that battle n ur sig and u suck. so im not going to vote.
upp, nice battle loin
battle me then if i suck.......right now.....30 minute verse..10 lines...
uppin for you guys......
lol omg a battle startin in a battle
Both ur verses were kinda dull
It was close but I think Thermo had more punches in his than Sir
Like the part when he said his lines were like steak or sumthing was nice
and sir's verse doesnt even deserve asecond look
Vote Thermo stat
Upps...
Loin :
Got the cash in the Ford, Sir Loins bashin this whore
battle me why?
Cause it ain't gonna give Ther-mo-stats on this board
1st line S.G......punch was wack.......
ya dumbfuck, my punches pump like I'm stickin a slut
you got KO'd by Lyric, so now I'm just pickin you up
nice 2nd....1st SG........
blast'n roast his words, broke ya throat & ruined spits
his punches are even gassed up, but only a fuel hit....
nice wordplay.....
fool, cause my flows so strong it's used as a damper
only Dirty Jerz you've seen, is the one in ya hamper
1st line SG....2nd aight
don't front, you only take lyrics, it's fuckin theft
leave your rep like a room full of right handers...
......................................NOTHIN LEFT!!!
aight....bit played though.....
chill with the SG dawg....it doesnt wash :nono: over-all though.....nice verse
thermo :
yo...this kids a dive remember?...word boys fake...
...cuz his bars.. come as tender as sir loins stakes
nice internal....punch was aight
uz'a suck up, the type that would become feebles bitch...
so u stepped up, & choked on the dick like the eagles did
eagles = choked......played already....too many peopl usin' it
gitcha beagles kid, u need d/r's & an accessor kit...
well fuck it, heres a voting ring and neckless bitch
nice wordplay........
his personal life sucks, but shit u know I'm glad to exort'um...
his integrity's flush down the tubes, since'is girl had an abortion
integrity was a bad word to use....nice concept...that word wrecked it
I'll stab at supportin, look, kids are touched by dude...
...but when they feel his lines this fuck gets sued
nah.........
nice wordplay....punchs were good....nice drop....
VERDICT : both had nice drops.....thermo took it though......his wordplay was nice....loin used WAY to much SG dawg....you need to stop that...
my vote : thermo stats
p.s.....i expect some feedback on the two links in my sig.....
me vs str8upchillen
me vs dayoungsta
peace
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Breakdown-
Sir
Got the cash in the Ford, Sir Loins bashin this whore
battle me why?
Cause it ain't gonna give Ther-mo-stats on this board
tried to come w/ a nice rhyme scheme, but punch was weak.
ya dumbfuck, my punches pump like I'm stickin a slut
you got KO'd by Lyric, so now I'm just pickin you up
didnt like set-up...punch was not hard
blast'n roast his words, broke ya throat & ruined spits
his punches are even gassed up, but only a fuel hit....
Yes! Good, Good, Good,
fool, cause my flows so strong it's used as a damper
only Dirty Jerz you've seen, is the one in ya hamper
Cool Personal, U'r Making up for a wack start
don't front, you only take lyrics, it's fuckin theft
leave your rep like a room full of right handers...
......................................NOTHIN LEFT!!!
Nope, didnt like it
Overall you had too many wack lines that shadowed over your good punches.
Work Hard'r.
Thermo
yo...this kids a dive remember?...word boys fake...
...cuz his bars.. come as tender as sir loins stakes
played, but a punch
uz'a suck up, the type that would become feebles bitch...
so u stepped up, & choked on the dick like the eagles did
superbowl punches need to be better, and fucka feeble... who cares
gitcha beagles kid, u need d/r's & an accessor kit...
well fuck it, heres a voting ring and neckless bitch
ok, decent concept
his personal life sucks, but shit u know I'm glad to exort'um...
his integrity's flush down the tubes, since'is girl had an abortion
I don't know, not a real personal... this is a useless bar in my opinion
I'll stab at supportin, look, kids are touched by dude...
...but when they feel his lines this fuck gets sued
good rhyme, soft punch
Overall Both could have deleted there wack shit, and wrote Fuck you alot, and this woulda been a better battle,
V/ Thermo for not droppin as wack,
Please Hit up my Link @ the Top.
sir
well u had a nice flow but ur punches were off beat
you had potential but you shot urself whuile you were down with...
fool, cause my flows so strong it's used as a damper
only Dirty Jerz you've seen, is the one in ya hamper
wtf
ur spit was kinda full with self glorafaction you coulda won if you let the punchs punch and not tell every one how good u are with flow and shit
work it up and elvate =)
thermo
ur opener was off but the eagles thing was dope except for i was rooting for them
you had good flow and not great but good punches at him ur structrue was good and overall i liked it
vote-thremo
plese return favor in sig
i will love yu
uppn.
Got the cash in the Ford, Sir Loins bashin this whore
battle me why?
Cause it ain't gonna give Ther-mo-stats on this board
no
ya dumbfuck, my punches pump like I'm stickin a slut
you got KO'd by Lyric, so now I'm just pickin you up
ok
blast'n roast his words, broke ya throat & ruined spits
his punches are even gassed up, but only a fuel hit....
harhar
fool, cause my flows so strong it's used as a damper
only Dirty Jerz you've seen, is the one in ya hamper
no
don't front, you only take lyrics, it's fuckin theft
leave your rep like a room full of right handers...
decent closer
The way u talked about my verse u were a vet, this was half decent i could say, some of ur linez were aight, but didnt really get into it really...
6.5/10
yo...this kids a dive remember?...word boys fake...
...cuz his bars.. come as tender as sir loins stakes
naw
uz'a suck up, the type that would become feebles bitch...
so u stepped up, & choked on the dick like the eagles did
haha alright
gitcha beagles kid, u need d/r's & an accessor kit...
well fuck it, heres a voting ring and neckless bitch
lol
his personal life sucks, but shit u know I'm glad to exort'um...
his integrity's flush down the tubes, since'is girl had an abortion
lol harsh
I'll stab at supportin, look, kids are touched by dude...
...but when they feel his lines this fuck gets sued
alrightish closer
Ok umm ur verse was half decent not really any hot hot shit, hmm close battle ima have to give it to thermo.. just came better with the flow & punches..
v/thermo
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Uppin this for a 2nd
werd....2
Originally posted by:Sir Loin
Got the cash in the Ford, Sir Loins bashin this whore
battle me why?
Cause it ain't gonna give Ther-mo-stats on this board
^^1ST LINE WAS S.G....2ND LINE WAS AIGHT USAGE OF NAMEPLAY
ya dumbfuck, my punches pump like I'm stickin a slut
you got KO'd by Lyric, so now I'm just pickin you up
^^MOSTLY S.G....BUT OK PERSONAL
blast'n roast his words, broke ya throat & ruined spits
his punches are even gassed up, but only a fuel hit....
^^NICE
fool, cause my flows so strong it's used as a damper
only Dirty Jerz you've seen, is the one in ya hamper
^^MEH ON THE PERSONAL
don't front, you only take lyrics, it's fuckin theft
leave your rep like a room full of right handers...
^^THIS WAS A NICE CLOSER.....
Originally posted by:Thermo Stats
yo...this kids a dive remember?...word boys fake...
...cuz his bars.. come as tender as sir loins stakes
^^OK OPENER.......USAGE OF THE NAMEPLAY WAS NICE..ASWELL
uz'a suck up, the type that would become feebles bitch...
so u stepped up, & choked on the dick like the eagles did
^^OK PUNCH
gitcha beagles kid, u need d/r's & an accessor kit...
well fuck it, heres a voting ring and neckless bitch
^^OK
his personal life sucks, but shit u know I'm glad to exort'um...
his integrity's flush down the tubes, since'is girl had an abortion
^^NOPE
I'll stab at supportin, look, kids are touched by dude...
...but when they feel his lines this fuck gets sued
^^AIGHT CLOSER
V/Thermo stats
for comin more creative wit his bar's and punches.........pz....